SKIN DEEP:Shayari -e- Husn

tamanna1

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I saw her walking past by chance
Saw everyone giving her a secret glance

I noticed her slim and tall
Dressed like a pretty barbie doll

She had a very very classy gait
Which was indeed a very pretty sight

Her jet black tresses, I noticed spilling on her face
Covering her softness without a trace

Entering college, I saw her there
All students around her with a bare stare

I managed to get past and mumble a 'Hi'
She turned her face and walked without a reply

I wondered how her words actually felt
Wanted to meet people who she had earlier dealt

The feedback that came shocked me more
The stories I heard was with more uproar

Rude she was, with meanness in her word
The language she used, was sharper than a sword

Looking in the mirror later in the day
I came to realise what everyone always say

Beauty is not what we see outside
It is what the soul is made of inside

Beauty is skin deep as we all know
A person with good manners,character and humbleness
is what will ultimately show


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mkv

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Re: SKIN DEEP

«Reply #1 on: December 15, 2011, 03:35:43 PM »

Beautiful...
after reading..suddenly a question appeared in my mind.
how do i look like..i don't know ?..Mirror is not the solution.


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tamanna1

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Re: SKIN DEEP

«Reply #2 on: December 15, 2011, 05:37:39 PM »

thanks mkv..

def mirror is not the solution..it is a focus point....thats all...after that incident..needed to focus on what one sees in the mirror and what one really is..


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Abul Asad

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Re: SKIN DEEP

«Reply #3 on: December 16, 2011, 08:03:18 AM »

Tamanna ji,

Beautifully worded, nice language, good style of writing
a nice message. Keep it coming i say. An encore.

For people to see the heart inside
Look past the exterior shine.

But for the mercy of God on my side
I would be her walking by your side

Again, bravo, well done. Applause

Humbly your's

Abul Asad


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tamanna1

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Re: SKIN DEEP

«Reply #4 on: December 16, 2011, 02:05:34 PM »

Thanks Abul ji for the kind words. Usual Smile


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deepika_divya

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Re: SKIN DEEP

«Reply #5 on: December 16, 2011, 03:22:22 PM »

beautiful poetry.. and very well expressed..

lots of claps for you


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tamanna1

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Re: SKIN DEEP

«Reply #6 on: December 16, 2011, 03:46:10 PM »

thanks sophi. Usual Smile

means a lot


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