बेमौसम बरसात हो रही है शहर में आजकल - By Betaab.

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«Reply #15 on: November 29, 2013, 06:29:40 PM »
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दिल को काबू में रक्खो जहाँ तक हो सके,
हर अज़नबी को अपने दिल की बात बताया न करो.

बड़ा खराब है माहौल इस ज़ालिम ज़माने का,
इस तरह सज संवरकर बाज़ार न जाया करो.

dksaxena ji aap ki kalam ki dhaar kafi paini ho gai hai....badhaaai.
bahut khoooooooooooooooooooob
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«Reply #16 on: December 16, 2013, 10:18:39 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on November 28, 2013, 12:25:11 PM
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«Reply #17 on: December 16, 2013, 10:20:25 PM »
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Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on November 28, 2013, 12:49:15 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :thumbup:bhut khub
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«Reply #18 on: December 16, 2013, 10:21:44 PM »
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Quote from: Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on November 28, 2013, 01:21:43 PM
bahut bahut khoob.... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #19 on: December 16, 2013, 10:23:31 PM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on November 28, 2013, 01:47:37 PM
bahut khoob

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«Reply #20 on: December 16, 2013, 10:24:14 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on November 28, 2013, 03:10:44 PM
Bahut achcha likhe ho...dheron dheron daaaaaaad betaab ji...
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«Reply #21 on: December 16, 2013, 10:24:59 PM »
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on November 28, 2013, 03:12:48 PM
bauht khooooooob.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #22 on: December 16, 2013, 10:27:41 PM »
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Quote from: sahal on November 28, 2013, 04:48:20 PM
Bemausam barsaat ho rahi hai shahar mein aajkal,
Is tarah apni zulfen hawa mein na lahraaya karo.

wwaaah waah kamaal ka kalaaam

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«Reply #23 on: December 16, 2013, 10:29:15 PM »
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Quote from: sarfira on November 28, 2013, 04:12:55 PM

bht khoob

janaab jin asharon m 'na' ko bad m likha h unme pehle 'na' lgae to aur behtar hota

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«Reply #24 on: December 16, 2013, 10:30:47 PM »
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Quote from: suman59 on November 28, 2013, 04:58:00 PM
bahut bauut khoob. bahut c daad Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #25 on: December 16, 2013, 10:31:48 PM »
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Quote from: Iqtedar on November 28, 2013, 05:27:26 PM
bahot hi khoooob...
Dil ko kaboo mein rakho jahan tak ho sake,
Har aznabi ko apne dil ki baat bataaya na karo.

Bada kharab hai mahaul is zalim zamane ka,
Is tarah saj sanwarkar Bazar na jaaya karo.

Lag na jaaye dushmanon ki nazar tumko,
Apne maathe pe kaala tika lagaaya karo.
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«Reply #26 on: December 16, 2013, 10:32:51 PM »
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Quote from: Saman Firdaus on November 28, 2013, 09:25:40 PM
Wahh!!! wahh!!! wahh!!!

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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on November 28, 2013, 09:44:06 PM
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«Reply #28 on: December 16, 2013, 10:36:16 PM »
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Quote from: jeet jainam on November 29, 2013, 01:56:50 AM
लग न जाए दुश्मनों की नज़र तुमको,
अपने माथे पे काला टीका लगाया करो.

बेमौसम बरसात हो रही है शहर में आजकल,
इस तरह अपनी ज़ुल्फ़ें हवा में न लहराया करो.

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #29 on: December 16, 2013, 10:37:35 PM »
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Quote from: nashwani on November 29, 2013, 02:12:32 AM
बेमौसम बरसात हो रही है शहर में आजकल,
इस तरह अपनी ज़ुल्फ़ें हवा में न लहराया करो.

Waah waah saxena jee bada hi achha likha hai..
Par iss sher ke kya kehne..
Dhero daad..happy9

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