BASTAA HAI (Rubai)..... "MohaN"

by surindarn on March 14, 2016, 02:14:46 PM
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BASTAA HAI

Suntaa hoon ke khuda pathar mein bhi bastaa hai,
Sahib to phir butt prastee mein kyaa burhhaa hai!
Par lagtaa hai aajkal suntaa hai patharon kee hee,
Bashar to kehte hain kisee kee bhi naa suntaa hai!!

Surindar. N                             "MohaN"
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«Reply #1 on: March 14, 2016, 03:06:50 PM »
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What is rubaai
Well said
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«Reply #2 on: March 14, 2016, 05:33:21 PM »
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Nice
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«Reply #3 on: March 14, 2016, 08:14:13 PM »
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Quote from: Maaya on March 14, 2016, 03:06:50 PM
What is rubaai
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Bahut shukria Maaya Jee.
Rubaai ia a 4 line poetry, where first 2 line and the last line rhyme. The third line is the only one that does not rhyme.
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«Reply #4 on: March 15, 2016, 02:28:29 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: March 15, 2016, 04:53:02 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Bahut khoob sir.. Wah wah
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«Reply #6 on: March 15, 2016, 05:41:32 AM »
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Bahot khoob  Applause Applause Applause

Pattharo aaj mere sar pe baraste kyon ho
Main ne tum'ko bhi kabhi apna khuda rakha hai...
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«Reply #7 on: March 17, 2016, 02:31:45 AM »
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Quote from: Mirza Nazar on March 14, 2016, 05:33:21 PM
Nice
bahut shukria Nazar Jee.
 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2
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