Let's Teach and Learn the Techniques of Shayari !

SOPHI JI,KOYAL JI,AUR RIYAZ JI....

YE SAHI HAI MERI AADAT HAI ME EK LINE KISI KI LIKHI HUI POEM KI LETA HUN AUR EK LINE ME APNI JODTA HUN,THEEK HAI AGAR YE KISIKO PASAND NAHI HAI TOH ME AISA NAHI KARUNGA...
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                                 cara.

Dear Cara ji. Aapki baat se bahut khushi hui aur ye bhi saabit hua ke aap ek nek dil insaan hain. Kuchh member aise bhi hain jo sirf apni baat ko hi sahi mante hain aur bahas karte hain. Aapne sahi ko sahi mana aur doosre members ki feelings ka samman kiya, bahut achhi baat hai. Hamein ek dusrey ka khayaal rakhna hi chahiye.

Ab sabhi se nivedan hai ke usi previous dicussion par aa jayen yaani- Tukbandi, its uses, writing in meter etc. etc.

Writing Meters in Poetry !

Its nothing but meant a lot ... its all about rhyming words which called meters or noice in poetry...

Noice means rhyming words with starts from begining to last...

For eg:- Love - dove ( In English) or  Aate - Jaate , Karte - Marte , Fisalte - Sambhalte .. etc etc...

This is Basic thing which help you learn the techniques of the poetry ...Which usually everyone uses.





 

What is the subject ? Please clear whether Meter writing in poetry or poetry writing in meter.

Well Koyal Ji and Sophi ji, Meter ke baare mein jo thoda bahut mein jaanta hun batata hun..

Meter English poetry likhne ka ek fixed style, pattern hai. This is a poetic measure: arrangement of words in regularly measured, patterned, or rhythmic lines or verses. Iske bahut saare type ho sakte hain jaise pentameter, dactlylic meter etc. The meter usually depends on acoustic properties of the spoken words, such as the length or stress of their syllables, independently of their meaning. The sound attributes that determine the meter may vary from language to language, and sometimes between poetic traditions.

Jis tarah English poetry mein meter hota hai usi tarah urdu poetry mein Behr hoti hai. Different languages hone ki wajah se dono ka tariqa alag alag ho sakta hain lekin maqsad ek hai. Hamein  kyonki Urdu-Hindi shayari se matlab hai isliye hum Behr ki baat karenge.
 
Urdu shayari ke hisaab se kisi ghazal ka behr mein hona compulsory hai warna wo ghazal nahi mani jati. Behr Urdu mein Arabi se aai hai aur iska bahut istemaal hota hai. Behren bahut qism ki hoti hain inke naam bhi hote hain jaise Ramal, Hajaz, Taweel, Khafif, Mutadarik and Wafir etc. Inme se 8-10 hi zyada istemaal hoti hain..

Iska tuk(kafia) se koi lena dena nahi hai. Koi do lines tuk mein nahin lekin wo behr mein ho sakti hain. Isi tarah do lines tuk mein hain, zaruri nahin wo behr mein bhi hon.Tuk ek alag matter hai.

Behr mein kuchh irkaan(factors, steps) hote hain jinse milkar ye banti hain.  Urdu na janne walon ko ye dusre dhang se samajhna jaa sakta hai. Hindi ke hisaab se kaha jaye to ye Matraon(Laghu-Guru) ka predefined order(sequence) hai jisko har line mein nibhana zaruri hai.
Iska bada fayeda ye hai ke koi bhi Musician iski asaani se dhun(tune) bana sakta hai. Zyadatar old hindi movie songs behr mein hain. Ab to pehle tune banti phir song writer song likhta tha pehle iska ulta hota tha.

Misaal ke taur par ek Behr ke irkaan dekhein

faa-i-lun   faa-i-lun  faa-i-lun  faa-i-lun

Is behr ka naam MUTADARIK hai, Hindi ke hisaab se agar maatraon - Laghu ko 1 aur Guru ko 2 likhen to ye is tarah hogi

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Baaqi phir

Thanks.

Pyaare dosto! Is section meiN aaya to aap logon se guftugu karne ko dil chaaha. KOYAL Sahiba k sher ko baDi khoobsurti k saath Janaab Riyaz Saheb ne bahr (meter) ki qaid meiN laakar sher meiN dobaalgi ata kar di. Riyaz Saheb ne badi tafseel se meter (bahr) k ramooz-o-nukaat samjhaaye. Sher kya hai, sher kise kahte haiN, isko samajhna bahut zaroori hai warna sirf jumloN k aakhri lafz ya kafiyoN ko badal dena hi sher nahiN hai. Sher kahne k qaide-qaanoon Mr Riyaz Saheb ne badi had tak samjha diye haiN. Is se ye ilm hua k sher ko hum-wazn likha jata hai jise urf-aam meiN chhand, bahr waghaira kahte haiN. Baghair chhand ya meter k koi bhi alfaazoN ka samooh sher nahiN kahlaayega. Ab aap KOYAL Saheba ka jo sher (Zamaana rokta to hai magar kab koi rukta hai…..Koi bhi apne guzre kal ko kaise bhool sakta hai) Janaab Riyaz Saheb ne durust kiya hai, use dekhiye, jiske arkaan haiN:

Mafayeelun……. Mafayeelun…. Mafayeelun…….. Mafayeelun

Ise number meiN yuN bhi samjha ja sakta hai:

1+2+2+2……....…..1+2+2+2……….......1+2+2+2………….....1+2+2+2

Ab KOYAL Sahiba k sher ko is tarah tauliye:

Za maa na ro…...k ta to hai……....ma gar kab ko….…yee ruk ta hai
Ko i bhi ap…..….ne guz re kal....ko kai se bhoo……l sak ta hai

Is tarah hum ne dekha k KOYAL Sahiba ka sher kaise durust hua. MaiN ye kahna zaroori samajhta hooN k koi bhi sher, ghazal waghaira aap kaheN to use muhalle k kisi maanind Shaayar, Kavi do dikhla deN, uske baad hi yahaN post kareN. Koi bhi Shaayar ya Kavi ise dekhne k baad aapko zaroori maalumaat baham pahuNcha sakta hai, warna puri zindagi be-masraf ki tukbandi karte hue guzar jaayegi jo siwaaye waqt ki barbaadi ke ilaawah kuchh bhi nahiN hai. Aur aakhir meiN chalte chalte aap sab se darkhwast hai k mujh se agar koi talkh-kalaami ho gayee ho to baraye mehrbaani maaf kijiyega.

main bhi ek koshish karti hoon.

UNKE HAR EK ADAA BHI KITNA AJEEB HAI
JISSE CHAHE KARDE GHAYAL APNE NIGAHON SE
BAN SAWAR KE AATE HAI ISS MAHEFIL MEIN
KARKE GHAYAL CHALE JAATE HAI ISS MAHEFIL SE
UNKE HAR EK ADAAYE BHI KITNA AJEEB HAI

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