husn.....sheba

by Sheba on March 26, 2012, 10:55:44 AM
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                            mera nasheman markaz-e zamanaa rahaa..!
                            milne ka ajeeb-ajeeb bahanaa rahaa..!

                            karte chiraag bhi taarif chehre ki mere..,
                            dekh mujhe ab mehtaab ka sharmanaa rahaa..,

                            minnatein gulshan ki paas mere aati rahien..,
                            ki guzarish pe mere bahaar ka aanaa rahaa..,

                            husn aisa mera ab ghazal bhi haar gayii..,
                            na bane sher unse, na lafzo.n ka thikanaa rahaa..,

                            ulajh gaye rind bhi meri nazro.n se sheba..!
                            phir na saaqi, na shraab ,na maikhanaa raha.
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«Reply #1 on: March 26, 2012, 11:02:55 AM »
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bas aapkee shaan men kyaa kahoon ek ghazal jo pahle hee post kar chukaa hoon usee kaa ek sher yaad aa raha hai.
"Ghazal kah kar teree taaeef kar dooN.
 Magar ye dhang puraanaa ho gayaa hai."
Shaabaash Shebaa ji bahut pyaaree peshkash hai is par beshumaar daad
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«Reply #2 on: March 26, 2012, 11:20:24 AM »
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WAH WAH..

BAHUT BAHUT KHOOB SHEBA JI.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: March 26, 2012, 01:41:28 PM »
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Bahut hi khubsurat ghazal.Samajh nahi paa raha hoon kaise taareef karun aur kis sher ki zyada karun.Sab eik se badh kar eik hain.Yeh sher ab se juda hai:
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       minnatein gulshan ki paas mere aati rahien..,
       ki guzarish pe mere bahaar ka aanaa rahaa..,

                          
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«Reply #4 on: March 26, 2012, 01:52:55 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on March 26, 2012, 10:55:44 AM


                            mera nasheman markaz-e zamanaa rahaa..!
                            milne ka ajeeb-ajeeb bahanaa rahaa..!

                            karte chiraag bhi taarif chehre ki mere..,
                            dekh mujhe ab mehtaab ka sharmanaa rahaa..,

                            minnatein gulshan ki paas mere aati rahien..,
                            ki guzarish pe mere bahaar ka aanaa rahaa..,

                            husn aisa mera ab ghazal bhi haar gayii..,
                            na bane sher unse, na lafzo.n ka thikanaa rahaa..,

                            ulajh gaye rind bhi meri nazro.n se sheba..!
                            phir na saaqi, na shraab ,na maikhanaa raha.


Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Kya kehne Sheba Ji..Aapne To TareefoN Ke Pool Baandhiye.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Waise To Saare A'shaar Ek se Badhkar ek hai..Par yeh A'shaar Bahut Khoobsurat Hai...

"Husn Aisa Mera Ab Ghazal Bhi Haar Gayi
 Na Bane Sher Unse,Na Lafzon Ka Thikanaa Raha"

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«Reply #5 on: March 26, 2012, 04:31:39 PM »
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Kya baat hai javaab nahi Sheba ji
bahut khoob Applause Applause

ye do sher mujhe nihayat umda lage..

husn aisa mera ab ghazal bhi haar gayii..,
na bane sher unse, na lafzo.n ka thikanaa rahaa.., Applause

ulajh gaye rind bhi meri nazro.n se sheba..!
phir na saaqi, na shraab ,na maikhanaa raha. Applause
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«Reply #6 on: March 26, 2012, 04:55:15 PM »
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very n.ice sheba ji
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«Reply #7 on: March 26, 2012, 06:08:52 PM »
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waa waa shiba ji bhot khub bhot mast Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: March 26, 2012, 06:38:36 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause bahut khoob Sheba ji....!!!
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«Reply #9 on: March 27, 2012, 04:55:42 AM »
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waah waah sheba ji--
bada hi khubsurat aur dilfareb andaaz hai husn ki taaruf ka tongue3
sach me kamaal ki post hai ji
daad kubul karen

khus rahen
likhte rahen
muskurate rahen

Quote from: Sheba on March 26, 2012, 10:55:44 AM


                            mera nasheman markaz-e zamanaa rahaa..!
                            milne ka ajeeb-ajeeb bahanaa rahaa..!

                            karte chiraag bhi taarif chehre ki mere..,
                            dekh mujhe ab mehtaab ka sharmanaa rahaa..,

                            minnatein gulshan ki paas mere aati rahien..,
                            ki guzarish pe mere bahaar ka aanaa rahaa..,

                            husn aisa mera ab ghazal bhi haar gayii..,
                            na bane sher unse, na lafzo.n ka thikanaa rahaa..,

                            ulajh gaye rind bhi meri nazro.n se sheba..!
                            phir na saaqi, na shraab ,na maikhanaa raha.

wo ek husn wali se humara bhi paala pada tha kabhi--
unke tevar ab tak nhi bhule hain hum
jara gaur farmaiega unke tewar hum yahan bata rahe apni tooti jubaan se Usual Smile
--
!
dekh kar mujhe dolti hai kyun--niyat janaab ki
ye bhi batla do jara ab kya hai bhala--haisiyat janaab ki !

bahot dekhte ho khwaab paane ki mujhe
hue ho paagal abhi ya paidaishi hai ye--fitrat janaab ki !

lo, ab kya hua bolte kyun nahi kuch mujhe
kahan gaeeN wo saari--sokhiyan janaab ki !

ghar se college tak firte ho duum hilaaye
thaami jo ungli fir kyun nikal gai--hekdiyan janaab ki !

lehje lehje se jhalakkta Lofaraana andaaz
chuttki jo bajai sar e baazaar fir uthti nahi kyun--nigaahen janaab ki !

sarteN jo lagaee thi dostoN sang mujhe pataane ki
ek chaante me hi guum hui kyun--bebaakiyan janaab ki !
!

haaye tauba hai husnwaliyon se ab tak--
hum to Babaji hi bhale hain ji Usual Smile


be happy always
byeee
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«Reply #10 on: March 27, 2012, 07:15:19 AM »
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wah wah shebaji.....bahut khoob!!
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«Reply #11 on: March 27, 2012, 10:58:23 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on March 26, 2012, 11:02:55 AM
bas aapkee shaan men kyaa kahoon ek ghazal jo pahle hee post kar chukaa hoon usee kaa ek sher yaad aa raha hai.
"Ghazal kah kar teree taaeef kar dooN.
 Magar ye dhang puraanaa ho gayaa hai."
Shaabaash Shebaa ji bahut pyaaree peshkash hai is par beshumaar daad

bahut bahut shukriya saini ji.aap jaise logo.n ki daad ek' maane' rakhti hai mere liye.

 aur haan koi bhi ghalati lage bina jhijhak tambhi karein.
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on March 26, 2012, 11:20:24 AM
WAH WAH..

BAHUT BAHUT KHOOB SHEBA JI.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

 Applause Applause Applause Applause

shukriya tauhid ji
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«Reply #13 on: March 27, 2012, 03:18:06 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne sarfira ji... bahut hi umda ...!!!

Quote from: sarfira on March 27, 2012, 04:55:42 AM

dekh kar mujhe dolti hai kyun--niyat janaab ki
ye bhi batla do jara ab kya hai bhala--haisiyat janaab ki !

bahot dekhte ho khwaab paane ki mujhe
hue ho paagal abhi ya paidaishi hai ye--fitrat janaab ki !

lo, ab kya hua bolte kyun nahi kuch mujhe
kahan gaeeN wo saari--sokhiyan janaab ki !

ghar se college tak firte ho duum hilaaye
thaami jo ungli fir kyun nikal gai--hekdiyan janaab ki !

lehje lehje se jhalakkta Lofaraana andaaz
chuttki jo bajai sar e baazaar fir uthti nahi kyun--nigaahen janaab ki !

sarteN jo lagaee thi dostoN sang mujhe pataane ki
ek chaante me hi guum hui kyun--bebaakiyan janaab ki !
!

haaye tauba hai husnwaliyon se ab tak--
hum to Babaji hi bhale hain ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: March 28, 2012, 04:03:31 AM »
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Quote from: sarfira on March 27, 2012, 04:55:42 AM
waah waah sheba ji--
bada hi khubsurat aur dilfareb andaaz hai husn ki taaruf ka tongue3
sach me kamaal ki post hai ji
daad kubul karen

khus rahen
likhte rahen
muskurate rahen
wo ek husn wali se humara bhi paala pada tha kabhi--
unke tevar ab tak nhi bhule hain hum
jara gaur farmaiega unke tewar hum yahan bata rahe apni tooti jubaan se Usual Smile
--
!
dekh kar mujhe dolti hai kyun--niyat janaab ki
ye bhi batla do jara ab kya hai bhala--haisiyat janaab ki !

bahot dekhte ho khwaab paane ki mujhe
hue ho paagal abhi ya paidaishi hai ye--fitrat janaab ki !

lo, ab kya hua bolte kyun nahi kuch mujhe
kahan gaeeN wo saari--sokhiyan janaab ki !

ghar se college tak firte ho duum hilaaye
thaami jo ungli fir kyun nikal gai--hekdiyan janaab ki !

lehje lehje se jhalakkta Lofaraana andaaz
chuttki jo bajai sar e baazaar fir uthti nahi kyun--nigaahen janaab ki !

sarteN jo lagaee thi dostoN sang mujhe pataane ki
ek chaante me hi guum hui kyun--bebaakiyan janaab ki !
!

haaye tauba hai husnwaliyon se ab tak--
hum to Babaji hi bhale hain ji Usual Smile


be happy always
byeee

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