Dil se Mangu dua Ajj!!!

by Pooja on July 19, 2009, 06:21:09 AM
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Dil se hai vinati, meri is vinati per dhayan kar de
Jo nahi hai mera, usko mujhse Juda kar de

Banaya hai is tarah mujhko, khud main alag kar nahi sakti
Per ab dard hua had se bahar, jise ab main aor seh nahi sakti
mujhe per bas itna sa karm kar de
Jo nahi hai Mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…

Pal pal sinchu bagia, her pal chahu sahi rasta
Mujh se mere yah zajbaat, rooh ke yeh armaan
Sab kahi door kar de
Jo nahi hai mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…

Nahi mujhe koi Sukh, leti hu bin baat ke dukh
Mujh se meri yah adat, meri nasamjhi
Sab kahi door kar de
Jo nahi hai Mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…

Waqat apna diye jaatii hu, sahi raste se bhatak jaati hu
zindagi ke asal kaam sare  bhool jaati hu
Mujhko meri khayali dunia chorne per majboor kar de
Jo nahi hai Mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…

Her kisi ko manu apna, per yakinan koi nahi hai apna
Mujh se, mere yah apnepan ke, zajbaat, khatam kar de
Jo nahi hai Mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…

Apnepan ki adat mai, thokar her baar khati hu
Ho jaati hu tanha, tadap ke tere agge atti hu
Ek baar to mujhko, is tadapne se Mukat kar de
Dil se Mangu dua ajj, Mujhko sab se Juda kar de
Jo nahi hai Mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…
Jo nahi hai Mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…
Jo nahi hai Mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…
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«Reply #1 on: July 19, 2009, 06:35:24 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Waah Di bahoot Khoob bahoot khoob likha hai.. I like the feelings contents in this topic.. this creation made me cry...

Superb Di!
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«Reply #2 on: July 19, 2009, 09:56:07 AM »
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Pooja Ji aapki Yeh Rachna Padh kar Iski Tareef Ke Liye Lafz Nahi Mil rahe Hain Mujhe.. Mujhe Yeh Bhi samajh Nahi aa raha Ki Kya Likhun..?

Isliye Bas itna hi Likhunga Ki........ Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah..   icon_thumleft icon_thumleft


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #3 on: July 19, 2009, 11:33:07 AM »
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Wah Pooja ji,bahut khoob,fantastic,wonderful creation, icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: July 19, 2009, 06:30:12 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on July 19, 2009, 06:35:24 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Waah Di bahoot Khoob bahoot khoob likha hai.. I like the feelings contents in this topic.. this creation made me cry...

Superb Di!

Thank you so much Sophi!!
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«Reply #5 on: July 19, 2009, 06:39:50 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on July 19, 2009, 09:56:07 AM
Pooja Ji aapki Yeh Rachna Padh kar Iski Tareef Ke Liye Lafz Nahi Mil rahe Hain Mujhe.. Mujhe Yeh Bhi samajh Nahi aa raha Ki Kya Likhun..?

Isliye Bas itna hi Likhunga Ki........ Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah..   icon_thumleft icon_thumleft


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**




Apki wah wah aor taalia sab kah gai Mann ji!!! bahoot bahoot shukaria apka!!
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«Reply #6 on: July 19, 2009, 06:40:35 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 19, 2009, 11:33:07 AM
Wah Pooja ji,bahut khoob,fantastic,wonderful creation, icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks Madhu ji, ab to apke comments dekhne ki itani adat ho chali hai ki kahi najar na ayye to kuch adhura sa lagta hai!!  bahoot bahoot shukaria!!
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«Reply #7 on: July 19, 2009, 08:01:27 PM »
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Achhi rachna hai AAPKI POOJAJI daad kabul kijeeye... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
 kYA PRATIKRIYA VYAKT KARU SOCH RAHA HU ...!
Dil se demaag ki ye kaisi ladaai hai teri....
           Jo huaa he nahi tera,oos se kaisi judaai teri.....
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«Reply #8 on: July 19, 2009, 08:04:08 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 19, 2009, 06:21:09 AM
Dil se hai vinati, meri is vinati per dhayan kar de
Jo nahi hai mera, usko mujhse Juda kar de

Banaya hai is tarah mujhko, khud main alag kar nahi sakti
Per ab dard hua had se bahar, jise ab main aor seh nahi sakti
mujhe per bas itna sa karm kar de
Jo nahi hai Mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…

Pal pal sinchu bagia, her pal chahu sahi rasta
Mujh se mere yah zajbaat, rooh ke yeh armaan
Sab kahi door kar de
Jo nahi hai mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…

Nahi mujhe koi Sukh, leti hu bin baat ke dukh
Mujh se meri yah adat, meri nasamjhi
Sab kahi door kar de
Jo nahi hai Mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…

Waqat apna diye jaatii hu, sahi raste se bhatak jaati hu
zindagi ke asal kaam sare  bhool jaati hu
Mujhko meri khayali dunia chorne per majboor kar de
Jo nahi hai Mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…

Her kisi ko manu apna, per yakinan koi nahi hai apna
Mujh se, mere yah apnepan ke, zajbaat, khatam kar de
Jo nahi hai Mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…

Apnepan ki adat mai, thokar her baar khati hu
Ho jaati hu tanha, tadap ke tere agge atti hu
Ek baar to mujhko, is tadapne se Mukat kar de
Dil se Mangu dua ajj, Mujhko sab se Juda kar de
Jo nahi hai Mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…
Jo nahi hai Mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…
Jo nahi hai Mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…

very nice poojaji.
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«Reply #9 on: July 19, 2009, 09:35:15 PM »
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Quote from: smardia on July 19, 2009, 08:01:27 PM
Achhi rachna hai AAPKI POOJAJI daad kabul kijeeye... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
 kYA PRATIKRIYA VYAKT KARU SOCH RAHA HU ...!
Dil se demaag ki ye kaisi ladaai hai teri....
           Jo huaa he nahi tera,oos se kaisi judaai teri.....

dost ho to app jaise do line mai sari kash-m-kash khatam kar jaaye!! wah kaya gahra jawab diya hai apne do line mai. bahoot khoob!!

Hota nahi koi mera, mai he unko apna maan jaati hu
rahti hu apne khayalo main, magar phir thokar khati hu
manga hai rab se bas itna, meri is adat ko door kar de
jo nahi hai mera, usko mujh se juda kar de
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«Reply #10 on: July 19, 2009, 09:35:54 PM »
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Quote from: Sager4u on July 19, 2009, 08:04:08 PM
very nice poojaji.


Thanks SAGAR JI!!
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«Reply #11 on: July 19, 2009, 09:42:30 PM »
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pooja ji game nahin khele kya
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«Reply #12 on: July 20, 2009, 04:26:18 AM »
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Wah Wah Wah Pooja Ji... Lajawaab peshkash hai!  Bahut achha likha hai aapne! Bahut Bahut Bahut khoob! Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: July 20, 2009, 06:33:38 AM »
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KYA BAAT HAI    POOJA JI.....

AGAR KOI MERI ZINDAGI KA HISAAB LE.
GUM, DOKHE,TANAAI,THOKHEREN,MAYUSI,
PAAIGA MERI ZINDAGI KI KITAAB MAIN.
HEY MAALIK,DIL SE VINATI KARTI HUN TUMSE,
IN BURE SHABDON KO,ZINDAGI SE JUDA KAR DE HUMSE.
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«Reply #14 on: July 20, 2009, 03:49:43 PM »
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Quote from: Deepati on July 20, 2009, 04:26:18 AM
Wah Wah Wah Pooja Ji... Lajawaab peshkash hai!  Bahut achha likha hai aapne! Bahut Bahut Bahut khoob! Applause Applause

Thanks Deepati ji!!
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