Chaloo Unhe bhi Apne ...

by abdulqadeer on December 25, 2008, 05:22:17 AM
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Chaloo unhe bhi apne hosle bata den !!
Patharoon ke shaher me shishe ka ghar bana den !!

Sahiloon pe kya jina dar dar ke !!
Chaloo kissi din samadaroon me panha len !!

Uske Shaher me Sans Lena mushkil hai agar !!
Chaloo fir koi naya shaher basa len !!

Anderoon me dar lagne laga hai  agar  !!
Chaloo fir  suraj ko apna pata den !!

Jo kahete hain hum ne bewfa-e ki hai !!
Chalo fir usse bhi   ainaa dekha den !!

Muddath se jag rahi hain ye ankhen !!
Chaloo kissi din isse bhi  sula den !!

Jo dhoonta hai manzil eak umra se !!
Chaloo fir usse bhi raasta bata den !!

Unko teri shayari se shayad nafrath hai qadeer !!
Chaloo fir apni sari ghazalen jala den !!

Qadeer Toopchi

From Dubai
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«Reply #1 on: December 25, 2008, 10:30:53 PM »
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Good one Qadeer Ji
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«Reply #2 on: January 03, 2009, 01:55:53 PM »
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Nice One Qadeer Ji,.
Achcha Laga Pardhke,.
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«Reply #3 on: January 03, 2009, 02:04:03 PM »
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arey bahut ki kamaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaal ka likha hai ABDUL
bahut khoobsurati sey likha hai aap neh
dil koh bahut accha laga padd key,
yuhi likhtey rahiyeh


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«Reply #4 on: January 04, 2009, 03:42:50 AM »
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arey bahut ki kamaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaal ka likha hai ABDUL
bahut khoobsurati sey likha hai aap neh
dil koh bahut accha laga padd key,
yuhi likhtey rahiyeh


Jasbir Singh

Thanks A lot Jasbir Bhai !! Is Izzath Afza-e- Shukriya

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«Reply #5 on: January 06, 2009, 05:19:42 PM »
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bahoot khoob Qadeer ji
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«Reply #6 on: January 06, 2009, 05:28:18 PM »
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Chaloo unhe bhi apne hosle bata den !!
Patharoon ke shaher me shishe ka ghar bana den !!

Sahiloon pe kya jina dar dar ke !!
Chaloo kissi din samadaroon me panha len !!

Uske Shaher me Sans Lena mushkil hai agar !!
Chaloo fir koi naya shaher basa len !!

Anderoon me dar lagne laga hai  agar  !!
Chaloo fir  suraj ko apna pata den !!

Jo kahete hain hum ne bewfa-e ki hai !!
Chalo fir usse bhi   ainaa dekha den !!

Muddath se jag rahi hain ye ankhen !!
Chaloo kissi din isse bhi  sula den !!

Jo dhoonta hai manzil eak umra se !!
Chaloo fir usse bhi raasta bata den !!

Unko teri shayari se shayad nafrath hai qadeer !!
Chaloo fir apni sari ghazalen jala den !!

Qadeer Toopchi

From Dubai


Shuruwat se hi bahut hi behtareen peshkash...  Applause
Abdul jii... bahut accha likha hai aapne..
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«Reply #7 on: January 07, 2009, 03:47:07 AM »
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bahoot khoob Qadeer ji

Thanks A lot Pooja ji !! Izath Afza-e- ka shukriya

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«Reply #8 on: January 07, 2009, 03:48:01 AM »
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Shuruwat se hi bahut hi behtareen peshkash...  Applause
Abdul jii... bahut accha likha hai aapne..


Apko Meri Ghazal Pasand ayi to mujhe mere likhne ka sila mil gaya

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«Reply #9 on: April 17, 2011, 09:37:42 AM »
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Wah wah abdul bhai kya khub likha hai dil ko 6u lene wali line likhi hai dear keep it up hume hamesha aisi shayari ka intezar rahega
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«Reply #10 on: April 17, 2011, 09:47:44 AM »
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Chaloo unhe bhi apne hosle bata den !!
Patharoon ke shaher me shishe ka ghar bana den !!

Sahiloon pe kya jina dar dar ke !!
Chaloo kissi din samadaroon me panha len !!

Uske Shaher me Sans Lena mushkil hai agar !!
Chaloo fir koi naya shaher basa len !!

Anderoon me dar lagne laga hai  agar  !!
Chaloo fir  suraj ko apna pata den !!

Jo kahete hain hum ne bewfa-e ki hai !!
Chalo fir usse bhi   ainaa dekha den !!

Muddath se jag rahi hain ye ankhen !!
Chaloo kissi din isse bhi  sula den !!

Jo dhoonta hai manzil eak umra se !!
Chaloo fir usse bhi raasta bata den !!

Unko teri shayari se shayad nafrath hai qadeer !!
Chaloo fir apni sari ghazalen jala den !!

Qadeer Toopchi

From Dubai




waaah waaah waaah ek ek sher itna wazni tha ke dard choar gyaa qadeer sb.kisi daad ka mohtaaj nahin ye wazni kalaam
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«Reply #11 on: May 02, 2011, 01:43:19 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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