Suraj dooba shaam huii:Shayari -e- Husn

Qais

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Suraj dooba shaam huii
dhoop ki zid nakaam huii

Waada kar ke woh naa aa'ay
raat nazr e jaam huii

Karna chaaha deedaar tera
har koshish nakaam huii

kal tak sab thha apne beech
ab khabar saari aam huii

gali main ghoomen din bhar aashiq
Munni yoon badnaam huii

Qais ghoome sahra sahra
subah ka nikla shaam huii


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Re: Suraj dooba shaam huii

«Reply #1 on: September 19, 2011, 06:35:37 AM »

Quote from: Qais on September 19, 2011, 06:14:50 AM

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah qais sahab kyaa khoob likha hai Applause


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SURESH SANGWAN

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Re: Suraj dooba shaam huii

«Reply #2 on: September 19, 2011, 07:03:23 AM »

gooood one.
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tamanna1

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Re: Suraj dooba shaam huii

«Reply #3 on: September 19, 2011, 07:08:42 AM »

QAIS JI....fantastic Applause


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Qais

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Re: Suraj dooba shaam huii

«Reply #4 on: September 19, 2011, 08:29:57 AM »

adil bechain sahab,adaab.janaab aap ne meri himmat barhaai aapka bayhad shukriya.


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Qais

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Re: Suraj dooba shaam huii

«Reply #5 on: September 19, 2011, 08:33:38 AM »

sangwanji,thank you very muchfor liking poem.


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Qais

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Re: Suraj dooba shaam huii

«Reply #6 on: September 19, 2011, 08:37:32 AM »

tamanna1 ji,Thank you very much for encouragement.


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Sanjeev kash

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Re: Suraj dooba shaam huii

«Reply #7 on: September 19, 2011, 09:27:11 AM »

Qais Ji Bahut Bahut Khoob


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khujli

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Re: Suraj dooba shaam huii

«Reply #8 on: September 19, 2011, 09:28:52 AM »

Quote from: Qais on September 19, 2011, 06:14:50 AM


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F.H.SIDDIQUI

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Re: Suraj dooba shaam huii

«Reply #9 on: September 19, 2011, 10:52:48 AM »

Qais ji.koobsurat kalaam ke liye daad pesh hai.Likhte rahiye.HASAN


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ParwaaZ

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Re: Suraj dooba shaam huii

«Reply #10 on: September 19, 2011, 11:01:20 AM »

Aadaab Janab Qais Sahaab !

Bahut khoob kalaam pesh ki hai janab...
Kam lafzoN meiN behad pur asar ashaar kaheN hai
aapne... Waah bahut khoob.

HUmari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye... Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez..

Quote from: Qais on September 19, 2011, 06:14:50 AM

Suraj dooba shaam huii
dhoop ki zid nakaam huii

Waada kar ke woh naa aa'ay
raat nazr e jaam huii

Kia baat hai bahut khoob daad..

Karna chaaha deedaar tera
har koshish nakaam huii

kal tak sab thha apne beech
ab khabar saari aam huii

Achcha hai janab daad..

gali main ghoomen din bhar aashiq
Munni yoon badnaam huii

Ha ha ha hah kia baat hai janab bahut umdaa..

Qais ghoome sahra sahra
subah ka nikla shaam huii


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Qais

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Re: Suraj dooba shaam huii

«Reply #11 on: September 19, 2011, 03:33:12 PM »

sanjeev kash ji,aapka shukraguzar hoon.


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Qais

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Re: Suraj dooba shaam huii

«Reply #12 on: September 19, 2011, 03:35:29 PM »

qalb sahab,aapki clapping se bahut hausla mila.shukria.


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Qais

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Re: Suraj dooba shaam huii

«Reply #13 on: September 19, 2011, 03:42:21 PM »

parwaaz sahab,bahut shukriya.Aap ki shaayari ki taalem bhi haasil kar raha hoon.Aapki guidance milti rahe,yeh request hai.


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Qais

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Re: Suraj dooba shaam huii

«Reply #14 on: September 19, 2011, 03:48:22 PM »

FHSiddiqi sahab,Aapne hausla afzai ki.bahut shukria.apni raaye se hamaari rahnumaaai karte rahiye ga.


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