Kuchh bat to he patto se girte pani me

by AbhiTamrakar on August 05, 2010, 06:28:02 AM
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Hii All, ye meri pehli peshkash he aap asabhi ke samne ummeed karta hu pasand ayegiii..

aaj har hadd ko tod likh du me dil ki tamanna he yahi
ke unki char bate karne ka aji ye mauka fir kahan ayega

ye to malum he ki chahat bas jagiiiir unki nazaron ki he
hamare labzo ko bhi koi or rang ab kahan bhayega

eise to unke intezaar me guzar gaye he kitne din na jane
hame dillagi ke siva or koi kaam ab kahan nazar ayega

kuchh to baat he patto se taras kar girte pani me 'Abhi'
yun koi jaan hatheli pe rakhkar sirf mere mehboob ko dekhne hi jayega ~~
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«Reply #1 on: August 05, 2010, 07:28:04 AM »
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Swagat...suswagatam....yoindia k es ruhaani aalam me aapka "Abhi" icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Kuchh baat tou he uss aasmaa se girti boond me
Jo girke moti ban jaati seepee k khule mukh me


Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on August 05, 2010, 06:28:02 AM
Hii All, ye meri pehli peshkash he aap asabhi ke samne ummeed karta hu pasand ayegiii..

aaj har hadd ko tod likh du me dil ki tamanna he yahi
ke unki char bate karne ka aji ye mauka fir kahan ayega

ye to malum he ki chahat bas jagiiiir unki nazaron ki he
hamare labzo ko bhi koi or rang ab kahan bhayega

eise to unke intezaar me guzar gaye he kitne din na jane
hame dillagi ke siva or koi kaam ab kahan nazar ayega

kuchh to baat he patto se taras kar girte pani me 'Abhi'
yun koi jaan hatheli pe rakhkar sirf mere mehboob ko dekhne hi jayega ~~
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«Reply #2 on: August 05, 2010, 07:40:27 AM »
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sukriya koyal ji..

yu to bat chali he ruhaani alam ki..to pesh he~

'Abhi'yuhi jab tanhai me kabhi khuda se mulakat hoti he
dil se shabda nikalte he kisi shayari ki nayi barsaat hoti he~
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«Reply #3 on: August 05, 2010, 07:42:38 AM »
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very nice saying abhi....
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«Reply #4 on: August 05, 2010, 08:59:53 AM »
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Wah Abhi ji wah... bahut umda peshkash hai aapki... bahut khoob likha hai aapne... n welcome to Yoindia... umeed karte hain aapko padhne ka mauka milta rahega...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: August 05, 2010, 09:06:32 AM »
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shukriya ji..

jahan tak bat mere likhne ki he ..to me zinda hu sirf likhne ke liye or likhne ki wajah se..

ek din mene dil se puchha ..
kavita se kavi juda kaise?
uttar mila..

he hawa se pran jude jaise,
he kalam dawaat syaahi jaise,
he shareer se saans judi jaise,
kavita se juda he kavi eise~`
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«Reply #6 on: August 05, 2010, 09:42:06 AM »
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fantastic abhi, its a very well creation
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«Reply #7 on: August 06, 2010, 07:10:50 AM »
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shukriya dost~
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«Reply #8 on: August 06, 2010, 11:29:29 AM »
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Kuchh baat tou hai in paani ki boondo me
Tere rukhsaar ko chhu kar jo girti hain...

Dil karta Samet lu inko apni anjulee me
Motiyon se bhee jayaada hai keemat inki....
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«Reply #9 on: August 07, 2010, 08:53:14 AM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 06, 2010, 11:29:29 AM
Kuchh baat tou hai in paani ki boondo me
Tere rukhsaar ko chhu kar jo girti hain...

Dil karta Samet lu inko apni anjulee me
Motiyon se bhee jayaada hai keemat inki....

he samandar or dariya meri shayari me samaye huye,
or me ab bhi "Abhi" ek boond pyar ko pyasa hun~
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«Reply #10 on: August 07, 2010, 09:08:56 AM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on August 05, 2010, 06:28:02 AM
Hii All, ye meri pehli peshkash he aap asabhi ke samne ummeed karta hu pasand ayegiii..

aaj har hadd ko tod likh du me dil ki tamanna he yahi
ke unki char bate karne ka aji ye mauka fir kahan ayega

ye to malum he ki chahat bas jagiiiir unki nazaron ki he
hamare labzo ko bhi koi or rang ab kahan bhayega

eise to unke intezaar me guzar gaye he kitne din na jane
hame dillagi ke siva or koi kaam ab kahan nazar ayega

kuchh to baat he patto se taras kar girte pani me 'Abhi'
yun koi jaan hatheli pe rakhkar sirf mere mehboob ko dekhne hi jayega ~~

baras kar bood jab aasmaan se
tehti mere gulabi rukhsaar pe

ek thandi si lehar si jagi
aaj fir dil jhuma kisi ki yaad me

yaad agye wo lamhe mahobbat k jab
waqt guzra tha unke deedaar me

aur barsi thi buundein jab aankhon se
thama tha jinhe mere yaar ne haathon me

aaj fior boond chhalki hain meri palkon pe
aake bhar lo na aaj fir mujhe apni baahon me...!!!
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«Reply #11 on: August 07, 2010, 09:20:44 AM »
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too gud anu ji~
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