Karam hai, ki, tumney bulaaya hai hum ko!

by abdbundeli on May 24, 2008, 08:09:41 AM
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 Karam hai, ki, tum ney bulaaya hai ham ko!
 Kaleyzey sey apney lagaayaa hai ham ko!!

 Tumhain jaankar bhi, naheen jaanta thaa;
 Shub-o-roz jalwa dikhayaa hai ham ko!

 Jahannum waheen hai, jahaan tum naheen ho!
 Tarannum mein pariyon ney gaayaa hai tum ko!!

 Tumharaa, kaheen bhi muqaabil naheen hai:
 Khuda ney, alag sey banaayaa hai tum ko!!

 Ye gunchey, ye rungeeniyan: kuchh naheen hain;
 Shafaq ney bahut aazmaayaa hai tum ko!!

 Talaashaa thaa katme-e-adam mein bhi mainey:
 Magar mulk-e-fanee mein paayaa hai tum ko!!

 Tumhain, har dahar mein, pukara hai mainey;
 'Abd', har lamhey gungunayaa hai tum ko!!  

                              - abd bundeli
  
 
 
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«Reply #1 on: June 08, 2008, 04:34:03 AM »
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 Tumhain jaankar bhi, naheen jaanta thaa;
 Shub-o-roz jalwa dikhayaa hai ham ko!

 Jahannum waheen hai, jahaan tum naheen ho!
 Tarannum mein pariyon ney gaayaa hai tum ko!!


MashaAllah
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«Reply #2 on: January 03, 2010, 03:55:09 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on May 24, 2008, 08:09:41 AM
'Karam hai, ki, tum ney bulaaya hai hum ko!
 Kaleyzey sey apney lagaayaa hai hum ko!!

 Tumhain jaankur bhi, naheen jaanta thaa;
 Shub-o-roz julwa dikhayaa hai hum ko!

 Jahannum waheen hai, jahaan tum naheen ho!
 Tarannum mein pariyon ney gaayaa hai tum ko!!

 Tumharaa, kaheen bhi muqaabil naheen hai:
 Khuda ney, alug sey banaayaa hai tum ko!!

 Ye gunchey, ye rungeeniyan: kuchh naheen hain;
 Shafuq ney bahut aazmaayaa hai tum ko!!

 Talaashaa thaa katme-e-adum mein bhi mainey:
 Magar mulq-e-fanee mein paayaa hai tum ko!!

 Tumhain, hur dahur mein, pukara hai mainey;
 'Abd', hur lumhey gungunayaa hai tum ko!!  - abd bundeli
  


dunia to rang-birangi  hai; dunia ka her pehlu dekho
Teri aankhon se main dekhun, meri aankhon se tum dekho,

Gamlon ke phooloun ko apne, tum kamre mein hi rehne do
Dhoop aayegee: murjayengey, ud jaayegee khushbu dekho

Unke ghar mein ujiyala hai, par basti mein andhiyara hai
Ujiyaale kapde walon ka kaala hai har jaadu dekho

Pyar ki dhunoun mein andha hokar daud na meri Jaan, "Abd",
Upper neeche, aage peeche, aaju bhaju her soo dekho

Main gam ke in ashqon ko peene ka aadhi hun barson se
Padh kar key tujhey, paa  itnee khushi aaye hain fir aansu dekho...
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #3 on: January 03, 2010, 06:13:34 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on May 24, 2008, 08:09:41 AM

 Karam hai, ki, tum ney bulaaya hai ham ko!
 Kaleyzey sey apney lagaayaa hai ham ko!!

 Tumhain jaankar bhi, naheen jaanta thaa;
 Shub-o-roz jalwa dikhayaa hai ham ko!

 Jahannum waheen hai, jahaan tum naheen ho!
 Tarannum mein pariyon ney gaayaa hai tum ko!!

 Tumharaa, kaheen bhi muqaabil naheen hai:
 Khuda ney, alag sey banaayaa hai tum ko!!

 Ye gunchey, ye rungeeniyan: kuchh naheen hain;
 Shafaq ney bahut aazmaayaa hai tum ko!!

 Talaashaa thaa katme-e-adam mein bhi mainey:
 Magar mulk-e-fanee mein paayaa hai tum ko!!

 Tumhain, har dahar mein, pukara hai mainey;
 'Abd', har lamhey gungunayaa hai tum ko!! 

                              - abd bundeli
 

Bahut khoob Abd Ji
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #4 on: January 03, 2010, 06:17:41 AM »
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Quote from: Roja_malar on January 03, 2010, 03:55:09 AM

Rang birangi dunia hai is dunia ka her pehlu dekh
Teri aankhon se mai dekhu, Meri aankhon se tum dekho,

Gamlon ke phool ko apne, kamre mein hi rehne do
Dhoop lagi to murjayega, ud jaaye khushbu dekho

Unke ghar mein ujala hai basti mein andhiyara hai
Ujale kapde walon ka hai kaisa kaala jaadu dekho

Pyar ki dhun mein mat andha hokar daud meri Jaan, "Abd"
Upper neeche, aage peeche, aaju bhaju her taraf dekho

Mai gam ke ashqon ko peene ka barson se aadhi hu
Tera likha pada aaj, khushi itni si pakar bi aaye hai aansu dekho...


Good response Roja Ji
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #5 on: January 03, 2010, 06:35:53 AM »
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Quote from: Roja_malar on January 03, 2010, 03:55:09 AM

dunia to rang-birangi  hai; dunia ka her pehlu dekho
Teri aankhon se main dekhun, meri aankhon se tum dekho,

Gamlon ke phooloun ko apne, tum kamre mein hi rehne do
Dhoop aayegee: murjayengey, ud jaayegee khushbu dekho

Unke ghar mein ujiyala hai, par basti mein andhiyara hai
Ujiyaale kapde walon ka kaala hai har jaadu dekho

Pyar ki dhunoun mein andha hokar daud na meri Jaan, "Abd",
Upper neeche, aage peeche, aaju bhaju her soo dekho

Main gam ke in ashqon ko peene ka aadhi hun barson se
Padh kar key tujhey, paa  itnee khushi aaye hain fir aansu dekho...



Itnaa gahraa hai chadhhaa,
Sakhee, preeti kaa rang:
Yatn kiye utrey naheen,
Bheeg rahaa har ang!

           - 'Ramwatiya'
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«Reply #6 on: January 03, 2010, 06:38:10 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on January 03, 2010, 06:13:34 AM
Bahut khoob Abd Ji

Shukriyah Rajesh ji!

             - abd bundeli
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«Reply #7 on: January 03, 2010, 04:12:04 PM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on January 03, 2010, 06:17:41 AM
Good response Roja Ji

Shukriya Rajesh Harish ji
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«Reply #8 on: January 03, 2010, 04:20:57 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on January 03, 2010, 06:35:53 AM
Itnaa gahraa hai chadhhaa,
Sakhee, preeti kaa rang:
Yatn kiye utrey naheen,
Bheeg rahaa har ang!

           - 'Ramwatiya'

Roj aakar gale se lagte hai
Khwaab fir bhi naye se lagte hai
Zindagi falsafa-sa lagti hai
Aap jab sochne se lagte hai

Jaal apni jagah sitaron ke
Dekhne mein bhale se lagte hai
Shehar saya-jada-sa(chayagrasth) lagta hai
Raste ajgar se lagte hai

Sochiye to khayal ke charon oor
Aaine ghoomne se lagte hai
Ek taraf kaynaat ke rahasya
Haat bande huwe se lagte hai

Waqt pada hua sa lagta hai
Aur hum bhoolne se lagte hai
Aur ab is gazal-sarayi(gazal padna)mein
Roj-e-shab kafiye (anupraas)se lagte hai

Un sitara jaisi aankhon mein
Apne hi parchayi sa lagte hai
In dinon sheher-e-jaa mein aaye huwe
Yaad ke mandaliyan (dhal)se lagte hai

Sher humne sune "ABD" tere
Wakayi unkahe se lagte hai..
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«Reply #9 on: January 03, 2010, 04:46:38 PM »
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Quote from: Roja_malar on January 03, 2010, 04:20:57 PM

Roj aakar gale se lagte hain
Khwaab fir bhi naye se lagte hain
Zindagi falsafey-si lagti hai
Aap jab sochne se lagte hain

Jaal apni jagah sitaron ke
Dekhne mein bhale se lagte hain
Shehar saya-jada-sa(chayagrasth) lagta hai
Raste ajgar se lagte hain

Sochiye to khayal ke har soo
Aaine ghoomne se lagte hain
Kaynaatoun ke raaz choutarfaa
Haath baandhe huwe se lagte hain

Waqt sahmaa hua sa lagta hai
Aur hum bhoolne se lagte hain
Aur ab is gazal-sarayi(gazal padna)mein
Roj-e-shab kafiye (anupraas)se lagte hain

Un sitaron-see shokh aankhon mein
Wo apne parchayi sey lagte hain
In dinon sheher-e-jaa mein aaye huwe
Yaad ke mandaliyan (dhal)se lagte hain

Sher humne sune "ABD" tere
Wakayi unkahe se lagte hain..


Umdah! Thanks!

Hamko paaougee waheen,
Jahaan hamaarey geet!
Shabdoun mein sankalit hai,
Saansoun kaa sangeet!

         - 'Ramwatiya'
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«Reply #10 on: January 08, 2010, 01:58:32 PM »
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Bahut achhi ghazal kahi hai Abd ji. Mazaa aa gaya.
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«Reply #11 on: January 08, 2010, 02:15:55 PM »
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Waah Kya baat hai .. MashaAllah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob ABD ji

Bahoot Khoob Roja and Yasmeen !
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«Reply #12 on: January 09, 2010, 04:07:34 PM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on January 08, 2010, 01:58:32 PM
Bahut achhi ghazal kahi hai Abd ji. Mazaa aa gaya.

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, riyaz106 ji!

                        - abd bundeli
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«Reply #13 on: January 09, 2010, 04:09:12 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on January 08, 2010, 02:15:55 PM
Waah Kya baat hai .. MashaAllah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob ABD ji

Bahoot Khoob Roja and Yasmeen !


Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Sophi ji!

                        - abd bundeli
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«Reply #14 on: January 09, 2010, 04:36:52 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on May 24, 2008, 08:09:41 AM

 Karam hai, ki, tum ney bulaaya hai ham ko!
 Kaleyzey sey apney lagaayaa hai ham ko!!

 Tumhain jaankar bhi, naheen jaanta thaa;
 Shub-o-roz jalwa dikhayaa hai ham ko!

 Jahannum waheen hai, jahaan tum naheen ho!
 Tarannum mein pariyon ney gaayaa hai tum ko!!

 Tumharaa, kaheen bhi muqaabil naheen hai:
 Khuda ney, alag sey banaayaa hai tum ko!!

 Ye gunchey, ye rungeeniyan: kuchh naheen hain;
 Shafaq ney bahut aazmaayaa hai tum ko!!

 Talaashaa thaa katme-e-adam mein bhi mainey:
 Magar mulk-e-fanee mein paayaa hai tum ko!!

 Tumhain, har dahar mein, pukara hai mainey;
 'Abd', har lamhey gungunayaa hai tum ko!! 

                              - abd bundeli
 
 
 
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