Let's Teach and Learn the Techniques of Shayari !

by deepika_divya on January 25, 2010, 02:03:40 PM
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ateet
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«Reply #75 on: July 14, 2013, 07:12:14 PM »
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'ateet' mera takhllus hai mai 4 saal se shayri likhta hu mera collection fb pe hai ateet name k group me...
pr mujhe apni likhavat me kuch kami si agti he so plz point out and notify me how i do best shayri...
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ateet
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«Reply #76 on: July 14, 2013, 07:14:01 PM »
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laga sadma aaj mujhsa sharab ko bhi 'ateet',
baad jane k uske ik bund bhi na pi...
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«Reply #77 on: July 14, 2013, 07:26:17 PM »
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Quote from: ateet on July 14, 2013, 07:14:01 PM
laga sadma aaj mujhsa sharab ko bhi 'ateet',
baad jane k uske ik bund bhi na pi...
Khyaal accha hai per aapko Yoindia Shayariadab join karna chahiye tabhi aapko sahi guidance mil payega.
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Gurjyot
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«Reply #78 on: October 09, 2013, 01:46:40 AM »
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I want to learn doing shayari.. I have tried a lot but still I am not that fluent and a lot of time I have to learn the shayari of some other shayars...http://www.yogadz.com/ If some one could give me a tip that how to do it or in how much time (I know this time can take months) will it take to be a good shayar... After that I will go on to make myself even better but please give me some suggestions or tips...
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Ashu gumanam shayar
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«Reply #79 on: October 09, 2013, 05:46:37 PM »
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Though, i am not a good shayar, but i love sher-o-shayari and sometimes i write also.I have written some shayari/kavita titles "sapne", Badalti Hawa", "Aanshu"
I have noticed/learned few things which i would like to highlight here.
1. One cannot become shayar, because shayars' are born shayar.
2. To write a shayari most important thing is  your heart/emotions. You can never write a good shayri using your mind.
3. You must have a theme for writing.
4. Make the context/structure.
5. you should be able to correlate different analogy of your perspective to nature/incidents.
6. It must have a flow, and not just the ending words match.

I hope it helps you.ATB
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Ashu gumanam shayar
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«Reply #80 on: October 09, 2013, 05:53:51 PM »
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हर इक मुस्कराहट के पीछे हैं आंसू
फसल आरजूओं की सींचे हैं आंसू
बता 'रूह' कैसे रहें दूर इनसे?
हम ही से हमें दूर खींचे हैं आंसू!
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aansuoo ki kadra na kar aye galib,
aksar yeh daga de jate hai
log chehare pe chehra chipa ke baithe hi
aur ham har chehre pe aitbar kiye baithe hai.....
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mkv
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«Reply #81 on: October 09, 2013, 06:14:49 PM »
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Quote from: Ashu gumanam shayar on October 09, 2013, 05:46:37 PM
Though, i am not a good shayar, but i love sher-o-shayari and sometimes i write also.I have written some shayari/kavita titles "sapne", Badalti Hawa", "Aanshu"
I have noticed/learned few things which i would like to highlight here.
1. One cannot become shayar, because shayars' are born shayar.
2. To write a shayari most important thing is  your heart/emotions. You can never write a good shayri using your mind.
3. You must have a theme for writing.
4. Make the context/structure.
5. you should be able to correlate different analogy of your perspective to nature/incidents.
6. It must have a flow, and not just the ending words match.

I hope it helps you.ATB


I respect your feelings.
some of your observations are really good.
Applause
Ab to log khule aam poetry ka mazaak udaate hain..
chit chat..etc..etc..
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Ashu gumanam shayar
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«Reply #82 on: October 09, 2013, 06:42:57 PM »
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majaak?...have i made some wrong statements??
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mkv
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«Reply #83 on: October 09, 2013, 06:49:13 PM »
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Quote from: Ashu gumanam shayar on October 09, 2013, 06:42:57 PM
majaak?...have i made some wrong statements??
Never mind..
NO..
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Saman Firdaus
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«Reply #84 on: November 05, 2013, 02:42:06 PM »
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At first when i joined Yoindia Shayariadab I was also not able to write good poetries I used to write 4 Lines poetry or 2 lines poetry bt when one of the member of Yoindia Shayariadab told me about poetries tht how should i write it then 4m tht time I started to write more than 2 or 4 lines poetry. And now i am tht much able to write it at all. Nd I m really thnkfull to tht member... Now many members appreciates my work nd i am so happy for tht...
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greatRAjput
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«Reply #85 on: December 12, 2013, 07:51:39 PM »
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MEri likhi KIsmat ko to me Badal na saka....bus KOsis Karta Raha ZinDagi Bhar...Ek Saval HE us Azanabi(khuda) se ...
ZIndagi Zini thi muje... FIr Kyu LIkhi KISmat Tumhi ne...RAjput
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gagandeep singh
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«Reply #86 on: February 16, 2014, 06:20:42 AM »
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Rab wi kehde kehede kedh kidaunda ha..
Jide kaul dil nhi...udhe nall hi lagunda hai..
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Gagandeep sing banga
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«Reply #87 on: February 16, 2014, 06:25:39 AM »
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Assi udhi ek ek sahan sahan (saans)di khbr rakhi
...te edar sadhe sahan hi muk gye te usnu khbr na lagi
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RANJAN KUMAR GUPTA
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«Reply #88 on: November 03, 2014, 07:36:32 PM »
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Ziyo To Apne Rang Me Ziyo Jise Dekh Zamana Khud-B-Khud Bhig Jayega Aur Ye Sara Jahan Rangeen Nazar Ayega.....
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«Reply #89 on: November 24, 2014, 05:50:45 AM »
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Tere jiya yaar ni milna, eho jiya pyaar ni milna..
Bina maange rab ne diya tera sath, hund ni chahida mainu kuch tere baad..
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