Rimjhim barsati barsaat main

by Pooja on January 23, 2008, 06:10:46 PM
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«Reply #30 on: January 25, 2009, 03:15:35 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on January 23, 2008, 06:10:46 PM
Rimjhim barsati barsaat main
Milane jab bhi tum atte ho
Paani ki yah boondein tum per
Kyun itna sitam mujh per dhate ho

Jhulti hai tumhare balo per
Palko per attak kahi jaati hai
Galo ko tumhare chute hue
Gale se lipati si atti hai

Najar humari behakti hai
Dil ki dhadkan bard jaati hai
Bahoot jalta hai yah man
Boond jab tumahre seene mai chup jaati hai

Tadap kar, Jalta hai yah dil,
boond ban jaane ko man karta hai
barish ki boond ki tarah
tere seene se lipat jaane ko dil karta hai!!


ahaa bahut khoob and romantic.... Jiju khush honge padkar..hehe..  tongue3
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«Reply #31 on: January 25, 2009, 03:31:44 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on May 06, 2008, 08:44:11 PM
Ishaq ki agan se anjaan hai tu
barsati boondon ki tapish se anjaan hai tu
Dil dhadakan sunai deti hai ang-ang se
abhi in dhadkano se anjaan hai tu....

Nice lines didi
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«Reply #32 on: February 09, 2009, 03:32:50 PM »
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Waah kya baat hai Pooja
Bahot khoobsoorat jazbaat ko samne rakha hai aapne.

Eik bahot hi khoobsoorat kalaam.

Daad qobool karen
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«Reply #33 on: February 13, 2009, 06:00:17 PM »
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Quote from: afreen_madhu on January 25, 2009, 01:49:08 PM
Hmmm...bohot hi acha...

shukaria Madhu!!
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«Reply #34 on: February 13, 2009, 06:01:05 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on January 25, 2009, 03:31:44 PM
Nice lines didi


Thanks Roja...
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«Reply #35 on: February 13, 2009, 06:01:45 PM »
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Quote from: Naziya Tahera on February 09, 2009, 03:32:50 PM
Waah kya baat hai Pooja
Bahot khoobsoorat jazbaat ko samne rakha hai aapne.

Eik bahot hi khoobsoorat kalaam.

Daad qobool karen

bahoot bahoot shukaria Naziya ji!!
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«Reply #36 on: February 13, 2009, 06:42:14 PM »
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Is kavita main “na” shabd do tarah se use kiya gaya hai.. ek na ka matlab nahi hai aor doosra line ko ek sur main likhne ke liye use kiya gaya hai!!!

mehak rahi hai yah fiza, barsati boondo, tufaan uthao na
Mil kar abhi to hue hai juda, milan ki tadap phir se jagao na

khayalo main unko lakar, is kadar dil  mera jalao na
pehlu main lakar, baitha do unko, Phir barsate he jao na

Gungunaye wo bhi mere sung, kuch is kadar mahol banao na
Ahssas ho jo unko is agan ka, aise zajbaat un main bhi jagao na

mehak rahi hai yah fiza, barsati boondo, tufaan uthao na
Mil kar abhi to hue hai juda, milan ki tadap phir se jagao na
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«Reply #37 on: February 13, 2009, 07:37:21 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on January 23, 2008, 06:10:46 PM
Rimjhim barsati barsaat main
Milane jab bhi tum atte ho
Paani ki yah boondein tum per
Kyun itna sitam mujh per dhate ho

Jhulti hai tumhare balo per
Palko per attak kahi jaati hai
Galo ko tumhare chute hue
Gale se lipati si atti hai

Najar humari behakti hai
Dil ki dhadkan bard jaati hai
Bahoot jalta hai yah man
Boond jab tumahre seene mai chup jaati hai

Tadap kar, Jalta hai yah dil,
boond ban jaane ko man karta hai
barish ki boond ki tarah
tere seene se lipat jaane ko dil karta hai!!

Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping SmileyVery Nice Poojaji
Ek Ek Line Bahoot Khoob Likhi Hai Aapne
kuch likhne ke liye mere pas vo labz nahi aa rahe hain jo is post ki jarurat ko puri kare

fir bhi koshish kar raha hun


Rimjhim barsati barsat me
Dekha ek hath maine apne hath me...

Thamna jab chaha use dil ke har jasbaat me,
Sharma gayi vo baat hi baat me....

Muskura raha tha dur khada uska chehra shararat me,
Jaisae kah raha ho, aao jee bhar ke bheege aaj is mithi barsat me...

~Pank~
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«Reply #38 on: February 13, 2009, 08:05:54 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 13, 2009, 06:42:14 PM
Is kavita main “na” shabd do tarah se use kiya gaya hai.. ek na ka matlab nahi hai aor doosra line ko ek sur main likhne ke liye use kiya gaya hai!!!

mehak rahi hai yah fiza, barsati boondo, tufaan uthao na
Mil kar abhi to hue hai juda, milan ki tadap phir se jagao na

khayalo main unko lakar, is kadar dil  mera jalao na
pehlu main lakar, baitha do unko, Phir barsate he jao na

Gungunaye wo bhi mere sung, kuch is kadar mahol banao na
Ahssas ho jo unko is agan ka, aise zajbaat un main bhi jagao na

mehak rahi hai yah fiza, barsati boondo, tufaan uthao na
Mil kar abhi to hue hai juda, milan ki tadap phir se jagao na

Bahoot Khoob Poojaji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #39 on: February 13, 2009, 08:12:12 PM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on February 13, 2009, 07:37:21 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping SmileyVery Nice Poojaji
Ek Ek Line Bahoot Khoob Likhi Hai Aapne
kuch likhne ke liye mere pas vo labz nahi aa rahe hain jo is post ki jarurat ko puri kare

fir bhi koshish kar raha hun


Rimjhim barsati barsat me
Dekha ek hath maine apne hath me...

Thamna jab chaha use dil ke har jasbaat me,
Sharma gayi vo baat hi baat me....

Muskura raha tha dur khada uska chehra shararat me,
Jaisae kah raha ho, aao jee bhar ke bheege aaj is mithi barsat me...

~Pank~

wah wah wah kaya baat hai Pank ji!!! wah!!!
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«Reply #40 on: February 13, 2009, 08:14:46 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 13, 2009, 08:12:12 PM
wah wah wah kaya baat hai Pank ji!!! wah!!!
Shukriya Poojaji Usual Smile
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«Reply #41 on: April 27, 2009, 03:43:33 PM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on February 13, 2009, 08:05:54 PM
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Thanks Pank ji
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«Reply #42 on: May 07, 2009, 09:57:44 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on January 23, 2008, 06:10:46 PM
Rimjhim barsati barsaat main
Milane jab bhi tum atte ho
Paani ki yah boondein tum per
Kyun itna sitam mujh per dhate ho

Jhulti hai tumhare balo per
Palko per attak kahi jaati hai
Galo ko tumhare chute hue
Gale se lipati si atti hai

Najar humari behakti hai
Dil ki dhadkan bard jaati hai
Bahoot jalta hai yah man
Boond jab tumahre seene mai chup jaati hai

Tadap kar, Jalta hai yah dil,
boond ban jaane ko man karta hai
barish ki boond ki tarah
tere seene se lipat jaane ko dil karta hai!!

Pooja bahot hi achhi ghazal hai.boond ban janeko man karta hai..wah...wah happy3
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«Reply #43 on: May 08, 2009, 12:44:01 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Pooja and Panks
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«Reply #44 on: July 07, 2009, 10:28:50 PM »
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Quote from: sapana on May 07, 2009, 09:57:44 PM
Pooja bahot hi achhi ghazal hai.boond ban janeko man karta hai..wah...wah happy3

Thanks you so much Sapana ji!!
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