- Bakhti Ki Jyoti Jala Do -

by Meena on September 24, 2005, 03:35:12 PM
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Phir se ek choti si koshish pesh karti hoon. nahin janti ke kitna sahi likha kitna galat, bas jo man me tha wohi likhne ki koshish ki  :D

Aye Ishwar, man me mere apni bakhti ki jyoti jala do,
Door kar do jo basa hai waha agyan ka andhera hai,

Mukht ho jaye hum moho maya ke is jaal se,
Bas Tujhe pa kar hi jeevan ka sawera hai,

Duniya, daulat, Rrishte nate, kuch bhi to nahin yaha apna,
Bas Tere ek nam ke siwa aur kya mera hai,

Kehte hai log Mandir Tera ghar hai, Mandir Tera stan,
Hum to kehte hai ke humare dil me ho bas Tera hi dera hai.
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«Reply #1 on: September 26, 2005, 05:15:28 PM »
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Acha likha hai meena sis....kaafi kuch sahi infact...last 4 lines kaafi achi hain.
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«Reply #2 on: September 26, 2005, 05:24:35 PM »
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too gud sis.....
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«Reply #3 on: October 11, 2005, 10:08:51 PM »
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Good one meena
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«Reply #4 on: October 27, 2005, 09:00:46 PM »
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very  nice  Meena....................
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«Reply #5 on: November 17, 2005, 04:54:40 PM »
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shukriya nidhi...nikki....pooja....aur waheed...

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«Reply #6 on: December 28, 2005, 11:39:10 AM »
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ye bhog bhi to ek jog hi hai
tum shad ke maaro kya jaano
apman rachaita ka hoga
rachna ko agar thukraoge

hum kahte hain ye jag apna hai
tum kahte ho jhoot hai sapna hai
ham janma bita kar jaenge
tum janma ganva kar jaaoge

sansaar se bhage firte ho
bhagwan ko tum kya paaoge
is lok ko to apna na sake
us lok main bhi pachtaoge

         ----sahir ludhianvi


mandir dhah de masjid dhah de
dhah de jo kuch dhahinda
par kise da dil na dhanvi
is wich rab hai rahinda

      ----baba bulle shah
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