Teri Nasheeli Aankhen....... Abul Asad

by Abul Asad on February 08, 2012, 11:44:27 AM
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Dooba nashe men dekhi jo teri aankhen
Hosh mere kitne udati hai teri aankhen
 

Hont hain jaise rangon se dhule hovay hain
Gul bhi sharmaye, ye rang ko dekhe hovay
 

Parwane-o chiraag kabse hain muntazir tere
Muskuraday ab ke raushni se nisbat unhe bhi hai
 

Kitne jawaan husn malte rahe hath apne
Jalwa jab bhi afroze meri jaan tum hovi hain
 

Voh sang-e mar mar se tarasha badan tera
Har naazuk bal-o modh par jiski nikle aah dil se
 

Khushbo se mehkta ang tera har saans bhare
Gulshan men ho jaise bad-e saba kanhi chale
 

Pass aao mere ye zulfon me chupa lo mujhe
Kuch andheron se muhabbat hovi hai mujhe
Abul Asad
 

Meanings of difficult words:

 Gul: Flower
 
Jalwa Faroz: To Apear

San-e mar mar: white marble
 
Bal-o modh: The curves and dips
 
Muntazir: Await, waiting
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«Reply #1 on: February 08, 2012, 11:53:51 AM »
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Bahut acche
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«Reply #2 on: February 08, 2012, 11:57:31 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: February 08, 2012, 11:57:58 AM »
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Bahut acche


Kohinoor ji,

Aap se pehlibaar mukhatib hove hain aur ham kalaam bhi
Shukriya aapka, aapki daad ka
Umeed hai aapse guftugu-e sukhanwari jari rahegi

Abul Asad
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«Reply #4 on: February 08, 2012, 11:58:34 AM »
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Applause Applause

Shukriya Dr Sahab,

Bahut inayat saheb
Abul Asad
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«Reply #5 on: February 08, 2012, 04:15:38 PM »
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Asad ji
Good efforts..appreciable..
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likhte rahiye..khayaalo ki aapke paas koi kami nahi.
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«Reply #6 on: February 08, 2012, 04:23:22 PM »
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boht ache janab
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«Reply #7 on: February 08, 2012, 04:58:20 PM »
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aapne inn sabdon se hi tasveer bana di uss janesheen ki...
daad daad aapko
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«Reply #8 on: February 09, 2012, 12:09:57 AM »
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this is really good....nicely written.
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«Reply #9 on: February 09, 2012, 03:42:54 AM »
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bahut pyara kalaam abul sahab--
husn ki tareef me isse jada koi kya likhe bhai Usual Smile
daad kubul karie janaab
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yun hi likhte rahie Usual Smile
aapki kalaamo ke andaaz hi juda hain Usual Smile
baht khoob

khus rahie
muskurate rahie
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«Reply #10 on: February 14, 2012, 03:53:18 AM »
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Asad ji
Good efforts..appreciable..
Applause Applause
likhte rahiye..khayaalo ki aapke paas koi kami nahi.

Shukriya Janaab,

Aapka behad shukriya
Abul Asad
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«Reply #11 on: February 15, 2012, 09:13:40 AM »
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Dooba nashe men dekhi jo teri aankhen
Hosh mere kitne udati hai teri aankhen
 

Hont hain jaise rangon se dhule hovay hain
Gul bhi sharmaye, ye rang ko dekhe hovay
 

Parwane-o chiraag kabse hain muntazir tere
Muskuraday ab ke raushni se nisbat unhe bhi hai
 

Kitne jawaan husn malte rahe hath apne
Jalwa jab bhi afroze meri jaan tum hovi hain
 

Voh sang-e mar mar se tarasha badan tera
Har naazuk bal-o modh par jiski nikle aah dil se
 

Khushbo se mehkta ang tera har saans bhare
Gulshan men ho jaise bad-e saba kanhi chale
 

Pass aao mere ye zulfon me chupa lo mujhe
Kuch andheron se muhabbat hovi hai mujhe
Abul Asad
 

Meanings of difficult words:

 Gul: Flower
 
Jalwa Faroz: To Apear

San-e mar mar: white marble
 
Bal-o modh: The curves and dips
 
Muntazir: Await, waiting


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