*Dekhi Thi Ek*

by Roja on August 01, 2007, 03:48:21 AM
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देखी थी एक शोख हसीना
सपनो मैं अल्साई हुई
आँखें जिसकी मय के प्याले
ज़ुल्फ़े थी बल खाई हुई

आँचल का भी होश नही था
बेखुद थी क्यू किसको पता
जाने क्या क्या सोच रही थी
तन्हा थी घबराई हुई

वादा कर के शायद कोई
आया नही था वादे पर
रुखसारों पे नूर नही था
जैसी कली मुरझाई हुई

यूं ही देखा मुझ को उसने
बोली "रोज़ा" तुम थे कहाँ
आँख खुली तोह देखा मैने
काली घटा थी छाई हुई

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Dekhi thi ek shokh hasina
Sapno main alsayee huyee
Ankhein jiski may ke pyale
Julphe thi bal khayee huyee

Aanchal ka bhi hosh nahi tha
Bekhud thi kyu kisko pata
Jane kya kya soch rahi thi
Tanha thi ghabrayi huyee

Vada kar ke shayad koyee
Aaya nahi tha vade per
Rukhsaaron pe noor nahi tha
Jaisi kali murjhayee huyee

Yoon hi dekha mujh ko usne
Boli "Roja" tum the kahan
Aankh khuli toh dekha maine
Kaali ghata thi chayee huyee[/color][/size]
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«Reply #1 on: August 02, 2007, 06:46:18 AM »
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This is nice.
Roja you expressed it very well.

Good words !
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«Reply #2 on: August 04, 2007, 01:34:38 AM »
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This is nice.
Roja you expressed it very well.

Good words !


Aapka comments mere liye bahut manya rakhta hai ricky ji.
Actually, dad nahi hai na... to mann dara tha. Thanks for your
valuable comments..ji..
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«Reply #3 on: August 04, 2007, 06:51:47 AM »
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Very good ! =D>

Keep going :arrow:
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«Reply #4 on: August 05, 2007, 11:33:05 AM »
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Roja

Very good ! =D>

Keep going :arrow:


Shukhriya Monitor sb...
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«Reply #5 on: August 17, 2007, 07:24:25 PM »
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very nice Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: August 18, 2007, 06:56:58 PM »
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Very nice Roja =D>
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«Reply #7 on: October 31, 2007, 09:24:07 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai.. bahoot hi ache se bhawnao ko shabdo mai utara hai!! Good Job Roja!!
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«Reply #8 on: November 04, 2007, 02:28:19 PM »
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Great Kavita Roja Ji,
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«Reply #9 on: November 09, 2007, 03:54:14 AM »
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Thank you very much Talat , Pooja di, and Jaanasheen bro
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«Reply #10 on: November 16, 2007, 03:08:13 PM »
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U Are Always Welcome Didi,.
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BAHUT UMDA  Applause Applause Applause icon_flower
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acha liki he roja where are you.
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