jahan nazar padiii~ On my painting ....... Abhi

by AbhiTamrakar on December 28, 2010, 10:06:40 AM
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Dosto is baar ki post thodi si different hai ...
isme jo pic use huyi hai wo maine khud banayi hai..dusra ki kai din bad maine disigner poetry post ki hai..
ummmeed hai apk pasand aayegi~






kuchh maine bhi ki apne dil ko dhoondne ki koshish bahut
na mile tum kahin na kahin mujhe apni dhadkan sunai diii~

kahan kahan nahi he bahar ka mausam magar
tumhare aane ki aahat na ab tak mujhe sunaai dii~

sochta hun mai bahut jab labz tumhari tareef me likhta hun
tumhari na aayi daad na taliyon ki awaaz sunayi dii~

hai sooni si ye mehfil bhari bade bade log he yahaan
shayad ek tumhari adaa hi he jo ab tak na dikhaai dii~

umra bhar tarsate he shayar ek jhalak par tumhari kaseede kehene ko
or ek ham he "Abhi" ke jahan nazar padiii bas tum hi tum dikhaaii dii~
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«Reply #1 on: December 28, 2010, 10:34:55 AM »
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ufffffffff,,,,,,,,,gazab dhaa gaye abhi jiiii......behad khubsuart alfaaz me dhaale hain aapne apne jazbaat......aur uspar aapki ye design.....maar daala ji maar daala......

bht hi dilkash post hai ye aapki...sach mazaaa aagya dekhkar........
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«Reply #2 on: December 28, 2010, 11:07:57 AM »
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kya kahne..... kya kahne....
aapki is peshkesh ke abhi ji....
simply superb..
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«Reply #3 on: December 28, 2010, 11:26:07 AM »
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Bahut khubsurat painting hai abhi aur utne hi khubsurat lafz bhi hai...too gud keep it up..sach kahu tumhari painting zyada pasand aayi...loved it...
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«Reply #4 on: December 28, 2010, 12:02:49 PM »
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TERE KALAAM KI TAARIFF KO AB ALFAAZ NAHI MIL RAHE.....
Kabhi hum teri painting ko dekhte hain....
Kabhi aaine mein khud ko dekhte hain....
Bahut khoob Abhi ji..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kahaan dhund raha tha tu Abhi apne dil ko
Kal he tou chhod gaya tha tu usse mere pas

Are O-bhulakaad apne kaan se tu ruyee tou neekaal
Ab sunaai degi mere aane ki aahat aur taaliyon ki gunj

Bhari Mehfil mai teri o-sanam Shamaa ban jale hain
Sab ne sarkaaya humko bas ek teri he nazar na padi

Meri har adaa par kaseede padhne ko shayar hain beshumaar
Par Tere he dil-o-deemaag mai bassi hoon bas mein-he-mein


Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on December 28, 2010, 10:06:40 AM
Dosto is baar ki post thodi si different hai ...
isme jo pic use huyi hai wo maine khud banayi hai..dusra ki kai din bad maine disigner poetry post ki hai..
ummmeed hai apk pasand aayegi~






kuchh maine bhi ki apne dil ko dhoondne ki koshish bahut
na mile tum kahin na kahin mujhe apni dhadkan sunai diii~

kahan kahan nahi he bahar ka mausam magar
tumhare aane ki aahat na ab tak mujhe sunaai dii~

sochta hun mai bahut jab labz tumhari tareef me likhta hun
tumhari na aayi daad na taliyon ki awaaz sunayi dii~

hai sooni si ye mehfil bhari bade bade log he yahaan
shayad ek tumhari adaa hi he jo ab tak na dikhaai dii~

umra bhar tarsate he shayar ek jhalak par tumhari kaseede kehene ko
or ek ham he "Abhi" ke jahan nazar padiii bas tum hi tum dikhaaii dii~
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«Reply #5 on: December 28, 2010, 12:12:03 PM »
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abhi.........hmmmmmm

it can be done only by abhi......me geet ji baat se 100% agreed hu.....design sach bht bht sweet he......jaha tak words ki baat he ....they r asusal mindblowing.....highly impress from design......last para is superb
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«Reply #6 on: December 28, 2010, 12:59:40 PM »
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Oye hoye mere bhai..
apko alrounder nikle..
artist..

Kyaa baat hai..

Bahaut bahaut khoob..
Ufffff maza agaya parrkar..

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Khush rahiye!
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«Reply #7 on: December 28, 2010, 01:07:59 PM »
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Abhi ji--
itna achha likhenge aap to hum kaise jayenge kahin.
kamaal karte hain aap bhi--
itna jhakash kaise likh skte hain aap??
lajawaab hai sir ji superb.
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thanx
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«Reply #8 on: December 28, 2010, 01:59:22 PM »
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Bahut Khub Abhi JI Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: December 28, 2010, 06:51:40 PM »
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bahut khubsurat rachna hai aapki Abhi ji aur painting ki to kya baat hai... bas aise hi dil lagaaye rakhiye is mehfil se... bahut achha bahut badhiya.... !

Intezar !
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«Reply #10 on: December 29, 2010, 06:25:21 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on December 28, 2010, 10:34:55 AM
ufffffffff,,,,,,,,,gazab dhaa gaye abhi jiiii......behad khubsuart alfaaz me dhaale hain aapne apne jazbaat......aur uspar aapki ye design.....maar daala ji maar daala......

bht hi dilkash post hai ye aapki...sach mazaaa aagya dekhkar........

au ji apne pasand kiya bada achha laga~

yunhi sath rahiye
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«Reply #11 on: December 29, 2010, 06:28:46 AM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on December 28, 2010, 11:07:57 AM
kya kahne..... kya kahne....
aapki is peshkesh ke abhi ji....
simply superb..

kuchh kehete to kya kehene ke mayne or badh jate..

chaliye apne padha saraha wah bahut he..

shukriya yunhi sath rahiye~
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«Reply #12 on: December 29, 2010, 06:31:54 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on December 28, 2010, 11:26:07 AM
Bahut khubsurat painting hai abhi aur utne hi khubsurat lafz bhi hai...too gud keep it up..sach kahu tumhari painting zyada pasand aayi...loved it...

shukriya dii..

pehle aksar painting par likha karta tha ab samay hi nahi milta~

yunhi sath rahiye~
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«Reply #13 on: December 29, 2010, 06:40:02 AM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on December 28, 2010, 12:02:49 PM
TERE KALAAM KI TAARIFF KO AB ALFAAZ NAHI MIL RAHE.....
Kabhi hum teri painting ko dekhte hain....
Kabhi aaine mein khud ko dekhte hain....
Bahut khoob Abhi ji..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kahaan dhund raha tha tu Abhi apne dil ko
Kal he tou chhod gaya tha tu usse mere pas

Are O-bhulakaad apne kaan se tu ruyee tou neekaal
Ab sunaai degi mere aane ki aahat aur taaliyon ki gunj

Bhari Mehfil mai teri o-sanam Shamaa ban jale hain
Sab ne sarkaaya humko bas ek teri he nazar na padi

Meri har adaa par kaseede padhne ko shayar hain beshumaar
Par Tere he dil-o-deemaag mai bassi hoon bas mein-he-mein


hahaha dekho apne aap ko mat dekha karo me jyadatar asli logo ki panting banata hun ..cartoon ki nhai...   tongue3 tongue3

waise apki hosla afjai ka shukriyaa ..
sath to aap rahenge hi~

apki likhi lines par bas itna hi kahuga~

 Applause Applause Applause

or bahut khoob kaise keh du mehboob tere is ada ko mai
shuru hoti to kayamat hai par khatam kahan jaane hogi~
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«Reply #14 on: December 29, 2010, 08:10:47 AM »
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wah ...Abhiji..bahut khoob...dil ki bat kahne ka ek aur rasta hai painting.. bahut badiya hai.. bahut khoob likha hai..
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