Bin piye hum jaye behak

by nandbahu on November 30, 2012, 06:38:24 AM
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Unki aankho ki vo chamak
Chehre ki kantimay damak

Payal ki meethi si jhanak
Chooriyo ki madhosh khanak

Kanchan si kaya ki mehak
Beni mein gajre ki dhamak

Hassi yar ki aisee madak
Bin piye hum jaye behak

Jag mein bana na koi roopak
Aisee chhavi hai unki mohak
 
Utari dil mein unki moorat
Bana nand ab unka sammohak

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«Reply #1 on: November 30, 2012, 06:55:32 AM »
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waah waah bahut sunder
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Quote from: sksaini4 on November 30, 2012, 06:55:32 AM
waah waah bahut sunder
thanx saini ji
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very nice
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Bahut accha likha hai nandbahu jee
aaj ka andaaz bahut pyara laga.
aise hi likhe
Hassi yar ki aisee madak
Bin piye hum jaye behak  Applause
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«Reply #7 on: November 30, 2012, 12:44:17 PM »
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very nice
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Bahut accha likha hai nandbahu jee
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aise hi likhe
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Bin piye hum jaye behak  Applause


thanx mkv ji bas aap jaise umda kavi se prena milti hai
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