Taish- tamannaon ne kab sach se VAASTA rakha hai...!!

by ghayal_shayar on May 23, 2013, 04:53:06 AM
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Ye mere dil ke bahut kareeb ki rachna hai, to aap sabke satah share kar raha huN, ise ghazal to nahiN kahuNga, kyuNki be'bah'r hai, par tab mujhe beh'r i samajh bhi kahaaN thi, umeed karta hun aap sabko pasand aayegi...

Maut v humesha rahi bewafa, zindagi ki tarah,, logoN ne nibhaai dosti humse, dushmani ki tarah,, khoob dard dekhe humne v yahaaN,, par na dekha dariya-e-dard koi, aashiqui ki tarah,, dardoN neb hi hume kabhi na apnaaya,, rahe wo paraaye humesha, kisi khushi ki tarah,, maut neb hi ki bewafai mujhse zindagi ki tarah…………….!!!



Hazaaron tamannaoN ko dil me dabaa rakha hai,
Bas ik teri chaahat hai par tujhse hi chipaa rakha hai…!

Lahoo saara dariya-e-ashq me bahaa rakha hai,
Bas ik qatra teri maaNg ki khatir bacha rakha hai…!

Is aainah-e-chasm me jo koi shikan na dikhe use,
To apni in palkoN ke pardoN ko giraa rakha hai...!

Teri khusboo se mehakti hai hawa to jeete haiN,
Nai to kambakht saNsoN me kya mazaa rakha hai…!

Har waqt unko humse ye ajeeb shikayat rehti hai,
Ki unko is dil me humne kitna tanhaa rakha hai…!

Sach se haiN waakif, ki tu kabhi humari na hogi,
Par tamannaoN ne kab sach se vaastaa rakha hai…!

Koi nahi mukhatib ab is bazm-e-mehfil men humse,
Jo sabko apna naam humne “taish”bataa rakha hai.
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«Reply #1 on: May 23, 2013, 05:01:11 AM »
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Awesome ............
 
"Teri khusboo se mehakti hai hawa to jeete haiN, Nai to kambakht saNsoN me kya mazaa rakha hai…!     " very xpressive & touching lines

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«Reply #2 on: May 23, 2013, 09:51:33 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB..!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: May 23, 2013, 10:57:01 AM »
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wooooooooow. Kya ehsaas hai taishji. Bahut gehre khayalath se saji hai aapki ghazal. Ekdam dil ko choo gayi. Dilse mubarakbad qubool kare.
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«Reply #5 on: May 23, 2013, 12:29:52 PM »
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waah waaah dil khush ho gayaa
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«Reply #6 on: May 23, 2013, 01:18:52 PM »
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Quote from: Taish on May 23, 2013, 04:53:06 AM
Ye mere dil ke bahut kareeb ki rachna hai, to aap sabke satah share kar raha huN, ise ghazal to nahiN kahuNga, kyuNki be'bah'r hai, par tab mujhe beh'r i samajh bhi kahaaN thi, umeed karta hun aap sabko pasand aayegi...

Maut v humesha rahi bewafa, zindagi ki tarah,, logoN ne nibhaai dosti humse, dushmani ki tarah,, khoob dard dekhe humne v yahaaN,, par na dekha dariya-e-dard koi, aashiqui ki tarah,, dardoN neb hi hume kabhi na apnaaya,, rahe wo paraaye humesha, kisi khushi ki tarah,, maut neb hi ki bewafai mujhse zindagi ki tarah…………….!!!

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Hazaaron tamannaoN ko dil me dabaa rakha hai,
Bas ik teri chaahat hai par tujhse hi chipaa rakha hai…!
 Applause Applause
Lahoo saara dariya-e-ashq me bahaa rakha hai,
Bas ik qatra teri maaNg ki khatir bacha rakha hai…!
 Applause Applause

ye line to dil me ghar kar gayi..

Is aainah-e-chasm me jo koi shikan na dikhe use,
To apni in palkoN ke pardoN ko giraa rakha hai...!
 Applause Applause
Teri khusboo se mehakti hai hawa to jeete haiN,
Nai to kambakht saNsoN me kya mazaa rakha hai…!
 Applause Applause
Har waqt unko humse ye ajeeb shikayat rehti hai,
Ki unko is dil me humne kitna tanhaa rakha hai…!
 Applause Applause
Sach se haiN waakif, ki tu kabhi humari na hogi,
Par tamannaoN ne kab sach se vaastaa rakha hai…!
 Applause Applause
Koi nahi mukhatib ab is bazm-e-mehfil men humse,
Jo sabko apna naam humne “taish”bataa rakha hai.
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Kya kehne Taish ji.... sare sher ek ek karke dil me utarte gaye... masha allah itni khubsurati se ki gayi peshkash... ek rau to banta hai.. mubatak ho..
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«Reply #7 on: May 23, 2013, 01:31:23 PM »
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waah waah lajawaab taish sahab bohut umda likha hai
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«Reply #8 on: May 23, 2013, 03:57:17 PM »
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Quote from: Bhupinder Kaur on May 23, 2013, 05:01:11 AM
Awesome ............
 
"Teri khusboo se mehakti hai hawa to jeete haiN, Nai to kambakht saNsoN me kya mazaa rakha hai…!     " very xpressive & touching lines

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bhupinder hi bahut bahut shukriya is tareef ka, ye jaan kar behad khushi hui ki aapko jazbaat pasand aaye, umeed karta huN ki aage bhi hume aapka saath yuNhi milta rahegaaa...
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Quote from: Miru;;;; on May 23, 2013, 09:51:33 AM
BAHUT KHOOB..!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

miru ji pasand karne ka bahut bahut shukriya, bas aage bhi aap yuNhi hausla afzaayi karte raheN...
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Taish Sahaab Aadaab..!


Kya baat hai Taish Sahaab badi achchi kalaam hai waqai ise aaj bhi padhkar bada achcha laga... Usual Smile

Mere khayaal se kuch 3 saal purani hai aapki yeH kalaam ?
Par ahsaas O khayaal behad gazab ke haiN janab aik dum laa jawaab... Usual Smile

Is khoobsurat kalaam par humari phir se hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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Waah waah bahut hi khoob Bhushan jee, shru ke donoN she'r aur 4th she'r to kamaal ke rahe.
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Har waqt unko humse ye ajeeb shikayat rehti hai,
Ki unko is dil me humne kitna tanhaa rakha hai…!
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Sach se haiN waakif, ki tu kabhi humari na hogi,
Par tamannaoN ne kab sach se vaastaa rakha hai…!

Koi nahi mukhatib ab is bazm-e-mehfil men humse,
Jo sabko apna naam humne “taish”bataa rakha hai.

Ye ehsaas khoob hai..
bahut badhiya Taish jee
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on May 23, 2013, 10:57:01 AM
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sudhir saaheb pasand karne ka bahut bahut shukiya, umeed karta hun aapke ye saath aage v yuNhi zaari rahegaa...
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