Wo aaye hai

by medha_jain3 on January 11, 2009, 12:19:26 PM
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ek koshish......ummid ki pasand aayegi.....

Wo aaye hai mahfil me is kadar
Chand bhi aanhe bharne laga
Sitare simat gaye unake aanchal me
Wo dekhiye chandani ke kaleje se dhua sa uthane laga
 
Jufe lahrai hai unhone is kadar
Hawa ki dhadkane bhi badhane lagi
Phool sare aa gaye unake kadmo me
Wo dekhiye gulshan ki mahak bhi udane lagi
 
Najare uthai hai unhone is kadar
Jam bhi ladkhadane lage
Paimane chhalak pade khud b khud
Wo dekhiye maikhano ko apni fikar hone lagi

Medha jain
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«Reply #1 on: January 11, 2009, 12:26:32 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Medha Ji
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«Reply #2 on: January 11, 2009, 03:04:26 PM »
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Kya baat hain kya baat hain...

Teri tehreer dekh kar yu laga muje
Tune ghazal likhte waqt aaina dekha hoga
Kadardan bohat mil jayege is mehfil me
Jo keh gaya GHAYEL, tuje shayed hi kisi ne kaha hoga

                  -SG-
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«Reply #3 on: January 11, 2009, 03:21:08 PM »
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Bahut acha medha ji Applause
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«Reply #4 on: January 11, 2009, 03:39:01 PM »
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Bahut khoob Medha   Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: January 13, 2009, 06:47:09 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on January 11, 2009, 12:26:32 PM
Bahut Khoob Medha Ji

Shukriya rajesh ji .

Medha jain
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«Reply #6 on: January 13, 2009, 06:48:45 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 11, 2009, 03:04:26 PM
Kya baat hain kya baat hain...

Teri tehreer dekh kar yu laga muje
Tune ghazal likhte waqt aaina dekha hoga
Kadardan bohat mil jayege is mehfil me
Jo keh gaya GHAYEL, tuje shayed hi kisi ne kaha hoga

                  -SG-


Aapke hi andaz me javab dene ki koshish Usual Smile kar rhi hu

Naa dekha tha aaina, na ki thi koi kalpana,
Jab uthai thi kalam, na sochi thi koi haseena,
Hawa,chand or sitaro.n ki roshani se kohare me lipati rat se,
Bas shabdo.n ke darmiyaan kagaz par utar aai thi ye apsara !!


Medha jain
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«Reply #7 on: January 13, 2009, 06:50:06 AM »
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Quote from: salma786 on January 11, 2009, 03:21:08 PM
Bahut acha medha ji Applause

Hoasala afazai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya salma ji.

Medha jain
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«Reply #8 on: January 13, 2009, 06:51:27 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on January 11, 2009, 03:39:01 PM
Bahut khoob Medha   Applause Applause

Shukriya roja ji Usual Smile

Medha jain
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«Reply #9 on: January 13, 2009, 07:00:58 AM »
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Quote from: medha_jain3 on January 11, 2009, 12:19:26 PM
ek koshish......ummid ki pasand aayegi.....

Wo aaye hai mahfil me is kadar
Chand bhi aanhe bharne laga
Sitare simat gaye unake aanchal me
Wo dekhiye chandani ke kaleje se dhua sa uthane laga
 
Jufe lahrai hai unhone is kadar
Hawa ki dhadkane bhi badhane lagi
Phool sare aa gaye unake kadmo me
Wo dekhiye gulshan ki mahak bhi udane lagi
 
Najare uthai hai unhone is kadar
Jam bhi ladkhadane lage
Paimane chhalak pade khud b khud
Wo dekhiye maikhano ko apni fikar hone lagi

Medha jain


very beautifully said medha

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #10 on: January 13, 2009, 07:01:55 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 11, 2009, 03:04:26 PM
Kya baat hain kya baat hain...

Teri tehreer dekh kar yu laga muje
Tune ghazal likhte waqt aaina dekha hoga
Kadardan bohat mil jayege is mehfil me
Jo keh gaya GHAYEL, tuje shayed hi kisi ne kaha hoga

                  -SG-

wah wah Ghayel, bahut khoob

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #11 on: January 13, 2009, 07:17:48 AM »
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Quote from: medha_jain3 on January 13, 2009, 06:48:45 AM

Aapke hi andaz me javab dene ki koshish Usual Smile kar rhi hu

Naa dekha tha aaina, na ki thi koi kalpana,
Jab uthai thi kalam, na sochi thi koi haseena,
Hawa,chand or sitaro.n ki roshani se kohare me lipati rat se,
Bas shabdo.n ke darmiyaan kagaz par utar aai thi ye apsara !!


Medha jain

wah wah wah MEDHA


APSARA KAGAZ PAR UTAR AAYI HAI
HUMNEY AIWEY HI CHAND PAR NAZAR TIKAYI HAI
CHAND SITAROH PEH ROSHNI LIPAT AAYI HAI
YEH HASINA TOH SAB KA DIL LOOTNEY AAYI HAI


JASBIR SINGH
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Quote from: medha_jain3 on January 11, 2009, 12:19:26 PM
ek koshish......ummid ki pasand aayegi.....

Wo aaye hai mahfil me is kadar
Chand bhi aanhe bharne laga
Sitare simat gaye unake aanchal me
Wo dekhiye chandani ke kaleje se dhua sa uthane laga
 
Jufe lahrai hai unhone is kadar
Hawa ki dhadkane bhi badhane lagi
Phool sare aa gaye unake kadmo me
Wo dekhiye gulshan ki mahak bhi udane lagi
 
Najare uthai hai unhone is kadar
Jam bhi ladkhadane lage
Paimane chhalak pade khud b khud
Wo dekhiye maikhano ko apni fikar hone lagi

Medha jain
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«Reply #13 on: January 13, 2009, 10:07:46 AM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on January 13, 2009, 07:17:48 AM
wah wah wah MEDHA


APSARA KAGAZ PAR UTAR AAYI HAI
HUMNEY AIWEY HI CHAND PAR NAZAR TIKAYI HAI
CHAND SITAROH PEH ROSHNI LIPAT AAYI HAI
YEH HASINA TOH SAB KA DIL LOOTNEY AAYI HAI


JASBIR SINGH

Usual Smile shukriya jasbir ji

Medha jain
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