Chah ko chahiye aik hi asar hone tak.....Abulasad:Shayari -e- Husn

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_{Ye Mirza Ghalib ka mashoor kalaam "aah ko chahiye aik umr asr hone tak"
se inspire hokar likhi gayi hai, mera koi muqhabla nahin Ustad Ghalib se
magar musalsal koshish hai ke kuch unjaise purasrar ashar likhon...
ye meri koshish ahle-bazm ki zer-e nazr.}

Chah ko chahiye aik hi nazr asr hone tak

Chah ko chahiye aik hi nazar asar hone tak
Kaun jeeta hai teri palkhen uthne tak

Meri aahen aatish aur sanse bekhaboo
Dil ko kaise behlaon tera jalwa hone tak

Josh jaatae hain mere tere aane tak
Phir hosh nahin aata tere jaane tak

Teghen tez hoti hain zamane ki ‘Abul’
Kaat-ti hain sa’anse teri nazar milne tak
Abul Asad

Meanings of difficult words

Chah : like, liking
Chahiye: wanting, needed
Palken: eyelids
Aahen: Sighs, deep sighs
Jalwa: sight of a face
Josh: passions, zeal, lust, enthusiasm
Hosh: life, breath
Tegh: sword, dagger, knife
Tez: sharp, sharpen


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Re: Chah ko chahiye aik hi asar hone tak.....Abulasad

«Reply #1 on: January 11, 2013, 04:01:54 PM »

Very nice and kaabeile taareef..
Akhir ashaar thora kamzor nazar aaya, baaki sabhi la-jaawaab hain.


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Re: Chah ko chahiye aik hi asar hone tak.....Abulasad

«Reply #2 on: January 11, 2013, 07:18:32 PM »

Quote from: CIC on January 11, 2013, 04:01:54 PM

Very nice and kaabeile taareef..
Akhir ashaar thora kamzor nazar aaya, baaki sabhi la-jaawaab hain.

Shukriya sir,

Aapki baat bilkul durust hai,
aakhri ashar waqaye thoda sa beemar hai
aajkal sardi ka mausam hai, thand si lag gayi hai ussey.
Magar baat aapki wazey hai.


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Re: Chah ko chahiye aik hi asar hone tak.....Abulasad

«Reply #3 on: January 12, 2013, 02:00:00 AM »

very nice


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«Reply #4 on: January 12, 2013, 02:28:13 AM »

very nice


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«Reply #5 on: January 12, 2013, 02:28:46 AM »

nice


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Re: Chah ko chahiye aik hi asar hone tak.....Abulasad

«Reply #6 on: January 12, 2013, 02:49:24 AM »

Quote from: Abul Asad on January 11, 2013, 12:06:40 PM

abulasad sb aapki koshish ke liye mubarakbaad,

lekin aapne to poora misra hi badal kar rakh diya wo misra hai.

aah ko chahiye ek umr asar hone tak.

aur qafia hai asar nazar,sar, khabar.

jo shayad aapne dhayan hi nahi diya. ghazal men teen chizoN ka dhiyan rakhe behr rawani aur radeef , qafia ..


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Re: Chah ko chahiye aik hi asar hone tak.....Abulasad

«Reply #7 on: January 12, 2013, 03:54:55 AM »

Quote from: nandbahu on January 12, 2013, 02:00:00 AM

very nice

Shukriya Sahab


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Re: Chah ko chahiye aik hi asar hone tak.....Abulasad

«Reply #8 on: January 12, 2013, 03:55:20 AM »

Quote from: prashad on January 12, 2013, 02:28:13 AM

very nice

Prashad ji shukriya


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Re: Chah ko chahiye aik hi asar hone tak.....Abulasad

«Reply #9 on: January 12, 2013, 03:59:31 AM »

Quote from: Aarish on January 12, 2013, 02:49:24 AM

Aarish ji,

Sabse pehle aapka shukriya ke itna waqt nikal kar
aapne ye adna kalam par zer e nazr ki.
Ji mujhe Ghalib sahab ka original misra bakhoobi yaad hai
gar aap dekhenge mere kalaam ki ibtedai write-up men to yeh
maujood hai. Main ne ussi se inspire hokar isse likha hai.

Gar aap isse apne aapme aik nai kalaam ki raushini men dekhenge
to aapko shayed thoda farq mehsoos hoga.Ghalib sahab ke misron ke Kaafiya aur they, mere kaafiye aur hain.


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«Reply #10 on: January 12, 2013, 06:37:24 AM »

bahut bahut khoob


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Re: Chah ko chahiye aik hi asar hone tak.....Abulasad

«Reply #11 on: January 12, 2013, 08:27:25 AM »

Quote from: aqsh on January 12, 2013, 06:37:24 AM

bahut bahut khoob

Aqsh saheb
Shukriya bahut aapka


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«Reply #12 on: January 12, 2013, 10:22:15 AM »

bahut khoob


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