~~~~ Chand ko Be-Nakab Hone Do~~~~~~~~~~~~~

by BeNam on September 22, 2005, 04:06:11 PM
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--- Dedicated to Pooja -----------------

Chupa liya hai Anchal main jis chand ko, Usey be nakab toh hone do,
Bayan karenge hale dil hum bhi, Ek baar deedar to hone do!

Kya gazab ka husn paya hai tune, ke niyat dol gayi meri,
Dekh lun tumhe ek baar jee bher ke, bus yehi arzu hai meri,

Teri ankho se mai ke do paimane pi toh lun,
Tere labon ke dahekate angaro ki kasam,
Parwana ban ke inhe do ghadhi chum toh lun,
Maut ki parvah hai kise, Zindagi ko ji bher ke dekh toh lun.

Reshami zulfo se ghana andhera chahe kar do,
Lekin us chand ko bhi ghata se nikalane ka mauka toh do,
Kondhe chahe jitani bijaliyan nazar toh milale,
Maut ka darr kya ho usey, do ghadi jo tujhe dekh le!

Husn nahi chhupata, chahe jitane parde laga le,
Ishq hun main pa lunga tujhe, chahe jitane pahere laga le!

--- BENAM -------
Banda majboor hai mahobaat main teri,
Warna jhukana nahi fidarat main meri!
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«Reply #1 on: September 27, 2005, 10:30:30 PM »
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--Thanks BeNam!!-- I think now we have a good understanding. So here is your Reply ---

Aa gai hu unke agan main, yah khabar unko bhi to hone do
Karegy dill ki har baat, sanam ke sath, kuch mulakaaten to hone do!!!

Lipat ke unke seene se, hum her baat bhool jaaty hay
Hoty hay jo dill main khayalaat, in jhuki ankhon main chup jaaty hay!!

Unke ankho ki shararat dill main hulchal machaati hay
Bin kahe, khud–b-khud, unki banhon main simat jaati hay!!!
Saanse unki mere kano main sargoshi karati hay
Saanse meri khud ki phir bahakane lagati hay!!!

Kab chand niklata hay ghatao se
Iski chand ko khud hi khabar hoti hai kahan
Jab Mahak uthata hay Madhuban
Tab kisi baat ki rahti hai Hosh kahan!!!!

Her armaan tab bekaabu hua jaata hay
Lo ajj husan, Ishaq ki bahon mai samaya jaata hai!!
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captainyr
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«Reply #2 on: September 28, 2005, 08:34:57 PM »
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Very Very nice Poem , Thanks 4 Sharing  :lol:
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«Reply #3 on: October 04, 2005, 02:55:27 AM »
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--Thanks BeNam!!-- I think now we have a good understanding. So here is your Reply ---

Aa gai hu unke agan main, yah khabar unko bhi to hone do
Karegy dill ki har baat, sanam ke sath, kuch mulakaaten to hone do!!!

Lipat ke unke seene se, hum her baat bhool jaaty hay
Hoty hay jo dill main khayalaat, in jhuki ankhon main chup jaaty hay!!

Unke ankho ki shararat dill main hulchal machaati hay
Bin kahe, khud–b-khud, unki banhon main simat jaati hay!!!
Saanse unki mere kano main sargoshi karati hay
Saanse meri khud ki phir bahakane lagati hay!!!

Kab chand niklata hay ghatao se
Iski chand ko khud hi khabar hoti hai kahan
Jab Mahak uthata hay Madhuban
Tab kisi baat ki rahti hai Hosh kahan!!!!

Her armaan tab bekaabu hua jaata hay
Lo ajj husan, Ishaq ki bahon mai samaya jaata hai!!



arey gazab!!!!! gazab!!!!!! Pooja ji!!! marvellous!!!! :D
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«Reply #4 on: October 04, 2005, 02:53:39 PM »
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shukariyan AKS JI!!! APP bhi kuch likhaty to acha lagta!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: October 07, 2005, 06:38:23 PM »
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Wow.thats lovely,very nice benaam ji and pooja ji Usual Smile .
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«Reply #6 on: October 07, 2005, 06:40:08 PM »
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Thanks Nidhi....
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«Reply #7 on: October 13, 2005, 12:21:14 PM »
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acchha likha hai
jitni tarif ki jay kam hai
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«Reply #8 on: October 13, 2005, 02:19:03 PM »
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Thanks opdagar!!!

Apka YOindia mai sawagat hai!!!
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«Reply #9 on: October 19, 2005, 08:38:08 PM »
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bahoot achhay benaam our pooja ji...achhi ibaarte likhi hain aapne...

jab dekhta hoon, sochta hoon, dam sa ghut-ta hai,
ye mere apne hain, apno se, der sa lagta hai
dushman toh honge, dushmani bhi karenge beshaq,
na jaane apno se dushmani ka der kyuin lagta hai.
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«Reply #10 on: October 21, 2005, 08:18:09 AM »
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"Sagar ki khamoshi se ye na samjho ki lehron me rawani nahi,
Jab bhi uthenge,toofan bankar uthenge,abhi hamne uthne ki thaani nahi."

bahut accha likhe hai

Please uthne ki thaan lein

Great

log har mode par ruk ruk kar sambhalte kyoi hai,
itna darte hai to ghar se nikaleta kyoi hai

come on dont be in khamoshi.
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«Reply #11 on: November 03, 2005, 04:56:16 PM »
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Khamosh Muhaboot ka apna ek andaaz hai
nahi hota milan roj, bhir bhi ek vishwaas hai!!
daso dishao mai, Gunjati uski awaaz hai
band ankho ke jharokhon mai
Muskurate chehare ka apna ek andaaz hai!!

Na dekha, na chua, phir bhi mahsoos ho gaya
Bin kuch kahen hi, dil ek doosre ka ho gaya
shaant pani ki dhara mai bhi, chunchalta ka vaas hai
Duniya sa nirala, hamare payar ka yah andaaz hai!!!
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«Reply #12 on: November 08, 2005, 11:41:56 AM »
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Dear
 
bahaut khoob!

kaun kahata hai ki mohobat ki juban hoti hai
yeh to woh hakikat hai jo nighaon sai bayan hati hai

kaha ho !


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Khamosh Muhaboot ka apna ek andaaz hai
nahi hota milan roj, bhir bhi ek vishwaas hai!!
daso dishao mai, Gunjati uski awaaz hai
band ankho ke jharokhon mai
Muskurate chehare ka apna ek andaaz hai!!

Na dekha, na chua, phir bhi mahsoos ho gaya
Bin kuch kahen hi, dil ek doosre ka ho gaya
shaant pani ki dhara mai bhi, chunchalta ka vaas hai
Duniya sa nirala, hamare payar ka yah andaaz hai!!!
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«Reply #13 on: November 11, 2005, 05:14:24 PM »
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Rahe nakab jo chand per wo hi achaa
Hey tuj per aitbaar, ki tera payaar hay suchha
Chand ke be-nakab hone se
Puranmasi ki kirane bikhar jayegi
Dekhegi yah najara jo duniya saari
Bin kahe kahaniyan phir ban jayegi!!
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«Reply #14 on: November 16, 2005, 06:55:43 AM »
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bhaut khoob pooja !

chand par agar noor na hota ,
tanha dil majboor na hota,
khuda ki kasam ham aapse milne roj aate,
agar apka ghar itni door na hoota.





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Rahe nakab jo chand per wo hi achaa
Hey tuj per aitbaar, ki tera payaar hay suchha
Chand ke be-nakab hone se
Puranmasi ki kirane bikhar jayegi
Dekhegi yah najara jo duniya saari
Bin kahe kahaniyan phir ban jayegi!!
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