^^woh palken jhukana, woh tera sharamana^^

by samir_bc on November 15, 2008, 03:13:54 PM
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woh palken jhukana, woh tera sharamana
koi tujhse seekhe, dil ko churana

woh kehna bus apni, nazre churakar
koi tujhse seekhe, batein banana

woh karna khataye, phir khud ruth jana
koi tujhse seekhe, nakhre dikhana

woh chehra dikha kar, tera chup jana
koi tujhse seekhe, kisi ko tadpana

woh daanto me leker,dupatta chabana
koi tujse seekhe, adain dikhana

woh lato ko apni, ungli se ghumana
koi tujhse seekhe, deewana banana

woh palken jhukana, woh tera sharamana
koi tujhse seekhe, dil ko churana



samir "dilse"
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honeyrose
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«Reply #1 on: November 15, 2008, 03:44:32 PM »
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Bohat khoob Samir ji....
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«Reply #2 on: November 15, 2008, 05:48:52 PM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on November 15, 2008, 03:44:32 PM
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Bohat khoob Samir ji....

thanks alot honey ji, apko meri shayri pasand ati hai.
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«Reply #3 on: November 15, 2008, 07:57:11 PM »
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beautiful work samir  Clapping Smiley

bada manchala hai kahi chura le na tumse
pata mehboob ka apne, ghayel ko na batana

                                 -sg-
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«Reply #4 on: November 19, 2008, 02:46:29 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 15, 2008, 07:57:11 PM
beautiful work samir  Clapping Smiley

bada manchala hai kahi chura le na tumse
pata mehboob ka apne, ghayel ko na batana

                                 -sg-


thanks ghayal ji,

kitne hi aye hain, ghayal hi hoker gaye sab
har kisi ke bas ka nahi usse nazar milana
hume to adat hai, sholo se khelne ki
rai hai tum bewajah apni jaan na gawana
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«Reply #5 on: November 19, 2008, 10:38:43 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

BAHOOT KHOOB SAMIR, KAMAL KA LIKHAHAI APNE!!!

Ek Koshish meri taraf se bhi...


Wo tirchi najar se tera mukurana
Koi tujhse sikhe, dil ko dhadkana

Wo na kah kar bhi sab kuch kah jaana
Koi tumse sikhe, najar ko samjhana

Wo chlna aor chal kar tera ruk jaana
Koi tujhse sikhe, armano ko jagana

Wo najare mila kar, ishara kar jaana
Koi tujhse sikhe, khamoshi  ko samjhana

Wo baat baat per, tera najare churana
Koi tujhse sikhe, dil ko tadpana

Wo her baat main teri, meri jhalak ka najar anna
Koi tujhse sikhe, dil ko lagana
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«Reply #6 on: November 20, 2008, 03:43:55 AM »
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Bahoot Khub Samir and Pooja Ji
Beautiful Poem written with simple words, Really appreciable.
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: November 20, 2008, 04:30:44 PM »
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shukaria harish ji
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muskan_bye
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«Reply #8 on: November 20, 2008, 04:49:40 PM »
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KYA BAAT HAI KAMAAL KAR DIYA BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI WELL DONE
SAMIR JI AND POOJA JI
 
EK KOSHISH HUMARI BHI AAP KE LIYE SAMIR JI AND POOJA JI

WOH BAAT BAAT PAR SAMJHANA
KOI TUJHSE SEEKHE, RASTA DIKHANA

WOH DEKHTE RAHENA
KOI TUJHSE SEEKHE, DIL LAGI LAGANA

WOH CHAHTON KO ANKHON SE BAYA KARNA
KOI TUJHSE SIKHE , ISHARO KI BAAT KARNA

WOH DIL HI DIL MEIN HUME SAMJHANA
KOI TUJHSE SIKHE , YE NAZRANA

WOH EK ANSOON KA GIR JANA
KOI TUJHSE SIKHE, SACHCHI EHSAAS JAAN JANA

WOH EK JHALAK DIKHA KE CHALE JANA
KOI AAP SE SIKHE,KISI KO TADPANA

WOH GHABRA JANA
KOI INS SIKHE , KISI KO DARANA

THODI KOSHISH KI BATAIYE KAISI LAGI,.........POOJA JI , SAMIR JI
********************************MUSKAN***************************
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«Reply #9 on: November 21, 2008, 06:18:58 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on November 19, 2008, 10:38:43 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

BAHOOT KHOOB SAMIR, KAMAL KA LIKHAHAI APNE!!!

Ek Koshish meri taraf se bhi...


Wo tirchi najar se tera mukurana
Koi tujhse sikhe, dil ko dhadkana

Wo na kah kar bhi sab kuch kah jaana
Koi tumse sikhe, najar ko samjhana

Wo chlna aor chal kar tera ruk jaana
Koi tujhse sikhe, armano ko jagana

Wo najare mila kar, ishara kar jaana
Koi tujhse sikhe, khamoshi  ko samjhana

Wo baat baat per, tera najare churana
Koi tujhse sikhe, dil ko tadpana

Wo her baat main teri, meri jhalak ka najar anna
Koi tujhse sikhe, dil ko lagana



bahot bahot shukriya pooja ji, thanks for coming in this thread.

bahot khoob likha apne.
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«Reply #10 on: November 21, 2008, 06:19:55 AM »
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Quote from: harishsharmapilot on November 20, 2008, 03:43:55 AM
Bahoot Khub Samir and Pooja Ji
Beautiful Poem written with simple words, Really appreciable.

thank u so much harish ji.
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«Reply #11 on: November 21, 2008, 06:21:42 AM »
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Quote from: muskan_bye on November 20, 2008, 04:49:40 PM
KYA BAAT HAI KAMAAL KAR DIYA BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI WELL DONE
SAMIR JI AND POOJA JI
 
EK KOSHISH HUMARI BHI AAP KE LIYE SAMIR JI AND POOJA JI

WOH BAAT BAAT PAR SAMJHANA
KOI TUJHSE SEEKHE, RASTA DIKHANA

WOH DEKHTE RAHENA
KOI TUJHSE SEEKHE, DIL LAGI LAGANA

WOH CHAHTON KO ANKHON SE BAYA KARNA
KOI TUJHSE SIKHE , ISHARO KI BAAT KARNA

WOH DIL HI DIL MEIN HUME SAMJHANA
KOI TUJHSE SIKHE , YE NAZRANA

WOH EK ANSOON KA GIR JANA
KOI TUJHSE SIKHE, SACHCHI EHSAAS JAAN JANA

WOH EK JHALAK DIKHA KE CHALE JANA
KOI AAP SE SIKHE,KISI KO TADPANA

WOH GHABRA JANA
KOI INS SIKHE , KISI KO DARANA

THODI KOSHISH KI BATAIYE KAISI LAGI,.........POOJA JI , SAMIR JI
********************************MUSKAN***************************


shukriya muskan ji. acha likha apne, nice try, keep it up.
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«Reply #12 on: November 21, 2008, 06:33:15 AM »
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Quote from: samir_bc on November 19, 2008, 02:46:29 PM

thanks ghayal ji,

kitne hi aye hain, ghayal hi hoker gaye sab
har kisi ke bas ka nahi usse nazar milana
hume to adat hai, sholo se khelne ki
rai hai tum bewajah apni jaan na gawana
Jan hamari hain tu hame aazmane ka hausla paida kar
Na hoga bevafa sanam tera khud me yakeen paida kar
Bohat aaye hoge humse pehle yeh humne mana samir
Agar ho sake to GHAYEL jaisa zamane me koi ek to paida kar
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«Reply #13 on: November 21, 2008, 07:47:24 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 21, 2008, 06:33:15 AM
Jan hamari hain tu hame aazmane ka hausla paida kar
Na hoga bevafa sanam tera khud me yakeen paida kar
Bohat aaye hoge humse pehle yeh humne mana samir
Agar ho sake to GHAYEL jaisa zamane me koi ek to paida kar


bharosa uspe hai humko apne apse jiyada
faisle bewafai ke sare baazar nahi hote
agar hota itna dum tumhari baat me sajid
to aj tum sajid se ghayel nahi hote
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«Reply #14 on: November 21, 2008, 09:13:23 AM »
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Quote from: samir_bc on November 21, 2008, 07:47:24 AM

bharosa uspe hai humko apne apse jiyada
faisle bewafai ke sare baazar nahi hote
agar hota itna dum tumhari baat me sajid
to aj tum sajid se ghayel nahi hote
Shabash kya baat khuda tumhe bohat khushiya de tumne to Ghayel ki dukhti rag pe hi waar kar diya very good  Clapping Smiley iske aage likhna mera theek nahi hoga once more Bohat achche samir yu hi likhte rehna
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