Rimjhim barsati barsaat main:Shayari -e- Husn

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Rimjhim barsati barsaat main
Milane jab bhi tum atte ho
Paani ki yah boondein tum per
Kyun itna sitam mujh per dhate ho

Jhulti hai tumhare balo per
Palko per attak kahi jaati hai
Galo ko tumhare chute hue
Gale se lipati si atti hai

Najar humari behakti hai
Dil ki dhadkan bard jaati hai
Bahoot jalta hai yah man
Boond jab tumahre seene mai chup jaati hai

Tadap kar, Jalta hai yah dil,
boond ban jaane ko man karta hai
barish ki boond ki tarah
tere seene se lipat jaane ko dil karta hai!!


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Re: Rimjhim barsati barsaat main

«Reply #1 on: January 23, 2008, 06:26:00 PM »

kya baat hai pooja, bahut khoob...ek koshish kar raha hoon,is topic par reply karne ki .mushkil hai par dekho,kya hota hai?

Tum ek ada aur dikha kar dekho
humein yuh madhoshi mein
behla kar dekho...

jo ude unke zulf in tufani havayon mein
kya beet thi hai dil mein mere
kya sunau main..

unki nazrein in nazro mein yuh bas jaati hai
kuch ajeeb sa nasha yeh tan-man mein failati hai

un chandni raaton mein jab unke didaar hote hai
hum apna chain,sukoon sab khote hai

woh paani jo unke labo ko chuti hai
woh paani nahi rehti,woh ban jaati anmol moti hai

unhe dekh kar kabhi unn barsaato mein
yeh aankhen jaane kitne sapne piroti hai...


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Pooja

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Re: Rimjhim barsati barsaat main

«Reply #2 on: January 23, 2008, 06:36:55 PM »

wah kaya jawab diya.. bahoot khoob!!!

Dikha de hum ada per yah dil darta hai
Teri natkhut baato per, yah dil marta hai

Zulfein yah jo urdati hai, Tujhko pass bulati hai
Sawar do inko apne hatho se, Yah raag dil mai gaati hai

Najare mil kar jab tumhari najro se jhuk jaati hai
Aa jaao aor pass humare, tumko yah samjhati hai

Barsati raato main, jab tumhare najdik ate hai
Dil main kay halchal hai, yah agan tumhe samjhate hai

Her sapna tera sucha ho, kis kis ada se yah samjhate hai
Magar jante hai hum yah bhi, app jaan bujh anjaan ban jaate hai!!!


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mehhekkk

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Re: Rimjhim barsati barsaat main

«Reply #3 on: January 24, 2008, 01:04:28 PM »

bahut khub

boondon mein khud ko badal kar
tere sine se lag jao mein
kushi bankar sajan
tere galon se lipat jao mein.


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Pooja

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Re: Rimjhim barsati barsaat main

«Reply #4 on: January 24, 2008, 05:19:24 PM »

thanks Mehekkk!!!

Kon kahta hai ki husan Ashiq ko deewana banata hai
Ashiq bhi to husan ko shama bana kar jalata hai

Barsati hai jab yah boondein Ashiq per
Dekhein koi, Mom shama ka kaise pighal jaata hai

Husan ki najar se phir dekhon jo Ashiq ko
Tufaani barsaat mai bhi waqat thehar jaata hai!!!


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Re: Rimjhim barsati barsaat main

«Reply #5 on: January 29, 2008, 12:14:38 PM »

good work pooja ji n khawahish


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Pooja

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Re: Rimjhim barsati barsaat main

«Reply #6 on: February 04, 2008, 07:04:22 PM »

Thanks Sam!!!


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Re: Rimjhim barsati barsaat main

«Reply #7 on: February 04, 2008, 08:56:51 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on January 24, 2008, 05:19:24 PM

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wow really nice pooja dear Usual Smile


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Pooja

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Re: Rimjhim barsati barsaat main

«Reply #8 on: February 04, 2008, 10:46:53 PM »

thanks honey


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Re: Rimjhim barsati barsaat main

«Reply #9 on: February 07, 2008, 05:41:27 PM »

Nice flow of imagination and good construction.. keep it up .. Usual Smile

Khalid Q.


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Pooja

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Re: Rimjhim barsati barsaat main

«Reply #10 on: February 07, 2008, 05:43:52 PM »

Thanks khalidq ji!!! apka yoindia mai sawagat hai!!


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hatimraj

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Re: Rimjhim barsati barsaat main

«Reply #11 on: February 11, 2008, 04:32:09 AM »

A M A Z I N G !!!!!


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Pooja

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Re: Rimjhim barsati barsaat main

«Reply #12 on: February 14, 2008, 06:31:37 PM »

Shukaria!!!!


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diljala

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Re: Rimjhim barsati barsaat main

«Reply #13 on: April 02, 2008, 03:30:28 AM »

Pooja Ji Nice one..
arj hai
"ishq mai.n kabhi jale ki baat na kar pooja
ishq to ishq hai use roshni ki jarurat nahi
ab to ishq ka khumar hi kafi hai jeene ke liye
ishq to khud hi us aag ke jarurat hai...."


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Pooja

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Re: Rimjhim barsati barsaat main

«Reply #14 on: April 09, 2008, 03:06:14 PM »

bahoot khoob kaha diljala ji


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