HONTHH-O-AANKH (Ghazal)... "MohaN"

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(Inspired from Mir Taqi Mir)

HONTHH-O-AANKH

Honthh tere, rubi laal hain donon
          Khullein to uglein aag hain donon!

Kaise hai chupaaye chotian do do
          Nakaab uthhye saanp hain donon!

Aaftaab dobnaa hai beshaq doobe
          Aag hee barsaate gaal hain donon!

Tan mein rehte theh aankhh-o-dil
           Agar hain abb khraab hain donon!

Mere ghamon kahin aur jaa baso
         Dil-o-jigar yeh kabaab hain donon!

Kabhi yeh dekhti thin idhar udhar
           Lage hai mast shraab hain donon!

Dil gar aag hai to aankh hai paani
        Dedaa-o-dil yeh azaab hain donon!

Kabhi behte theh daryaa-e-paanii
         Aaj jo dekho to saraab hain donon!

Haal-e-gulshan kyaa kahe MohaN
         Aah-o-gham behisaab hain donon!!

Surindar. N               "MohaN"
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waah kyaa baat hai
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«Reply #2 on: February 10, 2017, 04:03:10 AM »
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 Wah wah wdh wxh
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Waaaaaaaaaaah  waaaah bahoooot khooob surindarn  g
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«Reply #4 on: February 11, 2017, 02:30:01 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on February 10, 2017, 02:17:27 AM
waah kyaa baat hai
bahut shukria Saini Sahib.
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 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2
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Bahot khob Sir waaaaah waah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: February 13, 2017, 02:23:04 AM »
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Quote from: saahill on February 10, 2017, 04:03:10 AM
Wah wah wdh wxh
bahut shukria Saahill Sahib.
 notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy
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Waaaaaaaaaaah  waaaah bahoooot khooob surindarn  g
bahut shukria Rajan Jee.
 notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy
 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2
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Quote from: Rustum Rangila on February 12, 2017, 10:38:42 AM
Bahot khob Sir waaaaah waah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut shukria Rangila Jee.
 notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy
 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2
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