Suraj dooba shaam huii

by Qais on September 19, 2011, 06:14:50 AM
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Suraj  dooba  shaam  huii
dhoop  ki  zid  nakaam  huii

Waada  kar  ke  woh  naa  aa'ay
raat  nazr e jaam   huii

Karna  chaaha  deedaar  tera
har  koshish  nakaam  huii

kal tak  sab  thha  apne  beech
ab  khabar  saari  aam huii

gali  main  ghoomen  din bhar  aashiq
Munni  yoon  badnaam  huii

Qais  ghoome  sahra  sahra
subah  ka  nikla  shaam  huii
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«Reply #1 on: September 19, 2011, 06:35:37 AM »
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Quote from: Qais on September 19, 2011, 06:14:50 AM
Suraj  dooba  shaam  huii
dhoop  ki  zid  nakaam  huii

Waada  kar  ke  woh  naa  aa'ay
raat  nazr e jaam   huii

Karna  chaaha  deedaar  tera
har  koshish  nakaam  huii

kal tak  sab  thha  apne  beech
ab  khabar  saari  aam huii

gali  main  ghoomen  din bhar  aashiq
Munni  yoon  badnaam  huii

Qais  ghoome  sahra  sahra
subah  ka  nikla  shaam  huii


waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah qais sahab kyaa khoob likha hai Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: September 19, 2011, 07:03:23 AM »
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gooood one.
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«Reply #3 on: September 19, 2011, 07:08:42 AM »
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QAIS JI....fantastic  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: September 19, 2011, 08:29:57 AM »
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adil bechain  sahab,adaab.janaab aap ne meri himmat barhaai aapka bayhad shukriya.
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«Reply #5 on: September 19, 2011, 08:33:38 AM »
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sangwanji,thank you very muchfor liking poem.
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«Reply #6 on: September 19, 2011, 08:37:32 AM »
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tamanna1 ji,Thank you very much for encouragement.
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«Reply #7 on: September 19, 2011, 09:27:11 AM »
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Qais Ji Bahut Bahut Khoob
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«Reply #8 on: September 19, 2011, 09:28:52 AM »
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Quote from: Qais on September 19, 2011, 06:14:50 AM
Suraj  dooba  shaam  huii
dhoop  ki  zid  nakaam  huii

Waada  kar  ke  woh  naa  aa'ay
raat  nazr e jaam   huii

Karna  chaaha  deedaar  tera
har  koshish  nakaam  huii

kal tak  sab  thha  apne  beech
ab  khabar  saari  aam huii

gali  main  ghoomen  din bhar  aashiq
Munni  yoon  badnaam  huii

Qais  ghoome  sahra  sahra
subah  ka  nikla  shaam  huii


 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #9 on: September 19, 2011, 10:52:48 AM »
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Qais ji.koobsurat kalaam ke liye daad pesh hai.Likhte rahiye.HASAN
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«Reply #10 on: September 19, 2011, 11:01:20 AM »
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Aadaab Janab Qais Sahaab !

Bahut khoob kalaam pesh ki hai janab...
Kam lafzoN meiN behad pur asar ashaar kaheN hai
aapne... Waah bahut khoob.

HUmari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye... Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile         


Quote from: Qais on September 19, 2011, 06:14:50 AM
Suraj  dooba  shaam  huii
dhoop  ki  zid  nakaam  huii

Waada  kar  ke  woh  naa  aa'ay
raat  nazr e jaam   huii

Kia baat hai bahut khoob daad..         

Karna  chaaha  deedaar  tera
har  koshish  nakaam  huii

kal tak  sab  thha  apne  beech
ab  khabar  saari  aam huii

Achcha hai janab daad..         

gali  main  ghoomen  din bhar  aashiq
Munni  yoon  badnaam  huii

Ha ha ha hah kia baat hai janab bahut umdaa.. Usual Smile         

Qais  ghoome  sahra  sahra
subah  ka  nikla  shaam  huii
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«Reply #11 on: September 19, 2011, 03:33:12 PM »
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sanjeev kash ji,aapka shukraguzar hoon.
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«Reply #12 on: September 19, 2011, 03:35:29 PM »
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qalb sahab,aapki clapping se bahut hausla mila.shukria.
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«Reply #13 on: September 19, 2011, 03:42:21 PM »
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parwaaz sahab,bahut shukriya.Aap ki shaayari ki taalem bhi haasil kar raha hoon.Aapki guidance milti rahe,yeh request hai.
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«Reply #14 on: September 19, 2011, 03:48:22 PM »
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FHSiddiqi sahab,Aapne hausla afzai ki.bahut shukria.apni raaye se hamaari rahnumaaai karte rahiye ga.
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