Ik mehna apne pyar de nam

by Bhupi ubhi on August 17, 2009, 04:56:14 PM
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Bhupi ubhi
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Tu mere jazbattan di kadar paundi , shayad edi meri takdir nai c.

Tere dil de kimti frame vich main fit ho skda , shayad eni sohni meri rooh di tasvir nai c .

Jo tu chahundi o main de dinda , shayad eni takdi meri  zameer nai c ,

tere kehan te main apne mapean nu chad dinda , shayad ena v bdnaseeb nai c ,

jis vich tu jakdi rakh skdi , shayad tere kol eho jahi pyar di zanjeer nai c,

jis te tu wakh wakh tazarbe kr skdi , "BHUPI" v jivit insan c koi murda sareer nai c .
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: August 17, 2009, 05:13:37 PM »
Tu mere jazbattan di kadar paundi , shayad edi meri takdir nai c.

Tere dil de kimti frame vich main fit ho skda , shayad eni sohni meri rooh di tasvir nai c .

Jo tu chahundi o main de dinda , shayad eni takdi meri  zameer nai c ,

tere kehan te main apne mapean nu chad dinda , shayad ena v bdnaseeb nai c ,

jis vich tu jakdi rakh skdi , shayad tere kol eho jahi pyar di zanjeer nai c,

jis te tu wakh wakh tazarbe kr skdi , "BHUPI" v jivit insan c koi murda sareer nai c .

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah wah wah ek ek shabd dil se nikal kar apki is rachna main bas gaya....bahoot khoob!!!
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #2 on: August 17, 2009, 10:04:13 PM »
Wah wah bahut khoob Bhupi ji.wonderful creation icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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thegrimreaper
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«Reply #3 on: August 17, 2009, 10:52:03 PM »
Tu mere jazbattan di kadar paundi , shayad edi meri takdir nai c.

Tere dil de kimti frame vich main fit ho skda , shayad eni sohni meri rooh di tasvir nai c .

Jo tu chahundi o main de dinda , shayad eni takdi meri  zameer nai c ,

tere kehan te main apne mapean nu chad dinda , shayad ena v bdnaseeb nai c ,

jis vich tu jakdi rakh skdi , shayad tere kol eho jahi pyar di zanjeer nai c,

jis te tu wakh wakh tazarbe kr skdi , "BHUPI" v jivit insan c koi murda sareer nai c .

wah bhupinder ji bahut acchi shuruat
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lovely_nancy
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«Reply #4 on: January 30, 2010, 12:18:50 AM »
waah, kya likha hai
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strange
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«Reply #5 on: June 13, 2010, 07:24:47 PM »
very nice Bhupi ji...tusi tan jo mera naal hoia ohi likh dita...
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