●●●● Bina Behr ki Ghazal ●●●●

by Zaif on March 15, 2014, 10:13:38 PM

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Ek sankalp -

Aaj se ghazal ko sirf behr me likhne ki koshish krunga. Bahut logo ne toka bhi h or smjhaya bhi h. Behr ke jaankaar mitron se nivedan h ke meri aagaami ghazalon me agar behr-sambandhi ghalti hoti hai to plz mujhe aagaah krein. Kyunki ghazal ko bina behr ke likhna vyarth h, bewakoofi h.

Ghazal ki apni ek maryada h or is maryada ke sath or khilwaad krna ghalat h. Main bharpur koshish kr rha hu behr me likhne ki. Agr main behr nhi seekh pata to main ghazal kehna chhod dunga..

- Ya ilaahi madad !!

- Zaif :-(


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Re: ●●●● Bina Behr ki Ghazal ●●●●

«Reply #1 on: March 16, 2014, 12:04:21 AM »

Good One.!!


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Re: ●●●● Bina Behr ki Ghazal ●●●●

«Reply #2 on: March 16, 2014, 12:40:47 AM »

most welcome vaise jo ab tak aapne kahaa vo bhee bahr ke bahut kareeb thaa aur bahut logo se achhaa thaa god bless u aapkee murad pooree hogee aur yaqeenan aapkaa shumar achhe shayron men hogaa


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Re: ●●●● Bina Behr ki Ghazal ●●●●

«Reply #3 on: March 16, 2014, 01:01:30 AM »

Nice decision . Shaayari mizaj mein ho to Baher mein kahna koi mushkil nahi. You have a poetic mind and will do well. Inshaallah . Best of Luck.


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Re: ●●●● Bina Behr ki Ghazal ●●●●

«Reply #4 on: March 16, 2014, 02:05:27 AM »

best of luck..


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Re: ●●●● Bina Behr ki Ghazal ●●●●

«Reply #5 on: March 16, 2014, 03:03:50 AM »

best of luck zafi ji


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Re: ●●●● Bina Behr ki Ghazal ●●●●

«Reply #6 on: March 16, 2014, 01:01:50 PM »

ALL THE BEST


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Re: ●●●● Bina Behr ki Ghazal ●●●●

«Reply #7 on: March 16, 2014, 06:13:42 PM »

Aap sabhi ka bahut shukrguzaar hun. Usual Smile


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Re: ●●●● Bina Behr ki Ghazal ●●●●

«Reply #8 on: August 14, 2014, 05:32:21 PM »

plz plz koi help kre is ka Grammar aur bhar teek kren ALLAH aap ka hame o nasar ho.shukrya

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