तुझे किन लम्हों में बनाया हैं उस खुदा ने.. "ऋषि "

by Rishi Agarwal on August 09, 2013, 10:45:29 PM
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तुम परी हो या जादुगरनी, या फिर गजल,
हर किसी के दिल में जगह बना लेती हो..

तेरे आने से उभर आती हैं लबों पे कशिश,
अपनी मस्त अदा से सबको अपना बना लेती हो..

तुम मासूम हो, या नटखट ,या फिर एक कहानी,
अपना ही गम भूल गया में, जब-2 तुम मुस्कराती हो..

तुम चांदनी हो, या लहर, या फिर एक नजम,
जैसे सुन्दरता की हर बूंद, तुममे ही सिर्फ समाई हो..

तुझे किन लम्हों में बनाया हैं उस खुदा ने,
तुम बलखाती एक नदियाँ, हर मौज तेरी अंगड़ाई हो..

तुम्हारी तारीफ "ऋषि" किन किन लबों से करे,
कोई नहीं तुम्हारे जैसा, न तुम किसी के जैसी हो..


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Tum Pari Ho Ya Jadugarni, Ya Phir Gazal,
Har Kisi Ke Dil Mein Jagah Bana Leti Ho..

Tere Aane Se Ubhar Aati Hain Labo Pe Kashish,
Apni Mast Ada Se Sabko Apna Bana Jati Ho..

Tum Masum Ho Ya Natkhat, Ya Phir Ek Kahani,
Apna Hi Gum Bhool Gya Mein, Jab-2 Tum Muskrai Ho..

Tum Chandani Ho, Ya Lahar, Ya Phir Ek Nazam,
Jaise Sundarta Ki Har Bund, Tumme Hi Sirf Samai Ho..

Tujhe Kin Lamho Mein Banaya Hain Us Khuda Ne,
Tum Balkhati Ek Nadiyan, Har Mauj Teri Angdai Ho..

Tumhari Tarif "Rishi" Kin Kin Labo Se Kare,
Koi Nahi Tumhare Jaisa, Na Tum Kisi Ke Jaisi Ho..

"Rishi"
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«Reply #1 on: August 09, 2013, 10:56:45 PM »
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waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Rishi ji, bahut hi pyaaraa, bahut khoob likha hai aapne, mazaa aa gayaaa padh ke... bole to ek dum zabardassstttt....!!!
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«Reply #2 on: August 09, 2013, 10:57:48 PM »
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very beautifully written.......  bahot khoobsoorat.
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«Reply #3 on: August 09, 2013, 11:14:09 PM »
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waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Rishi ji, bahut hi pyaaraa, bahut khoob likha hai aapne, mazaa aa gayaaa padh ke... bole to ek dum zabardassstttt....!!!


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«Reply #4 on: August 09, 2013, 11:15:14 PM »
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very beautifully written.......  bahot khoobsoorat.

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«Reply #5 on: August 10, 2013, 12:01:15 AM »
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waah waah rishi .... pehchana tumne , we met in 2010 here .... kya khubsurat writer ban gaye ho bhai ... maan gaye
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wha wha bhut khub
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Rishi bhai ekdum dilfareb dilkash peshkash rahi..iss umda post pe dhero daad qubool kare..happy9
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«Reply #8 on: August 10, 2013, 03:12:50 AM »
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ek dum fooltoooo fatakkkkkk chumeshwari poem rishi........... iski tareef to main already itni kar chuki hun......

mast mast bht hi zbardastttttttttttttttt
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waah waah rishi .... pehchana tumne , we met in 2010 here .... kya khubsurat writer ban gaye ho bhai ... maan gaye

धन्यवाद..
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wha wha bhut khub

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Rishi bhai ekdum dilfareb dilkash peshkash rahi..iss umda post pe dhero daad qubool kare..happy9

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ek dum fooltoooo fatakkkkkk chumeshwari poem rishi........... iski tareef to main already itni kar chuki hun......

mast mast bht hi zbardastttttttttttttttt



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«Reply #13 on: August 10, 2013, 08:34:40 AM »
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waah waah......kya baat.....super....
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