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ZULFON KE BEECH SE JHANKTI TERI ANKHIYAN.
JAISE BAADALON MEIN KADAKTI BIJLIYAN.
ZULF HATEE SANAM KE CHEHRE SE AISE.
CHAND NIKAL AAYE HATAA KE BADLIYAN.
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«Reply #3 on: March 10, 2010, 10:38:33 AM » |
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI SURESH SANGWAN JI......
CHUPATI HO APNE CHEHRE KO ZULFON KE BEECH AISE
JAISE BADLON KA PEHERA HAI LAGAYA
HATA TEE HO ZULFON KO APNE CHEHERE SE AISE
JAISE HATAA KE BADALIYAN "CHAND NIKAL AAYA"
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«Reply #4 on: March 10, 2010, 10:48:51 AM » |
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AAPKI TEHREER KA KHAS INTEZAR THA. BAHUT ACHI HAI CARA JI. WAAH BAHUT KHOOB.  BAHUT MAZA AAYA JAB TERA PAIGAM AAYA. AUR BHI MAZA AAYA PAIGAM KE SAATH SALAAM AAYA. WAH KYA BAAT HAI SURESH SANGWAN JI......
CHUPATI HO APNE CHEHRE KO ZULFON KE BEECH AISE
JAISE BADLON KA PEHERA HAI LAGAYA
HATA TEE HO ZULFON KO APNE CHEHERE SE AISE
JAISE HATAA KE BADALIYAN "CHAND NIKAL AAYA"
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«Reply #5 on: March 10, 2010, 10:54:28 AM » |
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BAHUT MAZA AAYA JAB LAGA AAP KO MAZA AAYA
AUR BHI MAZA AAYA JAB MUJHE BHI MAZA AAYA....
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«Reply #6 on: March 10, 2010, 11:10:39 AM » |
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SHUKRIYA CARA JI. AAPKO MAZAA AAYA. DOOSRE PAIGAM MEIN AUR MAZAA AAYAA. AISE MANN MOR HUA KI JHOOM KE SAAWAN AAYAA. BAHUT MAZA AAYA JAB LAGA AAP KO MAZA AAYA
AUR BHI MAZA AAYA JAB MUJHE BHI MAZA AAYA....
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«Reply #7 on: March 10, 2010, 12:36:05 PM » |
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Wah wah kya hi khoob likha hai Suresh ji. Very nice creation.
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«Reply #8 on: March 10, 2010, 12:37:40 PM » |
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SHUKRIYA RIYAZ JI, Wah wah kya hi khoob likha hai Suresh ji. Very nice creation.
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«Reply #9 on: May 24, 2010, 04:50:29 PM » |
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bahut accha hai
didaar chand ka jara hame bhi karo do
julf chehre se thodi se jara hata do
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«Reply #10 on: May 29, 2010, 12:55:59 PM » |
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THANKS MANOJ JI. ZULF KO CHEHRE SE TO KYA KAHO TO SIR SE HATA DEIN.
CHAAND KA DEEDAR HO JAYE BIN GHATAA KE.
bahut accha hai
didaar chand ka jara hame bhi karo do
julf chehre se thodi se jara hata do
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«Reply #11 on: May 29, 2010, 04:22:32 PM » |
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ZULFON KE BEECH SE JHANKTI TERI ANKHIYAN.
JAISE BAADALON MEIN KADAKTI BIJLIYAN.
ZULF HATEE SANAM KE CHEHRE SE AISE.
CHAND NIKAL AAYE HATAA KE BADLIYAN.
Bahut khoob Suresh Ji |
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«Reply #12 on: May 29, 2010, 06:19:34 PM » |
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b THANKS MANOJ JI.
ZULF KO CHEHRE SE TO KYA KAHO TO SIR SE HATA DEIN.
CHAAND KA DEEDAR HO JAYE BIN GHATAA KE.
bahut khub suresh g bazaar se kharidkar aam khane mei wo luft kaha jo mali ki nazer bachakar, chori karke khane mei hai |
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«Reply #13 on: May 30, 2010, 11:19:24 AM » |
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thanks manoj ji. baat nahin churaane ki ya khareedkar khaane ki.
ye mazaa sirf aur sirf mehanat karke khaane ka hai.
bbahut khub suresh g
bazaar se kharidkar aam khane mei wo luft kaha
jo mali ki nazer bachakar, chori karke khane mei hai
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«Reply #14 on: May 30, 2010, 11:20:51 AM » |
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shukriya rajeshji.  Bahut khoob Suresh Ji
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