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by bekarar on October 24, 2010, 05:48:28 PM
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Alfazon me bayan khoobsurti ko kiya jaaye kaise,
ho bemisal husn to kalam ruk bhi jaye kaise

Ye kambakhat hai khud ki hadon se bekhabar
Dil-e-nadan ko iski sarhaden batlayen kaise,

Hai asman ke chand par sabhi ka ikhtiyaar,
Par tum chand ho jami ka ise samjhaye kaise

Karen ishq pahle ya fir Karen rotiyo ka jugad,
In bemurrvat uljhano ko, suljhayen kaise



अल्फाज़ों मे बयान खूबसूरती को किया जाए कैसे,
हो बेमिसाल हुस्न तो कलम रुक भी जाए कैसे

ये कम्बख़त है खुद की हदों से बेख़बर
दिल-ए-नादान को इसकी सरहदें बतलाएँ कैसे,

है आसमान के चाँद पर सभी का इख्तियार,
पर तुम चाँद हो जमी का इसे समझाए कैसे

करें इश्क़ पहले या फिर करें रोटियो का जुगाड़,
इन बेमुररव्ात उलझानो को, सुलझाएँ कैसे

हुआ गुम मेरा वज़ूद, तलबगारों की भीड़ मे
मुझ तक तेरी निगाह भी अब आए कैसे,

तेरे बगैर हासिल हर इक शै है बेमाज़ा
समंदर की भला प्यास कहो बुझाए कैसे,
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«Reply #1 on: October 24, 2010, 05:53:42 PM »
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wahhh wahhh wahhhh ji wahhh...kya mast kaha hai aapne bekaraar ji...sahi mane me apki bekarari jhalak rahi hai aapki nazm me...mastam likha hai aapne apne jazbaton me aati uljhani ko..khub tarah se piroya hai shabdon ko......
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«Reply #2 on: October 24, 2010, 11:01:42 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: October 25, 2010, 04:48:35 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 24, 2010, 05:53:42 PM
wahhh wahhh wahhhh ji wahhh...kya mast kaha hai aapne bekaraar ji...sahi mane me apki bekarari jhalak rahi hai aapki nazm me...mastam likha hai aapne apne jazbaton me aati uljhani ko..khub tarah se piroya hai shabdon ko......
bahoot bahoot shukriya KDK ji..aapko pasand aaya mera pryaas  Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: October 25, 2010, 04:49:46 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 24, 2010, 11:01:42 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
shukriya hriday ji aapki sarahna ke liye
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«Reply #5 on: October 29, 2010, 04:18:14 AM »
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Hua gum mera vazood, talabgaaron ki bheed me
mujh tak teri nigaah bhi ab aaye kaise,

tere bagair hasil har ik shai hai bemaja
samandar ki bhala pyaas kaho bujhaye kaise,
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«Reply #6 on: October 29, 2010, 05:54:52 AM »
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bahut khoob bekaraar jii ...bas wah wah kehene ko ji kiya..
likhte rahiyeeeeee..

dher sari daad~
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«Reply #7 on: November 08, 2010, 10:45:28 AM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on October 29, 2010, 05:54:52 AM
bahut khoob bekaraar jii ...bas wah wah kehene ko ji kiya..
likhte rahiyeeeeee..

dher sari daad~
bahoot shukriya abhi ji...
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«Reply #8 on: November 08, 2010, 12:33:58 PM »
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Ati sunder bahut achha kalaam hai aapka Bekarar ji... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Ess khobsurti se bayaan kiya hai apne dil ka khayaal aapne
Ab hum apne haathon ko taliyein bajaanese rokein tou kaise

Ye dil-e-naadan apni hadd he tou nahi jaanta
Kismat me hai wahi milega ye kyu nahi maanta
Quote from: bekarar on October 24, 2010, 05:48:28 PM
Alfazon me bayan khoobsurti ko kiya jaaye kaise,
ho bemisal husn to kalam ruk bhi jaye kaise

Ye kambakhat hai khud ki hadon se bekhabar
Dil-e-nadan ko iski sarhaden batlayen kaise,

Hai asman ke chand par sabhi ka ikhtiyaar,
Par tum chand ho jami ka ise samjhaye kaise

Karen ishq pahle ya fir Karen rotiyo ka jugad,
In bemurrvat uljhano ko, suljhayen kaise



अल्फाज़ों मे बयान खूबसूरती को किया जाए कैसे,
हो बेमिसाल हुस्न तो कलम रुक भी जाए कैसे

ये कम्बख़त है खुद की हदों से बेख़बर
दिल-ए-नादान को इसकी सरहदें बतलाएँ कैसे,

है आसमान के चाँद पर सभी का इख्तियार,
पर तुम चाँद हो जमी का इसे समझाए कैसे

करें इश्क़ पहले या फिर करें रोटियो का जुगाड़,
इन बेमुररव्ात उलझानो को, सुलझाएँ कैसे

हुआ गुम मेरा वज़ूद, तलबगारों की भीड़ मे
मुझ तक तेरी निगाह भी अब आए कैसे,

तेरे बगैर हासिल हर इक शै है बेमाज़ा
समंदर की भला प्यास कहो बुझाए कैसे,
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«Reply #9 on: November 08, 2010, 02:31:42 PM »
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bahaut badhiya bekaraar sahab.

Karen ishq pahle ya fir Karen rotiyo ka jugad,
In bemurrvat uljhano ko, suljhayen kaise

ghalib ka ek sher yaad aayaa ...

gham agar che jaan gusil hai pa kahaan bache ye dil hai
gham e ishq ghar na hota gham e rozgaar hota

- ghalib
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«Reply #10 on: November 09, 2010, 05:42:26 AM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on November 08, 2010, 12:33:58 PM
Ati sunder bahut achha kalaam hai aapka Bekarar ji... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Ess khobsurti se bayaan kiya hai apne dil ka khayaal aapne
Ab hum apne haathon ko taliyein bajaanese rokein tou kaise

Ye dil-e-naadan apni hadd he tou nahi jaanta
Kismat me hai wahi milega ye kyu nahi maanta

bahoot shukriya koyal ji...nice lines from u too Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: November 09, 2010, 05:44:06 AM »
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Quote from: zarra on November 08, 2010, 02:31:42 PM
bahaut badhiya bekaraar sahab.

Karen ishq pahle ya fir Karen rotiyo ka jugad,
In bemurrvat uljhano ko, suljhayen kaise

ghalib ka ek sher yaad aayaa ...

gham agar che jaan gusil hai pa kahaan bache ye dil hai
gham e ishq ghar na hota gham e rozgaar hota

- ghalib

tah-e-dil se shukriya Zarra ji ghalib sahib ke is khoobsurat sher ke liye fir se shukriya  Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: May 02, 2011, 01:48:56 AM »
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Bohat Badhiya Bekarar Ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: June 05, 2011, 07:13:37 AM »
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wah kya lajawaab post hai ji…
last ka para to haye…
no.1 uljhan hai Usual Smile
iss nacheej nir ki taraef se hajaron daad…
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«Reply #14 on: September 30, 2011, 07:49:51 AM »
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bohat bohat khoob bekarar ji
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