How to decide perfect ...title / shirshak for Poetry:Shayari ki Batein- Sawaal Jawaab

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Dear all,
kai baar yoindia par shayri padhte samay zahan me khayal aata hai ki "falan , fala" ghazal ka title jyada behtar ho sakta tha....ye maine khud apni likhi hui ghazal/ nazm / kavitaon ke liye bhi mahsoos kiya hai...jiska shayad karan ye hai ki ghazal likh-ne ke baad use post karne ki jaldi hoti hai aur title bas ek formality ban kar rah jaata hai...aur baad me ye ehsaas hota hai....
to doston mai chahta hun ki aap sabhi apni vichar yahan likhen ki kisi bhi ghazal ka shirshak chunane le liye hume kin baaton ka khayal rakhna chahiye...


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Re: how to decide perfect ...title / shirshak

«Reply #1 on: July 31, 2009, 09:24:18 AM »

Hello All,

First of all thnx to Sanjeev bhai, for gud thread...

Aur Jaise ki Sanjeev Brother ne bataya ki sach me ham kayi baar jaldi me apni ghazal ko sahi naam(Title) nahi de paate, ye mere sath bhi hua hai,

mere khayal se sahi Title wahi hota hai jisme aapki likhi ghazal ka kuch roop nazar aaye, aur aapka title itna lamba na ho ki insaan title pad ke hi boar ho jaaye, title me kam se kam lafz use karke use ek aisa naam dena chahiye jise padte hi har insan ki icha ho ki wo ek baar ghajal ko bhi pade..

kayi baar aisa bhi hota hai ki kuch log likhte to khumar me hai lekin title dard jaisa de dete hai, aur kuch dard me likhkar title khumar wala deta hai, iss wajah se jo bhi insan ghazal ko padta hai ghajal aur title dono me confused sa jata hai,

so i think ki naam (Title) wahi de jo aapki ghazal ya lines ko suit karta ho, aur jitna ho sake title chota hi rakhe, par itna jaroor ho ki uss title me aapki ghazal ki chavi nazar aati ho..

Shukriya

Shally.


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Re: how to decide perfect ...title / shirshak

«Reply #2 on: July 31, 2009, 09:37:37 AM »

U are absolutely right Dear Shally ji.....title aisa hona chahiye k use padhte hi poori nazm/gajal padhne ka man kare....shukriya Shally ji.

Aapka bhi bahut bahut shukriya bekrar ji...aapne bahut accha sawal pucha hai...i hope isse un sabko madad milegi jinhe meri tarah title choose karne me problem hoti hai.


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Re: How to decide perfect ...title / shirshak for Poetry

«Reply #3 on: July 31, 2009, 09:58:18 AM »

Shukriya Pooja Dear,

& Shukriya Kaash Ji, Aapne ke views bhi aache hai.

Shally.


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Re: How to decide perfect ...title / shirshak for Poetry

«Reply #4 on: August 23, 2009, 06:07:27 PM »

shally sis nikhaar ji aur kaash ji aap sabhi ne bahoot achcha margdarshan diya hai...aur mai aap logon se sahmat hun...lekin aur bhi yoindians ke views yahan aa jayen to hum sabhi ki jaankaari me khasa izafa ho sakta hai...


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Re: How to decide perfect ...title / shirshak for Poetry

«Reply #5 on: August 23, 2009, 09:47:00 PM »

Hi

YEH AIK AISA SAWAL HAI JISKA KHUD SHAIR HI FAISLA KER SAKTA HAI.
YEH KAHNA KE JALDI HOOTI HAI POST KERNE KI , SAMAJH SE BAHER HAI.KUINKE SHAIR JAB KUCH LIKHTA HAI TO WOH KISI UNWAAN KE BAGHAIR LIKH HI NAHIN SAKTA , USKA MAQSAD QATAYEE WAZEH AUR MUKAMMIL HOOTA HAI. HAN KABHI KABHI USKE ZAHEN MEIN YEH ZAROOR SAWAL AATA HAI KE SHAIR KI KIS LINE KO APNA UNWAAN QARAAR DON , KUINKE KABHI KABHI KOI MISRA JIS MAFHOOM KO LEKER LIKH RAHA HAI PAHLE WALE SE BEHTER HO JATA HAI IS LIYE WOH USKO UNWAN QARAAR DE DETA HAI.
MAGER JADEED SHAIRI YA NAZM MEIN INSAAN AIK HI TOPIC KO LEKER CHALTA HAI AUR USI KE TASALSUL MEIN KHATM BHI KERTA HAI , KABHI KABHI USKA ANJAAM TAK PAHUCHANE KE BAAD WOH TAZABZUB MEIN PAD JATA HAI KE ISKA YEH YA WOH TITLE SAHI RAHE GA . JO US NAZM KE QAREEB HOOTA RAKH LETA HAI . MAGER WOH ZIDA DOOR NAHIN JATA HAI APNE UNWAAN SE.

TX

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Re: How to decide perfect ...title / shirshak for Poetry

«Reply #6 on: August 23, 2009, 10:17:06 PM »

Meri raya javedji se mael khaati hai.

Unwaan wahi sahi jo aapke kalaam ko behtreen dhang se bayan kare ya fir ek kotuhul paida kare lekin wo kalaam ke mutaabik hi ho. Sabse upar ye ki jo aapka dil kahe.


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