husn.....sheba

by Sheba on March 26, 2012, 10:55:44 AM
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«Reply #15 on: March 28, 2012, 09:47:05 AM »
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Shebaa Sahibaa Aadaab!


Taqeer se jawaab dene ke liye hum tah e dil se
mazzarat chahte haiN...

Waah mohtarmaa kia kahne aapke.... behad achchi
kalaam kahi hai aapne... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe... aur kafi achchi
giraaH bhi baNdhi hai aapne... Usual Smile


Humari dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Uske pahle aapki post ka post mortom karne ko jee
chaaH raha hai aur woH bhi aaphi ke aNdaaz meiN  Winking
Waise yeH postmortom karna aasaaN nahi hai kyuN ke
baNde ke paas waqt ki kami hai... Usual Smile

Khair chaliye dekhte haiN...





                            mera nasheman markaz-e zamanaa rahaa..!
                            milne ka ajeeb-ajeeb bahanaa rahaa..!

Waah kia kahne jee bahut khoob .... achcha matla kaha hai.. Usual Smile daad daad daad

                            karte chiraag bhi taarif chehre ki mere..,
                            dekh mujhe ab mehtaab ka sharmanaa rahaa..,

Ufff yeH mohtarmaa jaane kitni galatfahmiyoN ka shikaar rahti hai...  Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle

                            minnatein gulshan ki paas mere aati rahien..,
                            ki guzarish pe mere bahaar ka aanaa rahaa..,


Shocked Even More Shocked Even More Shocked Even More Shocked Even More Ohh ho maiN bhi
sochuN ke aajkal barisheN kam kyuN ho gayi hai...  NaNaNa


                            husn aisa mera ab ghazal bhi haar gayii..,
                            na bane sher unse, na lafzo.n ka thikanaa rahaa..,

Waah waah jee kia kahne bahut khoob... achcha sher hai..


                            ulajh gaye rind bhi meri nazro.n se sheba..!
                            phir na saaqi, na shraab ,na maikhanaa raha.



Oye hoye kia baat hai ... Hume bhi deedar de dijiye Shebaa Sahiba
yeH riNd bhi sudhar jayeNga....  Thumbs UP






Koi gustaqui huyi ho to mazzarrat chahte haiN... Usual Smile

Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..
Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O Aabaad rahiye...

 
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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sbechain
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«Reply #16 on: March 28, 2012, 12:24:46 PM »
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Bahut hi khubsurat ghazal.Samajh nahi paa raha hoon kaise taareef karun aur kis sher ki zyada karun.Sab eik se badh kar eik hain.Yeh sher ab se juda hai:
           
       minnatein gulshan ki paas mere aati rahien..,
       ki guzarish pe mere bahaar ka aanaa rahaa..,


                          

shukria
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sbechain
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«Reply #17 on: April 03, 2012, 09:02:26 AM »
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Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Kya kehne Sheba Ji..Aapne To TareefoN Ke Pool Baandhiye.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Waise To Saare A'shaar Ek se Badhkar ek hai..Par yeh A'shaar Bahut Khoobsurat Hai...

"Husn Aisa Mera Ab Ghazal Bhi Haar Gayi
 Na Bane Sher Unse,Na Lafzon Ka Thikanaa Raha"

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


shukriya
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«Reply #18 on: February 24, 2013, 08:41:27 PM »
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Kya baat hai javaab nahi Sheba ji
bahut khoob Applause Applause

ye do sher mujhe nihayat umda lage..

husn aisa mera ab ghazal bhi haar gayii..,
na bane sher unse, na lafzo.n ka thikanaa rahaa.., Applause

ulajh gaye rind bhi meri nazro.n se sheba..!
phir na saaqi, na shraab ,na maikhanaa raha. Applause

shukria mkv ji..........!
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