Ruk jaati hai sansein

by Ssaagar on October 10, 2013, 12:15:33 AM
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Ruk jaati hain mery yei saansein bin tere,
kya tera bhi haal mere dil saa hotaa hai!

Tere husn ki tareef karun lafz nahi milte,
kya har ashiq par asar mohabbat ma aisa hota hai!

Saagar...  "A deep frozen ocean"
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«Reply #1 on: October 10, 2013, 12:50:10 AM »
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Bahot khoob farmaya hai aapne... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: October 10, 2013, 12:51:25 AM »
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Ek rau meri taraf se for ur nicee and sweet lines..
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«Reply #3 on: October 10, 2013, 01:08:20 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #4 on: October 10, 2013, 01:11:09 AM »
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waahh bohat khoob,........bohat c daad
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«Reply #5 on: October 10, 2013, 01:12:04 AM »
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Ruk jaati hain mery yei sansein bin tere,
kya tera bhi  haal mere dil saa hotaa hai!
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Umda.!!
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«Reply #6 on: October 10, 2013, 01:24:18 AM »
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sabhi doston ke pyar aur unki mohabbat ko meraa salam!!
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«Reply #7 on: October 10, 2013, 01:31:36 AM »
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Quote from: laaiba on October 10, 2013, 01:11:09 AM
waahh bohat khoob,........bohat c daad

shukriya aapka saahil bhaijan
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«Reply #8 on: October 10, 2013, 02:31:12 AM »
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Quote from: Ssaagar on October 10, 2013, 12:15:33 AM
Ruk jaati hain mery yei saansein bin tere,
kya tera bhi haal mere dil saa hotaa hai!
ye to pata nahin icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
Tere husn ki tareef karun lafz nahi milte,
kya har ashiq par asar mohabbat ma aisa hota hai!
shayad icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
Saagar...  "A deep frozen ocean" is it near ANTARTICA Usual Smile Usual Smile


VERY GOOD JI icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #9 on: October 10, 2013, 02:51:05 AM »
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bahut khoob saagar ji
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«Reply #10 on: October 10, 2013, 03:00:34 AM »
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WaaH WaaH Bahut Khoob
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«Reply #11 on: October 10, 2013, 04:28:16 AM »
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«Reply #12 on: October 10, 2013, 09:06:50 AM »
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very good
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«Reply #13 on: October 10, 2013, 02:31:06 PM »
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niceeeeeeeee.....
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«Reply #14 on: October 10, 2013, 09:25:30 PM »
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Quote from: ahilya on October 10, 2013, 02:51:05 AM
bahut khoob saagar ji

shukriyaa ahilya ji.
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