Rimjhim barsati barsaat main

by Pooja on January 23, 2008, 06:10:46 PM
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«Reply #15 on: May 06, 2008, 08:44:11 PM »
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Pooja Ji Nice one..
arj hai
"ishq mai.n kabhi jale ki baat na kar pooja
 ishq to ishq hai use roshni ki jarurat nahi
 ab to ishq ka khumar hi kafi hai jeene ke liye
 ishq to khud hi us aag ke jarurat hai...."

Ishaq ki agan se anjaan hai tu
barsati boondon ki tapish se anjaan hai tu
Dil dhadakan sunai deti hai ang-ang se
abhi in dhadkano se anjaan hai tu....

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«Reply #16 on: May 30, 2008, 05:28:10 PM »
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A M A Z I N G !!!!!

shukaria hatimraj ji!!
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«Reply #17 on: May 30, 2008, 05:32:48 PM »
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Ishaq ki agan se anjaan hai tu
barsati boondon ki tapish se anjaan hai tu
Dil dhadakan sunai deti hai ang-ang se
abhi in dhadkano se anjaan hai tu....



Bohat touching lines likha hai aapne pooja ji very nice..Usual Smile

Barsati barsaat mein tan mann beege
Jaise koi ruth chaye hai dil mein tan mann beege
Dil ki dhadakane band ho jaise khamoshi se tan mann beege
Barsati barsaat mein tan mann beege
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«Reply #18 on: May 30, 2008, 05:44:45 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai.. bahoot khoob Honey ji!!
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«Reply #19 on: July 11, 2008, 05:51:20 PM »
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Bohat touching lines likha hai aapne pooja ji very nice..Usual Smile

Barsati barsaat mein tan mann beege
Jaise koi ruth chaye hai dil mein tan mann beege
Dil ki dhadakane band ho jaise khamoshi se tan mann beege
Barsati barsaat mein tan mann beege


barsati barsaat ki thundak main jo agan hai
dil bas unhi beete palo main magan hai
aa ja ki, boond boond rahi hai sata
na haane tu kaha ab tak magan hai
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«Reply #20 on: August 05, 2008, 09:31:39 AM »
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kya baat hai har taraf kumaar  hi khumar hai ishq ka..
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«Reply #21 on: August 05, 2008, 03:47:36 PM »
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Rimjhim barsati barsaat main
Milane jab bhi tum atte ho
Paani ki yah boondein tum per
Kyun itna sitam mujh per dhate ho

Jhulti hai tumhare balo per
Palko per attak kahi jaati hai
Galo ko tumhare chute hue
Gale se lipati si atti hai

Najar humari behakti hai
Dil ki dhadkan bard jaati hai
Bahoot jalta hai yah man
Boond jab tumahre seene mai chup jaati hai

Tadap kar, Jalta hai yah dil,
boond ban jaane ko man karta hai
barish ki boond ki tarah
tere seene se lipat jaane ko dil karta hai!!


oye wah ji wah kya baat hai....ishq hai..khumar hai.....barsaat hai......
tadap hai jalan hai....pee milan ka khoob achcha varnan hai......
extraordinary work awesome....lines..pooja ji
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«Reply #22 on: August 05, 2008, 03:49:30 PM »
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Shukaria  notworthy ji shukaria  notworthy

do line app bhi khumar mai gunguna lete tongue3

waise yaha pyar ka nahi husan ka khumar chalta hai Usual Smile
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«Reply #23 on: August 05, 2008, 03:56:10 PM »
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bahut hi umda lines pooja ji
aap ko pad ke humare to words hamesha kam pad jaate hai

always thanx a lot pooja ji



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«Reply #24 on: August 05, 2008, 04:27:46 PM »
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Baadal ji kalam to apki bahoot acha likhti hai.. pata nahi kyun itani kanjoosi kar jaate hai app!!
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«Reply #25 on: August 27, 2008, 08:48:54 AM »
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WOH KHAYAL JISE GUNAAH KEHTE HAIN
AAJ TUMNE USE PAAK KAR DIYA
KABHI BOOND BANKE MILU TUJSE
TERI SHAYRI NE MUJE BEBAAK KAR DIYA.

                            -SG-
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«Reply #26 on: September 26, 2008, 04:25:24 PM »
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Thanks and nice lines Sajid ji!!
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paani
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«Reply #27 on: November 20, 2008, 06:54:39 AM »
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Rimjhim barsati barsaat main
Milane jab bhi tum atte ho
Paani ki yah boondein tum per
Kyun itna sitam mujh per dhate ho

Jhulti hai tumhare balo per
Palko per attak kahi jaati hai
Galo ko tumhare chute hue
Gale se lipati si atti hai

Najar humari behakti hai
Dil ki dhadkan bard jaati hai
Bahoot jalta hai yah man
Boond jab tumahre seene mai chup jaati hai

Tadap kar, Jalta hai yah dil,
boond ban jaane ko man karta hai
barish ki boond ki tarah
tere seene se lipat jaane ko dil karta hai!!


Be-Jod bahut khub barsaat aur aapki feeling.!!!!
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«Reply #28 on: November 20, 2008, 04:29:44 PM »
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Thanks Paani!!
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«Reply #29 on: January 25, 2009, 01:49:08 PM »
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Hmmm...bohot hi acha...
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