^^woh palken jhukana, woh tera sharamana^^

by samir_bc on November 15, 2008, 03:13:54 PM
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«Reply #15 on: November 21, 2008, 09:46:05 AM »
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palken jhuka kar,nazre churana
haye, sharmana koi apse seekhe

dupatte se chehra adha chupakar
haye, muskurana koi apse seekhe

dil ko churaker,saaf mukar jana
haye, teer chalana koi apse seekhe

phir ankhon hi ankhon me sabkuch keh jana
haye, pyar dikhana koi apse seekhe

kehna bus apni, aur har baat manwana
haye, haq jatana koi aapse seekhe

palken jhuka kar,nazre churana
haye, sharmana koi apse seekhe


samir "dilse"
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«Reply #16 on: November 21, 2008, 10:30:46 AM »
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Shabash kya baat khuda tumhe bohat khushiya de tumne to Ghayel ki dukhti rag pe hi waar kar diya very good  Clapping Smiley iske aage likhna mera theek nahi hoga once more Bohat achche samir yu hi likhte rehna



bahot bahot shukriya duaon ke liye.
main apka naam nhi use karna chahta tha, mod aisa hi diya apki shayri ne, ki likhna hi pada.
gustakhi ki maafi sajid ji,

bus hath hamare sar per rakhna hamesha. duaon me yaad rakhna.


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«Reply #17 on: November 21, 2008, 10:40:51 AM »
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achqan likha ha aapna
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«Reply #18 on: November 21, 2008, 11:17:47 AM »
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shukriya saloni ji.
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«Reply #19 on: November 21, 2008, 09:59:49 PM »
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palken jhuka kar,nazre churana
haye, sharmana koi apse seekhe

dupatte se chehra adha chupakar
haye, muskurana koi apse seekhe

dil ko churaker,saaf mukar jana
haye, teer chalana koi apse seekhe

phir ankhon hi ankhon me sabkuch keh jana
haye, pyar dikhana koi apse seekhe

kehna bus apni, aur har baat manwana
haye, haq jatana koi aapse seekhe

palken jhuka kar,nazre churana
haye, sharmana koi apse seekhe


samir "dilse"

wah kaya baat hai.... bahoot khoob samir!! ajj jaladi main hu magar jaise he waqat mila, kuch likhne ki koshish rahegi meri yaha per. Good work!!
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«Reply #20 on: November 23, 2008, 04:54:45 AM »
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wah kaya baat hai.... bahoot khoob samir!! ajj jaladi main hu magar jaise he waqat mila, kuch likhne ki koshish rahegi meri yaha per. Good work!!


thanks pooja ji.
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«Reply #21 on: January 25, 2009, 09:53:07 AM »
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Waah! Lazavab..
Tahe dill se app sabhi ka sukhriya, iss post se kaffi madad mili, humein shayad issi ka intezaar tha.
Awesum, U all r rilli vry vry gd..thanx a lot yet again..

I'd been lukin for tis..

Love ya all loads...t.cccc



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«Reply #22 on: January 30, 2009, 03:20:41 PM »
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Waah! Lazavab..
Tahe dill se app sabhi ka sukhriya, iss post se kaffi madad mili, humein shayad issi ka intezaar tha.
Awesum, U all r rilli vry vry gd..thanx a lot yet again..

I'd been lukin for tis..

Love ya all loads...t.cccc



                   -Ur's Ever Madhu

shukriya madhu ji...........welcome to yoindia.

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«Reply #23 on: February 01, 2009, 03:32:53 AM »
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palken jhuka kar,nazre churana
haye, sharmana koi apse seekhe

dupatte se chehra adha chupakar
haye, muskurana koi apse seekhe

dil ko churaker,saaf mukar jana
haye, teer chalana koi apse seekhe

phir ankhon hi ankhon me sabkuch keh jana
haye, pyar dikhana koi apse seekhe

kehna bus apni, aur har baat manwana
haye, haq jatana koi aapse seekhe

palken jhuka kar,nazre churana
haye, sharmana koi apse seekhe


samir "dilse"
Good one Samir Ji
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«Reply #24 on: February 01, 2009, 04:16:42 AM »
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palken jhuka kar,nazre churana
haye, sharmana koi apse seekhe

dupatte se chehra adha chupakar
haye, muskurana koi apse seekhe

dil ko churaker,saaf mukar jana
haye, teer chalana koi apse seekhe

phir ankhon hi ankhon me sabkuch keh jana
haye, pyar dikhana koi apse seekhe

kehna bus apni, aur har baat manwana
haye, haq jatana koi aapse seekhe

palken jhuka kar,nazre churana
haye, sharmana koi apse seekhe


samir "dilse"

Bahut khoob  Applause Applause
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«Reply #25 on: February 01, 2009, 09:50:05 AM »
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bahot bahot shukriya.......... rajesh harish ji... n... Roja ji.

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«Reply #26 on: February 02, 2009, 08:41:44 PM »
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Bohat Hi Badhiya Hai Samir Bhai, Very Very Nice,.

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«Reply #27 on: February 03, 2009, 04:59:54 PM »
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Bohat Hi Badhiya Hai Samir Bhai, Very Very Nice,.



bahot bahot shukriya jaanasheen ji.
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