Parwane Aur Meri Baat......................"Touhid"

by Mohammad Touhid on May 14, 2010, 03:42:46 AM
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ye kavita kareeb char-panch saal pehle likhi gayi thi... kisi se koi kis hadd tak pyar kar sakta hai... iska jeeta jaagta mishal SHAMA-PARWANA hai... ummid karta hoon aap logo ko ye nazm pasand aayegi.... SHUKRIYA..


Maine parwane se Kaha:-
Ai Parwane tu shama se pyar kyon karta hai,
duniya tere pyar ko nahi samajhti iski numaish kyon karta hai.,

Parwane ne kaha:-
Mai pyar ki numaish nahi karta sachi mohabbat ka sabut deta hoon,
Mai jal jaunga iski parwah nahi karta aur lelahate hue sholo me kud deta hoon.,

Maine parwane se Kaha:-
Tu markar bhi apni mohabbat ko pa na saka ye kaisi mohabbat hai,
Aur tu har pal me sau bar kehta hai shama teri dhadkan ki jarurat hai.,

Parwane ne kaha:-
Yahan kiska pyar jamane me pura hota hai,
Pyar ka to pehla akshar hi adhura hota hai.,

Maine parwane se kaha:-
Ye sab jante hue bhi tu shama se itna pyar kyon karta hai,
shama tujhe jala deti hai tu uske bujhne ka intezar kyon karta hai.,

Parwane ne kaha:-
Parwane ki kya majaal ke wo shama se pyar kare,
mai to yuhi uske aamne saamne ghoom leta hoon.,
ye to shama ki meharbani hai ke marne se pehle,
mai ek bar uske roushan hothon ko choom leta hoon..,
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«Reply #1 on: May 14, 2010, 04:29:29 AM »
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 sad5(Kya kahen aapke tareef mein Touhid ji,dil bhar aayi aapke nazm padke,yahi toh haqiqat hai.bahut dard bhari nazm pesh kiya aapne,mindblowing creation,aise hi likhte rahiyega. Hats off to you! Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 14, 2010, 04:32:41 AM »
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shukriya madhu ji........
alfazo, kalaamo, aur jajbato ne yu hi sath diya to jarur achha likhne ki koshis karenge,,,.. shukriya.... khus rahiye.....
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«Reply #3 on: May 15, 2010, 08:26:36 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: July 29, 2011, 07:33:53 PM »
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ye shayri bhari bate sabo lubhayegi..
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«Reply #5 on: January 05, 2012, 04:03:33 AM »
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KABHI PARWAANE SE KAHA KARTE THE KE TERI TARAH YAHAN KOUN MOHABBAT KIYA KARTA HAI..

KI UNSE MOHABBAT TO KHUDAYA MAALOOM HUA KE PARWANE KI TARAH JALNA KYA HOTA HAI.. tongue3
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sard hawai zailtay vishwas. Sushil Bansal(sheel Didi)
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bahut bahut shukriya susil ji... Usual Smile
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