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«Reply #45 on: July 07, 2009, 10:30:22 PM » |
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Waah Pooja ji kya khoob likha hai..kai din se aapka naya kalaam nai aaya..kuch naye readers athart hamari bhi sunie..ye tarana to gungane jaisa..behad dikash hamesha ki tarah..
Shukaria Kaash ji!! barsaan ki boondo ka soche to tarana apne app shabd ban kar gunguna uthta hai!! apko acha laga, dil ko bahoot khushi mili!! |
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«Reply #46 on: July 07, 2009, 10:30:40 PM » |
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Bohot Khoob Pooja and Panks
Thanks Celmira ji!! |
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«Reply #47 on: July 13, 2009, 08:00:35 PM » |
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yr welcome Pooja ji
Barsaat ki boonden bhi kya kya kah aur kar jaati hain
baraste baadlon se bhi jaise jhoomne ki hi awaaz aati hai
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«Reply #48 on: August 31, 2009, 02:16:22 AM » |
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yr welcome Pooja ji
Barsaat ki boonden bhi kya kya kah aur kar jaati hain
baraste baadlon se bhi jaise jhoomne ki hi awaaz aati hai
barsaat ki boondein sajan ka naam bulati hai sunte nahi jab wo, ankhia baras jaati hai |
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«Reply #49 on: September 20, 2009, 04:41:39 AM » |
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Poojaa jee:
namaste!!
aapki ees pyaar bharii kavviSh paRhii.. pyaar bhare jaZbaatoN ko ba-Khoobee se lafzoN meiN piroyaa hai aapne! daad hi daad!
KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal rakheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~ Dhaval
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«Reply #50 on: September 20, 2009, 05:08:53 AM » |
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Poojaa jee:
namaste!!
aapki ees pyaar bharii kavviSh paRhii.. pyaar bhare jaZbaatoN ko ba-Khoobee se lafzoN meiN piroyaa hai aapne! daad hi daad!
KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal rakheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
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~ Dhaval
 Dhaval ji.... app bhi kuch likhte acha lagta... |
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«Reply #52 on: September 20, 2009, 06:13:17 AM » |
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«Reply #53 on: September 20, 2009, 01:37:24 PM » |
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nice work pooja ji and khwahish ji
boonde zamee par giri to tut kar bikhar jayengi,
jo tumse lipat gayi to chaandni ban jayengi.
koshish ki par aage kuch ban nahi paa raha...
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«Reply #54 on: September 21, 2009, 09:53:48 AM » |
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ShuKriyaa'h madhuwesh jee
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«Reply #55 on: September 22, 2009, 09:33:34 PM » |
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Poojaa jee:
namaste!
aapne hukm farmaayaa! tou maiN haaZir ho gayaa apne kuch ehsaaSoN ko liye! jo aapki ees koShiSh ko paRhne ke baad dil meiN aayeN! apne ehsaaSoN ko joRne ki gustaaKhi kar rahaa huuN!
mujhe aaj bhee yaad hai
wo pehlii mulaaQaat!
jo uNse hu'ii thii
DhaRkaneN jaise ruk sii ga'ii thi
saaNse jaise merii Tham sii ga'ii thii
wo uNkaa Jhuki naZroN se mujhko deKhnaa
uNkii wo pyaarii si haNSii
dil pe itnaa gehraa asar kar ga'ii!
ki uNki har adaa dil meiN Ghar kar ga'ii!
haaN mujhe yaad hai aaj bhee!
wo pehli mulaaQaat uNse..!
KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~ Dhaval
wow kaya baat hai lil bro.... bahoot bahoot khoob!! |
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«Reply #56 on: November 02, 2009, 05:45:16 PM » |
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bohat khubsurat andaz ma baya kya ap ne
mujhe os sy kitni mohabat h
barish kihar bond batati h
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«Reply #57 on: November 03, 2009, 05:21:09 AM » |
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Is barsaat me bhing jane ko dil chahta hai Banke Badal khud unpe baras jane ko dil chata hai Sayar to bahut aye aour Gaye Pooja ji hame to khud ek Gazal ban jane ko dil chahta hai  |
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«Reply #58 on: November 19, 2009, 05:46:16 PM » |
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Is barsaat me bhing jane ko dil chahta hai Banke Badal khud unpe baras jane ko dil chata hai Sayar to bahut aye aour Gaye Pooja ji hame to khud ek Gazal ban jane ko dil chahta hai BAN JAAO GAZAL AOR APKE CHAHNE WALE LUBO PER SAJA LE TUMKO HER LAFZ MAI SE BARSE PYAR KI BOOND, IS KADR RIJHA LE TUMKO Jo ma n mai ayya likh diya... hope apko pasand ayega.. |
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«Reply #59 on: November 26, 2009, 07:08:32 AM » |
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yoidia pe tere saath ko tarasta hun
bhige the hum-tum, us barsaat ko tarsta hun
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on eTI community..
