Bin pyaar koi shayar nahi dekhaaa~ Abhi

by AbhiTamrakar on October 04, 2010, 09:34:15 AM
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«Reply #15 on: October 05, 2010, 02:22:19 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on October 04, 2010, 02:11:19 PM
Khwaish Dost bahaut bahaut khoob..Maza aya parr kar.. Applause Applause

Bahut bahut Shukriya Bhai Rahim!!! icon_flower
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«Reply #16 on: October 05, 2010, 02:24:18 PM »
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MAza aagaya padhke abhi ji.... Applause Applause Applause
padha to kai bar par aap jante ho aapko formal replies nahin de sakti main..isly kuch likha tabhi hi reply de rahi hun...
sorry late ho gai iss chakar me...lijiye suniye....

Samandar me mil jate hain moti kai baar magar
Mil jaye kisi moti me pura samandar aisa nahin dekha

Gagan to hai taaron se bhara hua aur chamakte hain sabhi hi
Dharti pe rehke chamke koi sitara aisa nahin dekha

Husne ki adaaon pe maan mit jate hain deewane kai
Lekin koi bach k nikla jaye unse aisa deewana nahin dekha

Likhte to sabhi hain apne dil k jazbaaton ko gazal kehke
Koi saadgi se keh jaye apni har baat aisa nahin dekha

Shayron ki iss mehfil me jis trah tune apni jagah banai hai *abhi*
Koi iss tarah apna sikka sabke dilon pe jama jaye aisa nahin dekha…!!!


Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on October 04, 2010, 09:34:15 AM
Bazm me shaamil sabhi BHANVARO'N or sabhi KALIYO'N ko "Abhi" ka adaab, namaskar, sat-sri-akal......

yaaron...husna walon par to hazar nagme, gazale or shayari bas unki tareef me hi likh diye gaye, tareef sachi bhi hui or jhutii bhi...gahe bagaaahe ham bhi usi laye me beh gaye or kuchh naye cheeze nikalkar saamne aayi..unhi me se ek aap sab ke saamne pesh hee..Alag bat ye he ki ye na to tareef he na dard ka fasana...
na poora sach hi hee na poora jhuutt..ummeed he achha lagega~


haseeno'n ke saamne to behek jati he khud sharab mere dost
bin deedaar behek gaya koi deewana nahi dekhaaaa

khuda bachaye in haseen sharo'n se nazar ke
bin toote reh gaya koi dil bechara nahi dekhaaaa

husna to adayen bikherta he ashiqo'n ko jalane ke liye
bin shamma jal gayaa koi parwanaa nahi dekhaaaa

yun to bin taron ka amber dekha he mene "Abhi"
bin pyaar ban gaya koi shayar nahi dekhaaaa

kahaniyan ishq ki kai huyi shuru or khatm huyi isi bazm me akar
bin kagaz ban gaya koi afsanaaa nahi dekhaaaa
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«Reply #17 on: October 05, 2010, 02:26:52 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 05, 2010, 02:24:18 PM
MAza aagaya padhke abhi ji.... Applause Applause Applause
padha to kai bar par aap jante ho aapko formal replies nahin de sakti main..isly kuch likha tabhi hi reply de rahi hun...
sorry late ho gai iss chakar me...lijiye suniye....

Samandar me mil jate hain moti kai baar magar
Mil jaye kisi moti me pura samandar aisa nahin dekha

Gagan to hai taaron se bhara hua aur chamakte hain sabhi hi
Dharti pe rehke chamke koi sitara aisa nahin dekha

Husne ki adaaon pe maan mit jate hain deewane kai
Lekin koi bach k nikla jaye unse aisa deewana nahin dekha

Likhte to sabhi hain apne dil k jazbaaton ko gazal kehke
Koi saadgi se keh jaye apni har baat aisa nahin dekha

Shayron ki iss mehfil me jis trah tune apni jagah banai hai *abhi*
Koi iss tarah apna sikka sabke dilon pe jama jaye aisa nahin dekha…!!!



bahut bahut Khoob Anuji..

Aakhri Do Sher to Lajawaab hai!!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #18 on: October 06, 2010, 06:14:56 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 05, 2010, 02:24:18 PM
MAza aagaya padhke abhi ji.... Applause Applause Applause
padha to kai bar par aap jante ho aapko formal replies nahin de sakti main..isly kuch likha tabhi hi reply de rahi hun...
sorry late ho gai iss chakar me...lijiye suniye....

Samandar me mil jate hain moti kai baar magar
Mil jaye kisi moti me pura samandar aisa nahin dekha

Gagan to hai taaron se bhara hua aur chamakte hain sabhi hi
Dharti pe rehke chamke koi sitara aisa nahin dekha

Husne ki adaaon pe maan mit jate hain deewane kai
Lekin koi bach k nikla jaye unse aisa deewana nahin dekha

Likhte to sabhi hain apne dil k jazbaaton ko gazal kehke
Koi saadgi se keh jaye apni har baat aisa nahin dekha

Shayron ki iss mehfil me jis trah tune apni jagah banai hai *abhi*
Koi iss tarah apna sikka sabke dilon pe jama jaye aisa nahin dekha…!!!



anu jiii sabse pehle to bahut khoob likha he apne ...bahut badhiya reply diya maja aa gaya..

bas ek shikayat he aap mante nahi naa!! me kuchh nahi hun mujhe kyun ped par itna uncha chada rahe hoo giruga to bahut dard hogaaaa~ sachchiii~
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«Reply #19 on: October 06, 2010, 06:25:00 AM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on October 06, 2010, 06:14:56 AM
anu jiii sabse pehle to bahut khoob likha he apne ...bahut badhiya reply diya maja aa gaya..

bas ek shikayat he aap mante nahi naa!! me kuchh nahi hun mujhe kyun ped par itna uncha chada rahe hoo giruga to bahut dard hogaaaa~ sachchiii~


dekho dekho maoin pehle hi dr rahi thi k tum daantoge aur dekho dant diya na tumne....abhi kya karun kitne din se nahin likha tha na tumhare liye to bas likhti chali gai..ab tum ho hi aise k chane k jhaad pe chadhana achcha lagta hai mujhe...to kyun tnsn lete ho nahin girne denge apko....
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«Reply #20 on: October 06, 2010, 06:58:53 AM »
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Bohat Achhey Janaab Abhi Sahab.
Aur Aap Logon Ko Pata Hai Chane Ka
Jhar Hota Kitna Hai..hahahaha

Shad o Aabad Rahen...

Yaash.
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«Reply #21 on: October 06, 2010, 07:05:42 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 06, 2010, 06:25:00 AM
dekho dekho maoin pehle hi dr rahi thi k tum daantoge aur dekho dant diya na tumne....abhi kya karun kitne din se nahin likha tha na tumhare liye to bas likhti chali gai..ab tum ho hi aise k chane k jhaad pe chadhana achcha lagta hai mujhe...to kyun tnsn lete ho nahin girne denge apko....
are yar chane ke jhad par chadate to koi gam nhai aap to khajoor par chadaye ja rahe hoo~
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«Reply #22 on: October 06, 2010, 07:06:47 AM »
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Quote from: Yaash on October 06, 2010, 06:58:53 AM
Bohat Achhey Janaab Abhi Sahab.
Aur Aap Logon Ko Pata Hai Chane Ka
Jhar Hota Kitna Hai..hahahaha

Shad o Aabad Rahen...

Yaash.

shukriya yaash jiii...hosla badhane ka..
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«Reply #23 on: October 09, 2010, 09:54:23 AM »
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VERY NICE
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«Reply #24 on: October 11, 2010, 06:46:37 AM »
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shukriya muzammil sahab~
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