जुदा नहीं

by sapana on May 01, 2009, 07:39:35 PM
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जुदा नहीं
मेरी ख्यालोमे खुशबूकी तरह महेकता है,
दिलके विरानेमे गुलाबकी तरह खिलता है,
मेरी तन्हाइमे बुल्बुलकी तरह चहेकता है,
कोन केहता है की तू और मै जुदा है?
तू मेरे वजुदमे लहू की तरह दोड़ता है।
सपना
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«Reply #1 on: May 01, 2009, 07:59:18 PM »
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Nice One Sapna ji
Keep Writing  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: May 01, 2009, 08:07:31 PM »
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Thanks Panksivamji,
aapki dad chahiye!
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«Reply #3 on: May 01, 2009, 08:12:37 PM »
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Welome Sapnaji
Likhati Rahiye Achhe kaam ki Tarif Jarur hoti hai
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«Reply #4 on: May 07, 2009, 07:25:08 PM »
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nice lines sapana
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«Reply #5 on: May 07, 2009, 07:35:28 PM »
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bhut %Ub spna jI
bs Eese hI il%te rihE 
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«Reply #6 on: May 07, 2009, 09:49:38 PM »
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Thanks rajeshji. Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: May 07, 2009, 09:50:27 PM »
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Thanks Pooja.
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«Reply #8 on: May 07, 2009, 11:44:05 PM »
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Thanks Kaashji. Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: May 08, 2009, 12:46:13 PM »
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Bohot Pyari lines likhi hain, Sapana Ji
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«Reply #10 on: May 08, 2009, 02:47:12 PM »
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Thanks Talat,
aapki raay bhot mayne rakhti hai.
Sapana Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: May 08, 2009, 02:50:43 PM »
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Quote from: sapana on May 01, 2009, 07:39:35 PM

love9
जुदा नहीं
मेरी ख्यालोमे खुशबूकी तरह महेकता है,
दिलके विरानेमे गुलाबकी तरह खिलता है,
मेरी तन्हाइमे बुल्बुलकी तरह चहेकता है,
कोन केहता है की तू और मै जुदा है?
तू मेरे वजुदमे लहू की तरह दोड़ता है।
सपना

Bahut accha likha hai aapne Sapna
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«Reply #12 on: May 08, 2009, 03:13:27 PM »
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Thanks Roja.
sukriya aapne padha. Usual Smile
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riyaz106
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«Reply #13 on: January 16, 2010, 12:26:56 PM »
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Bahut sunder kavita likhi aapne sapna ji. Badhaai ho.
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