<>* Wahi dil ki kasak hun main*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 24, 2013, 07:01:47 PM
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<>* Wahi dil ki kasak hun main*<>


khamoshi me gunjti tere dil ki dhadkan hun main
saasein jo harpal gungunayae wo sargam hun main

kabhi machalti kabhi tadapti rehti hai jo dheere se
dil me dabi o sehmi si wo khwaish ankahi hun main

baadlon ki oat se jhaankti hai jo chupke se bar bar
wo andhere ko cheerti roshni ki pehli kiran hun main

tanhaa raaton me dhulak gaya jo ek ashk teri palkon se
use khud me samati kisi andekhi hatheli ki chuan hun main

na samjh sake jo uthhti aur bikharti iss dard ki lehar ko
wahi maasoom se dil ki mallika..wahi dil ki kasak hun main…!!!
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«Reply #1 on: August 24, 2013, 07:04:42 PM »
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बहुत खूब कसक जी.. Applause
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«Reply #2 on: August 24, 2013, 07:13:38 PM »
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bahut khoob kasu.. bahut achha likha hai aapne.. Usual Smile

dil me basne wali ghazal hamesha yaad rahegi.. Usual Smile


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«Reply #3 on: August 24, 2013, 07:27:18 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Kasakji.
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«Reply #4 on: August 24, 2013, 07:30:32 PM »
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sach mein kasak achhi hai
 hello2 hello2 hello2
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«Reply #5 on: August 24, 2013, 07:44:51 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut khooooooooob... dheron daaaad...
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«Reply #6 on: August 24, 2013, 08:22:05 PM »
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wah wah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: August 24, 2013, 10:48:46 PM »
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bahot achey dheron daad Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #8 on: August 24, 2013, 11:30:44 PM »
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 Applause
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«Reply #9 on: August 25, 2013, 03:33:24 AM »
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waah waah waah kasak jee bahut bahut khoob likha hai..kya baat kya baat kya baat..Dhero dhero daad..happy9

Ek chhota sa nazarana hamari taraf se bhi pesh hai..



Tera hi aqsh hun,tujhme hi basa hun main,,
Teri madhosh raato.N kaa nasha hun main..

Apni zindagi ka koi panna palat ke dekh le,,
Tere har pal, har lamhe me guzra hun main..

Falak se puchh le ya zameen se kar le sawal,,
Janegi tere ishq me kis kadar jala hun main..

Tanha hun main yaha, tanha hai tuu waha,,
Aa jaa kareeb, bahe failaye khada hun main..

Jiss din meri kasak tere dil me utar jaayegi,,
Samajh jayegi tu uss din kyaa bala hun main..!!! Ñ


Niraash kiya ho ya bura laga ho to maafi chahunga maate..Winking
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«Reply #10 on: August 25, 2013, 06:14:41 AM »
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kasak ji .... sundar aur samvedansheel vichaar hain apki rachna mein .... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: August 25, 2013, 12:57:35 PM »
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बहुत खूब कसक जी.. Applause

thnx rishi ji pasand karne ka
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«Reply #12 on: August 25, 2013, 12:58:43 PM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahut khoob kasu.. bahut achha likha hai aapne.. Usual Smile

dil me basne wali ghazal hamesha yaad rahegi.. Usual Smile


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

its all becoz of ur gazal MT.... tum nahi likhte to ye na ban paata mujhse........ thnx alot for writing tat gazal dear
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«Reply #13 on: August 25, 2013, 01:01:29 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Kasakji.

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut khooooooooob... dheron daaaad...

Applause

bahot achey dheron daad Applause Clapping Smiley Applause

wah wah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

shukriya bht bht shukriya ravi ji aqsh ji siddqui sir ji.. nandbahu ji,, iqtedar ji ... meri koshish ko pasand karne ka aur sarahne ka........
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«Reply #14 on: August 25, 2013, 01:03:14 PM »
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sach mein kasak achhi hai
 hello2 hello2 hello2

aapse bht din baad roobaroo hun suresh ji kaisi hain aap.... bht acha laga aapne pasand kiya meri koshish ko yunhi aate rahiye sarahte rahie
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