Let's Teach and Learn the Techniques of Shayari !

by deepika_divya on January 25, 2010, 02:03:40 PM
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«Reply #90 on: December 18, 2014, 10:09:42 PM »
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Tujhhe paane ki  chaahat nahi
Tujhe khine ki takat nahi
Tere pass rahu toh tu khush nahi
Tujhse durr rahu toh mein khush nahi

I made this and my friends says this is good but I don't think so.... do u?
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«Reply #91 on: December 18, 2014, 10:11:32 PM »
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Tujhhe paane ki  chaahat nahi
Tujhe khone ki takat nahi
Tere pass rahu toh tu khush nahi
Tujhse durr rahu toh mein khush nahi

I made this and my friends says this is good but I don't think so.... do u?
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«Reply #92 on: December 18, 2014, 11:23:57 PM »
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bahut khoob. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #93 on: April 23, 2015, 08:53:07 AM »
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«Reply #94 on: May 26, 2015, 07:33:43 AM »
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dosto dosti es kdr nibhao wo yaad rkha tumha hr pl k lia pr kisi ko dokha na do  iskdr bhool jai tumha zindgi bhr k lia...
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«Reply #95 on: September 27, 2015, 09:07:24 AM »
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''agar app kahein to mein chand tharoo ko thod du
agar app kahein to mein facebook use karna bhi chod du
agar app kahein to mein sooraj ke roshni ko chipalu
ethna bas hai meri jaan ya do,theen jhuut or booldu''. hello
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«Reply #96 on: December 22, 2015, 01:41:21 PM »
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 happy3
Tere pyaar ne mjhe apne paas rok kr rkha hai
Hawa chli toh lga
Yeh teri mehkti khushboo Ka jhonka hai
Socha aaj propose kr deta hun,
Mauka hai.....
Morning alarm bta toh pta chla
Yeh sb toh dream and dokha hai.........

Can u suggest me how are my writing skills..... And please u can tell how can I improve them
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«Reply #97 on: May 31, 2016, 02:30:35 AM »
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Hii...i am a shayar
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subhadeep
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«Reply #98 on: May 31, 2016, 02:35:29 AM »
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Maine tab tab hawa ko jaane Diya....
Jab laga wo hawa meri nhi hai..
Kuch pal mehkane aaatein hai wo...
Meri marz Ki dawa nhi hai...
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hir
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«Reply #99 on: September 15, 2016, 05:23:20 PM »
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humsafar ki talash me hum safar pe nikale the,hum talas me mashgul the aur humsafar safar pe nikal gaye
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«Reply #100 on: September 16, 2016, 06:16:09 PM »
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Soch
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«Reply #101 on: September 27, 2016, 07:25:44 PM »
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Ya khuda Ye Kaisa Manzar Hai ,
Sath me koi uske ghar par hai .
Usne thukra diya mujhe fir bhi,
Naam uska mere labo par hai ,
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«Reply #102 on: November 25, 2016, 05:32:24 PM »
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kabhi kisi ko dost Na banana
agar dost banao to pakka dost Na banana
agar pakka dost banao to Bhai ya behn Na banana
agar Bhai ya behn nabanao to kabhi aankh moondkar vishwaas Na krna
agar vishwas karo to bhugatne k liye bhi taiyaar rehnaa
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«Reply #103 on: November 29, 2017, 05:59:55 PM »
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Pyar  tera  nall  ae  
Tera nall he rehna aa
Duniyan nu das ka
Ma ki lanaa ka.....
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«Reply #104 on: January 13, 2018, 12:07:23 AM »
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kabhi kabhi yeh zindgi jannat si maloom hoti ha
kabhi kabhi is jannat ko aag lagany ko je chahta ha
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