dil-e-haal de de

by Rahi2001 on August 21, 2010, 06:32:33 AM
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e- ishq tu aisa mere sanam ko jamal de de
nikhar jaye roop uska aisa kamaal de de

ek mud.dat se uske waar ko tadap raha hu mai
jo dhas jaye sine me aisa teer bemisal de de

kahin baitha hai wo chhup kar bada udas hu mai
tu ja! jakar use mera dil-e-haal de de

rahe roshan sada mahfil uske surile giton se
tu har shaam uske suron me navtaal de de

rahe wo muskurati sada na gam ki parchai ho
bhale hisse me mere tu dukhon ka zanjaal de de






" mere pyaare yoindia ke sathiyaon mai aaj aap logon ko ek haseen satohfa dene ke vichar me hu iske baad ki meri post ko aap log jarur padhiyega , aap logon ko pasand aa gai to meri khush naseebi hogi "


aap ka "Rahi"
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«Reply #1 on: August 21, 2010, 09:51:29 PM »
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Rahi Jee Aadaab!

Excellent work.... Bahut achcha likha hai aapne....
Sabhi sher achche rahe.....

Dil se daad kabool kijiye......

Likhate rahiye......
Khush rahiye......


Bas jae koye dil me gar khawab bankar
Woh umar bhar ki ninde uda jatey haiN

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«Reply #2 on: August 22, 2010, 11:09:03 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: August 22, 2010, 07:30:27 PM »
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waahhh rahul...kamaal ka likha hai tumne......

mazaa aagaya re padhkar
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«Reply #4 on: August 25, 2010, 06:27:00 AM »
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Rahi Jee Aadaab!

Excellent work.... Bahut achcha likha hai aapne....
Sabhi sher achche rahe.....

Dil se daad kabool kijiye......

Likhate rahiye......
Khush rahiye......


Bas jae koye dil me gar khawab bankar
Woh umar bhar ki ninde uda jatey haiN



nahin basa lena kabhi kisi ko khwabon me
neenden ud jati hai raaton me
nahi kata hai safar jindagi ka tanaha e "Rahi"
ydd aati hai wo baten sirf baton hi baton me

shukriya parwaj ji aap ka meri rachna ko pasand karne ke liye
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«Reply #5 on: August 25, 2010, 06:28:13 AM »
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waahhh rahul...kamaal ka likha hai tumne......

mazaa aagaya re padhkar

diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii gm

mai aagayaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaj fir pareshan karungaaaaaaaa

hahahahahahahhahha
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