uth jayen palke to

by AbhiTamrakar on September 23, 2010, 08:35:54 AM
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nigaahon se jal jate he parwane
shamma ki jarurat hi kya kahiye

wo shola he bhadakta hua is kadar
chhoone ki koshish hi kya kariye

tadapte huye labz juban pe hi tod dete he dam
eise kaatil se reham ki gujarish hi kya kariye

jhuki nazaron se hi teer nishane ko cheer deta he
uth jayen palke to tabaahi ki tasveer hi kya kahiye
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«Reply #1 on: September 23, 2010, 09:16:45 AM »
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aCHHA LIKHA HAI REEEEEEEEEEEEEE...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Na ulajhna tum kabhi meri in tirchhi nazaron se
Ye jalati he nahi bhasm kar deti hain inke kaher ka kya kahiye



Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on September 23, 2010, 08:35:54 AM
nigaahon se jal jate he parwane
shamma ki jarurat hi kya kahiye

wo shola he bhadakta hua is kadar
chhoone ki koshish hi kya kariye

tadapte huye labz juban pe hi tod dete he dam
eise kaatil se reham ki gujarish hi kya kariye

jhuki nazaron se hi teer nishane ko cheer deta he
uth jayen palke to tabaahi ki tasveer hi kya kahiye
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«Reply #2 on: September 23, 2010, 09:26:02 AM »
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Zabardamt hai
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«Reply #3 on: September 23, 2010, 09:36:10 AM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on September 23, 2010, 09:16:45 AM
aCHHA LIKHA HAI REEEEEEEEEEEEEE...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Na ulajhna tum kabhi meri in tirchhi nazaron se
Ye jalati he nahi bhasm kar deti hain inke kaher ka kya kahiye



tumhari nazar na hui bhasma-asur ho gayii..hihihi

shukriya apka
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«Reply #4 on: September 23, 2010, 09:36:34 AM »
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Quote from: Fivester on September 23, 2010, 09:26:02 AM
Zabardamt hai
shukriyaa fivester jiii
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«Reply #5 on: September 23, 2010, 01:49:57 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause
bahut khoob likha hai aapne Abhi ji...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: September 24, 2010, 06:09:07 AM »
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shukriya kapil sahab~
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«Reply #7 on: October 05, 2010, 06:46:57 PM »
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mastam mast post abhi ji..ye padhke wo farmaish yaad aagai  jo amien ki thi aur aap mana kar diye the..yad hai aapko.....

uss waqt to reply nahin de pai thi...lijiye aaj diya hai bataiye kaisa hai...

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Ab zyada na keh payenge k majbur hain hum
Kho gaye tujhe dekh k sare lafz sanam ab kya kahiye…!!!


Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on September 23, 2010, 08:35:54 AM
nigaahon se jal jate he parwane
shamma ki jarurat hi kya kahiye

wo shola he bhadakta hua is kadar
chhoone ki koshish hi kya kariye

tadapte huye labz juban pe hi tod dete he dam
eise kaatil se reham ki gujarish hi kya kariye

jhuki nazaron se hi teer nishane ko cheer deta he
uth jayen palke to tabaahi ki tasveer hi kya kahiye
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«Reply #8 on: October 05, 2010, 06:58:00 PM »
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wah ji wah.. bahut khoob likha hai aapne Kasak ji...!!!
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«Reply #9 on: October 06, 2010, 06:07:20 AM »
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kya kahiye jiji kyaa kahiyeeee...wah wah kahiyega basss...

bahut bahut khoob merii is nazm par apka ye reply is post ka best reply heeee....


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«Reply #10 on: October 06, 2010, 06:22:08 AM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on October 06, 2010, 06:07:20 AM
kya kahiye jiji kyaa kahiyeeee...wah wah kahiyega basss...

bahut bahut khoob merii is nazm par apka ye reply is post ka best reply heeee....


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aho aho.....ye to hona hi hai na jab main best to mere reply bhi best hi honge na jiiiiiii....tongue3
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dhanyawad shihab jii`
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