Muskaa uthhee hai baam, zaraa muskuraa to do!

by abdbundeli on June 07, 2009, 09:29:43 AM
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«Reply #15 on: July 20, 2009, 11:04:30 AM »
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Bhai Shihab Ji hum to pahile hi aapki shayari ke kayal hain
lekin is thread per aapki shayari padh kar maza aa gaya.
Aur Bundeli Saheb ka to kahna hi kya, kamaal likhte hain.
Wah wah.
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«Reply #16 on: July 20, 2009, 12:24:35 PM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on July 20, 2009, 11:00:09 AM
Wah Bundeli Saheb
Thanks Sarvesh ji!
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«Reply #17 on: July 21, 2009, 12:34:24 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on July 21, 2009, 12:05:35 PM
Aur Good One Abd Babu
Insha ALLAH Baad Mein
Waqt Milte Hi Hum Kuch Likhenge.

Thanks Shihaab ji! Mujhey intzzar raheygaa!
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«Reply #18 on: July 22, 2009, 12:09:45 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on July 22, 2009, 11:21:53 AM
Dil Ke Gehre Sannaton Main
Ye KisKi Yaadon Ka Noor Hai.

Pehan Kar Umeedon Ki Rida
Yeh Dil Bhi Kitna Majbur Hai.

Oudhhou mat majbooriyaan,
Chalo hamaarey saath!
Paitho raah-e-talab mein,
Liye haath mein haath!!

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«Reply #19 on: July 23, 2009, 08:55:25 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on July 23, 2009, 08:20:16 AM

Jab Dil Se Dil Hi Naa Mil Paaye Abd Babu
To Phir Kaise Rakhen Koi Hatho Mein Hath.

Jinke Ho Alag Alag Rasten Aap Hi Bataye
Phir Woh Kaise Chale Bhala Saath Saath.!

Saaqee hain laakh; aur, maykadey bhi laakh hain!
Dil sey jahaan ataa ho, wahee dar talaashiye!!
Gar, beydilee sey peish aa rahaa ho koyi dost;
Beyhtar hain uskey waasitey duniyaa key haashiye!!

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«Reply #20 on: August 13, 2009, 01:05:20 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on August 13, 2009, 09:00:05 AM
hmhhm
Dekar Apne Hissey Ki Sari Khsuhiyan
Kyun Ghamon Ki Daulat Kamaayi Jaaye.

Kisi Ke Reham O Kara Se Achha Hai Na
Ki Zindagi Apne Dum Par Bitaayi Jaaye.!

Shihab ji! Aapney Ravindra babu key 'Eiklaa Chalo Rey!' kee yaad tazah kar dee hai!

Koyee saath na dey agar,
Chalo akeyley mitra!
Raah-e-talab, jagah-jagah,
Barsaayegee itra!!

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«Reply #21 on: August 14, 2009, 02:15:49 PM »
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Shihaab ji! Ravindra babu (Gurudev Ravindra Nath ji Tagore, N.L.) ki mool rachnaayen Bangaalee bhaashhaa mein hain! Un key translation aap ko Internet par mil jaayengey!

Bojh naheen hai zindagee;
Hai sougaat mahaan!
Jiyo khushee sey; do khushee!
Door rahey shaitaan!!

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«Reply #22 on: August 15, 2009, 09:08:32 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on August 15, 2009, 07:47:43 AM
Ji Bahut Bahut Shukariya Abd Babu.

Aur Kafi Mushqil Baat Likh Di
Ab Kya Rep Dun Aapko Khair
Koshish Karta Hun Galti Maaf Ho.



Ye To Insaan Insaan Par Nirbhar Karta Hai
Koi Has Haskar To Koi Rokar Hi Jeeta Hai.

Kisi Ko Mil Jaati Hai Jhopde Me Bhi Raahat
To Koi Mehal Mein Rehkar Bekaraar Hota Hai.!


Aap kaa kathan yathaarth hai!

Dhan sey, yaa ki samruddhi sey,
Sukh paatey kuchh log;
Par adhikaansh naheen kabhee,
Paatey sukh ko bhog!

Sachchaa sukh, nirbhar naheen
Kisee wastu par anya;
Jo har sthiti mein khush rahey,
Wahee wyakti hai dhanya!

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«Reply #23 on: October 18, 2009, 07:28:36 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on October 16, 2009, 08:15:15 PM
Baap Re Itni Hindi To Sapney Mein Bhi
Na Kabhi Padi Aur Na Suni Hai Abd Babu.
Iska Rep To Meri Samajh Ke Bahir Hai
Khair Phir Bhi Koshish Karta Hun  Ji
Galti Maaf Ho..!!!


 
 Is Daur Mein Insan Is Qadar Khud Se Anjaan Hai
 Ki Kahaan Rahi Ab Usse Zindagi Ki Pehchaan Hai.

 Sukh Mein Jiye Ya Phir Dukh Mein Jiye Abd Babu
 Sukun To Wahi Pata He Jispe Khuda Meharban Hai.!


Shihab ji!

Aapkee baat par, Allaamaa Iqbal kaa eik sher yaad aa rahaa hai: mulaahizaa ho!

"Khudee ko kar buland itnaa, ki, har taqdeer key pahiley,
 Khudaa bandey sey khud poochhey, bataa teyree rizaa kyaa hai!"

US kee meyharbanee kee baat to thheek hai; par, US ney hamain jism aou zeyhn sey iseeliye nawaazaa hai, ki, ham apnee-apnee zindagee khud-b-khud jeeney key qaabil baneyn; aur, hameysah hee us kee or hatheyliyaan na failaaye raheyn! Mein samajhtaa huun, hamain USEY yaad to kartey rahnaa chaahiye; par, har chotee-motee baat key liye (USEY) takleef naheen dee jaanee chaahiye, kyounki, aakhir, tamaam kaayinaat kee nizaamat bhee to USEE key zimmey hai! Mr Shihab, am I wrong ?
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«Reply #24 on: October 23, 2009, 06:59:56 AM »
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Shihaab ji!
Aapkey jo 'wichaar' hain, un kaa 'aadar' kartaa huun; isliye nahin ki mein un sey itteyfaaq kartaa huun, par isliye ki mujhey aapkee dini (yaa diinii) taaleem aur us par aapkee paabandgee pasand aayee! Jo aap ney farmaayaa wah eik mazhabee 'wishwaas' hai, aur apnee jagah durust hai! Mein 'diinii mua'amloun' kee 'wiweychanaaoun' sey bahut hee ziyaadah 'duur' rahtaa huun!
Mazhab meyrey liye eik 'sarwathaa nijee' mua'amalaa hai!
Mein Bhagwaan Shri Krishna key 'nishhkaam karm' mein wishwaas kartaa huun. Yah apnee-apnee 'aashthaa' hai!
Meyrey 'wichaar' sey, Allaamaa Iqbal kaa sher:
"Khudee ko kar buland itnaa, ki, har taqdeer key pahiley,
 Khudaa bandey sey khud poochhey, bataa teyree rizaa kyaa hai!"
'karm' mein is 'aashthaa' sey bhi aagey kee baat kahtaa lagtaa hai! Urdu literature key kisee barhey tabsirahnigaar ko padhh kar deykhiyegaa, ki, wah kyaa kahtaa hai?
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«Reply #25 on: January 25, 2010, 07:46:49 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on January 24, 2010, 08:29:57 PM
Sabse Pahle To Abd Babu Rep Ki Deri Liye Maafi Chahta Hun
Aur Bahut Bahut Shukariya Humare Wichaar Ka Aapne
Aadar Kiya....
Aur Abd Babu Hidayat Dena To Bas Khuda Ke Haath Hai
Main Dua Karunga Aapke Liye....
Aur Rahi Baat Allaamaa Iqbal Sahab K Sher Ki
To Mujhey To Iska Yahi Matlab Samajh Mein Aaya Hai Ji
Aage Khuda Behtar Janta Hai...

Aur Maine Yeh Sab Apni Samajhdari Dikhane K Liye
Nahi Likha Tha Abd Babu..Bas Kya Karun Topic Hi
Aisa Aa Gaya Ki Mujhe Likhna Hi Parha..Khair
Khush Rahiye...Shihab.

Thanks Shihab ji!
Deyree kee koyee baat naheen! Mein khud do-teen maheeney sey aankhoun kaa ilaaj karwaa rahaa thaa: jis sey bahut hee kam 'yo' par aa paataa thaa! Ab US kee Krupaa sey theek-thaak huun!
Aap achchhey insaan hain! WOH (KHUDA PAK) aapko khush rakhey, aabaad rakhey!

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«Reply #26 on: January 25, 2010, 08:56:40 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Abd ji and Shihab ji.bahut achi vichaar aur khoobsurti se likha aap dono ne.excellent. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #27 on: January 25, 2010, 11:48:52 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on January 25, 2010, 07:57:46 AM
Zarra Navazi..Bahut Bahut Shukariya Abd Babu
Yeh Aapki Achhai Hai Jo Mujh Jaise Zahil Ko Bhi
Aap Itni Izzat Baksh Rahe Hain....

Khair Bahut Bahut Shukariya Duao,n Ke Liye
Aapka Tahe Dil Se Mashkur Va Mamnun Hoon

Khush Rahiye Janab..

Shihaab ji! Aur kyaa kahuun?

Surkhroo ho agar eemaan, to, firdous-e-zameen,
Roo-b-roo hai isee duniyaa mein, kaheen ho, ki, na ho!
Tabassumoun mein maan ou' tifl kee laharataa hai
Gul ladaa gulbun-e-beykhaar, kaheen ho, ki, na ho!!

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«Reply #28 on: January 25, 2010, 11:53:07 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on January 25, 2010, 08:56:40 AM
Wah bahut khoob Abd ji and Shihab ji.bahut achi vichaar aur khoobsurti se likha aap dono ne.excellent. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thanks a lot, Madhu!
         
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«Reply #29 on: March 03, 2010, 09:49:12 PM »
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Bahut khoob Abd ji and Shihab ji.lovely creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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