●●●● Bina Behr ki Ghazal ●●●●

by Zaif on March 15, 2014, 10:13:38 PM
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Ek sankalp -

Aaj se ghazal ko sirf behr me likhne ki koshish krunga. Bahut logo ne toka bhi h or smjhaya bhi h. Behr ke jaankaar mitron se nivedan h ke meri aagaami ghazalon me agar behr-sambandhi ghalti hoti hai to plz mujhe aagaah krein. Kyunki ghazal ko bina behr ke likhna vyarth h, bewakoofi h.  

Ghazal ki apni ek maryada h or is maryada ke sath or khilwaad krna ghalat h. Main bharpur koshish kr rha hu behr me likhne ki. Agr main behr nhi seekh pata to main ghazal kehna chhod dunga..

- Ya ilaahi madad !!

- Zaif :-(
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«Reply #1 on: March 16, 2014, 12:04:21 AM »
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Good One.!!
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«Reply #2 on: March 16, 2014, 12:40:47 AM »
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most welcome vaise jo ab tak aapne kahaa vo bhee bahr ke bahut kareeb thaa aur bahut logo se achhaa thaa god bless u aapkee murad pooree hogee aur yaqeenan aapkaa shumar achhe shayron men hogaa
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«Reply #3 on: March 16, 2014, 01:01:30 AM »
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Nice decision . Shaayari mizaj mein ho to Baher mein kahna koi mushkil nahi. You have a poetic mind and will do well. Inshaallah . Best of Luck.
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«Reply #4 on: March 16, 2014, 02:05:27 AM »
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best of luck..
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«Reply #5 on: March 16, 2014, 03:03:50 AM »
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best of luck zafi ji
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«Reply #6 on: March 16, 2014, 01:01:50 PM »
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ALL THE BEST Thumbs UP
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«Reply #7 on: March 16, 2014, 06:13:42 PM »
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Aap sabhi ka bahut shukrguzaar hun. Usual Smile
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