YE HAAL HOGA

by qadir niyaz on January 30, 2010, 10:05:01 AM
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MAIN JAANTA  THA YE  HAAL HOGA
BICHHAR  KE  USKO  MALAAL HOGA
SUKOON   KAISE  REHEGA   QADIR
JO DIL KE SHEESHE MAIN BAAL HOGA
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«Reply #1 on: January 30, 2010, 10:46:43 AM »
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Nice !

But whats meaning of Baal in the last line ? hair ? or something else ?
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«Reply #2 on: January 30, 2010, 10:59:14 AM »
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nice.

i agree with divya di..
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«Reply #3 on: January 30, 2010, 05:05:08 PM »
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Niyaz ji bade achhe sher likhe hain. Isme bal ka jo matlab hai wo is tarah hai:

Jab sheeshe mein bareek sa crack aa jaata hai to dekhne mein bal(hair) jaisa hi lagta hai. Isi crack ko sheeshe mein baal aana kahte hain. Iski ek misaal dekhen:

Hamne hasraton ke daagh aansuo mein dho liye
Aapki khushi huzoor boliye na boliye
Ab isme apni soorat-e-raana na dekhiye
Ab dil ke aaine mein kai baal aa gaye
(soorat-e-raana = Beautiful face)
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«Reply #4 on: January 30, 2010, 06:03:00 PM »
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very nice niyaz ji......

Shukriya riyaz ji....samajhna aasan kar diya aapne
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«Reply #5 on: January 30, 2010, 06:59:21 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: January 30, 2010, 07:05:05 PM »
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MAIN JAANTA  THA YE  HAAL HOGA
BICHHAR  KE  USKO  MALAAL HOGA
SUKOON   KAISE  REHEGA   QADIR
JO DIL KE SHEESHE MAIN BAAL HOGA


Bahut khoob...Thanks for sharing  Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: February 01, 2010, 02:21:03 PM »
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Nice
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«Reply #8 on: February 04, 2010, 12:25:38 PM »
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Nice !

But whats meaning of Baal in the last line ? hair ? or something else ?
Hello dear sophi thanks for the cute complement on my poem YE HAAL HOGA  thanks a lot (the meaning of BAAL i've mentioned as crack, broken sign in mirror)is that clear..keep in touch my e-mail is qadirniyaz@gmail.com
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«Reply #9 on: February 04, 2010, 12:39:48 PM »
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Nice
thank my email is qadirniyaz@gmail.com
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«Reply #10 on: February 04, 2010, 12:40:42 PM »
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Bahut khoob...Thanks for sharing  Usual Smile
Thanks for the complement
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«Reply #11 on: February 04, 2010, 12:41:21 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause
Great! thanks dear you are real admirer
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«Reply #12 on: February 04, 2010, 12:42:21 PM »
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very nice niyaz ji......

Shukriya riyaz ji....samajhna aasan kar diya aapne
bahut shukriya aapne mera klaam padha aur taarif ki shukriya
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«Reply #13 on: February 04, 2010, 12:43:33 PM »
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Niyaz ji bade achhe sher likhe hain. Isme bal ka jo matlab hai wo is tarah hai:

Jab sheeshe mein bareek sa crack aa jaata hai to dekhne mein bal(hair) jaisa hi lagta hai. Isi crack ko sheeshe mein baal aana kahte hain. Iski ek misaal dekhen:

Hamne hasraton ke daagh aansuo mein dho liye
Aapki khushi huzoor boliye na boliye
Ab isme apni soorat-e-raana na dekhiye
Ab dil ke aaine mein kai baal aa gaye
(soorat-e-raana = Beautiful face)
Dear Riyaz Bhai aapne klaaam ko samjha shukriya kabhi mail karo mera email id hai qadirniyaz@gmail.com
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«Reply #14 on: February 04, 2010, 12:44:46 PM »
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nice.

i agree with divya di..
Hello h r u thanks for the complement keep in touch qadirniyaz@gmail.com
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