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Easy Arooz - Chapter-1 (Ibtadai baaten)

by vb on January 06, 2014, 08:34:01 PM

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«Reply #15 on: May 13, 2015, 08:05:26 AM »

aap tamaam ehbaab ka shukria ...

Quote from: M.Zubair Tahir on December 22, 2014, 08:27:06 PM

Really a very informative article; brief but pithy. I would like to draw attention towards one misra from "bahatteryat e Mir, quoted in the article as in the following;
"Yaksar wo istakhwaan-e-shikasta say choor tha"
I think it is "Yaksar wo istakhwaan shikaston say choor tha".
Please review.

Mohtaram M.Zubair Tahir sahab... aap ki baat durust hay, k sher main ghalti hay.. hum ne chaha k durusti kr li jayay lekin as post men ab hamen, edit ki ajazat nahi hay... so maa'zoor hen..

aap ka shukria k as qadar tavaju say hamari kavish ko parha aur waqat dia...

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«Reply #16 on: May 03, 2021, 11:52:52 AM »

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