HUSN KI FITRAT:Shayari -e- Husn

thebestartofgod

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husn ki fitrat yaaron ,
kya bataein hum aapko |

jami mai noor ho to fasal achhi hi hoti hai ||

its record , no one understood dis in his first listening , if any1 understands dis in 1st trial just put up ur collar,its amazing , comment iz also compulsory from dat guy ………………

by ------------ manish kr, khedawat


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AbhiTamrakar

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Re: HUSN KI FITRAT

«Reply #1 on: November 12, 2010, 06:01:29 AM »

aji sahab baat bas gehri ho to kuchh nahi likhne wale ke shabdo me wo dard hona chahiye ki baat ki gehraai ko unchaa anjam diya jaaaye...

so zamin me noor hoga to fasal achhi to hogi hi~

shayad apka record toot gaya~


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man sa

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Re: HUSN KI FITRAT

«Reply #2 on: November 12, 2010, 06:17:47 AM »

yahi to galti ho gayi aapse..........

jara gaur farmaiye hamne poetry kisan(farmer) pe nahi husn pe likhi hai...........


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AbhiTamrakar

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Re: HUSN KI FITRAT

«Reply #3 on: November 12, 2010, 07:59:10 AM »

Quote from: man sa on November 12, 2010, 06:17:47 AM

yahi to galti ho gayi aapse..........

jara gaur farmaiye hamne poetry kisan(farmer) pe nahi husn pe likhi hai...........

aji sahab hamne kahan kaha ki apne kisan par likhi he...

zara gaurse is line ko padhiye apki lines ka jo matlab he meri is line ka bh wahi matlab he bas fark itna sa hai ki aapne husna kaha maine "baat" kahi apne jami ko noor diya maine "shad ko dard" .......ummeed hai samajh jayege...

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on November 12, 2010, 06:01:29 AM

aji sahab baat bas gehri ho to kuchh nahi likhne wale ke shabdo me wo dard hona chahiye ki baat ki gehraai ko unchaa anjam diya jaaaye...

ham bhi jante he bhai thoda hi sahi par itne hi kachche bhi nahi he ki itni easy goin lines ka matlab na samjhe...

ab aap chahe husna walon ki tareef karo ya use banane wale ki ya us ada ki jo husna ko haseen kehene par majboor karti he..

YO par koi bhi apka ye record tod deta..so maine hi tod diya..


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thebestartofgod

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Re: HUSN KI FITRAT

«Reply #4 on: November 12, 2010, 05:46:09 PM »

muje to pata hi nahi tha meri shayari ka itna inpirational matlab bhi ho sakta hai .............

likte waqt mera aisa intention bilkul bhi nahi tha.........

phir bhi thanks muje apni shayari ka alag nazariya batane ke liye.....


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