Dil se Mangu dua Ajj!!!

by Pooja on July 19, 2009, 06:21:09 AM
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«Reply #15 on: July 20, 2009, 03:50:09 PM »
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Quote from: cara on July 20, 2009, 06:33:38 AM
KYA BAAT HAI    POOJA JI.....

AGAR KOI MERI ZINDAGI KA HISAAB LE.
GUM, DOKHE,TANAAI,THOKHEREN,MAYUSI,
PAAIGA MERI ZINDAGI KI KITAAB MAIN.
HEY MAALIK,DIL SE VINATI KARTI HUN TUMSE,
IN BURE SHABDON KO,ZINDAGI SE JUDA KAR DE HUMSE.



Thanks Cara ji, Nice lines!!
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«Reply #16 on: July 21, 2009, 04:27:09 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 19, 2009, 06:21:09 AM
Dil se hai vinati, meri is vinati per dhayan kar de
Jo nahi hai mera, usko mujhse Juda kar de

Banaya hai is tarah mujhko, khud main alag kar nahi sakti
Per ab dard hua had se bahar, jise ab main aor seh nahi sakti
mujhe per bas itna sa karm kar de
Jo nahi hai Mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…

Pal pal sinchu bagia, her pal chahu sahi rasta
Mujh se mere yah zajbaat, rooh ke yeh armaan
Sab kahi door kar de
Jo nahi hai mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…

Nahi mujhe koi Sukh, leti hu bin baat ke dukh
Mujh se meri yah adat, meri nasamjhi
Sab kahi door kar de
Jo nahi hai Mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…

Waqat apna diye jaatii hu, sahi raste se bhatak jaati hu
zindagi ke asal kaam sare  bhool jaati hu
Mujhko meri khayali dunia chorne per majboor kar de
Jo nahi hai Mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…

Her kisi ko manu apna, per yakinan koi nahi hai apna
Mujh se, mere yah apnepan ke, zajbaat, khatam kar de
Jo nahi hai Mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…

Apnepan ki adat mai, thokar her baar khati hu
Ho jaati hu tanha, tadap ke tere agge atti hu
Ek baar to mujhko, is tadapne se Mukat kar de
Dil se Mangu dua ajj, Mujhko sab se Juda kar de
Jo nahi hai Mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…
Jo nahi hai Mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…
Jo nahi hai Mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…



bahut khhob rachna hai aapki pooja ji. Applause Applause


Jasbaaton ko dil se dhuaa kar de
armaanon ko mun se swahaa kar de
raahein sahi aur such ki chunti raho
anjaam khud-b-khud fir khuda kar de!
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«Reply #17 on: July 21, 2009, 04:25:42 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on July 21, 2009, 12:09:13 PM
Applause Applause Applause  Applause
bahot khoob likha hai Pooja ji
behad achi kavita
i think ispar critics review me comment
karne par aur acha lagta cuz vahan aakhir me
aapka bhi mat aur vichaar milte.
really bejod lajawaab nazam likhi hai aapne
which is not possible to right widout God's grace
cuz jin dard ko sahna mushkil hai poetress has succeeded
in writing that.
nice prayer





bahoot bahoot shukaria Kaash ji.. maine Critic and Review section mai bhi yah Post kar di hai:

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/critics-and-review-only-forum/dil-se-mangu-dua-ajj-t48813.0.html


bahot bahot shukaria apke shabdo ne bahoot honslla badaya hai!! thank you!!
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«Reply #18 on: July 21, 2009, 04:28:00 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on July 21, 2009, 04:27:09 AM

bahut khhob rachna hai aapki pooja ji. Applause Applause


Jasbaaton ko dil se dhuaa kar de
armaanon ko mun se swahaa kar de
raahein sahi aur such ki chunti raho
anjaam khud-b-khud fir khuda kar de!

Apke comments ka hamesha he intzaar rahta hai... aor jab app kisi kavita ke jawab main do lines bhi likh dete hai to dil ko bahoot jayada acha lagta hai!! char linemain sab kah gaye app!! tahe dil se apki shukargujar hu!! aise he sath de kar honslla dete rahiyega!!!!
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«Reply #19 on: July 21, 2009, 07:29:14 PM »
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Bahaut khoob Pooja jee...Wakein bahaut acha likha hai..Applause


Smardia jee apne do lines main behad ghera jawab diya...Applause Bahaut khoob
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«Reply #20 on: July 22, 2009, 09:19:52 AM »
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mujhe per bas itna sa karm kar de
Jo nahi hai Mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…

Well done. Came back to the forum after very very long time. Perhaps these lines worked at the sub-concious level in this cosmic system which brought me here today. I am really very very glad to read it. My personal interpretation, strictly for me, is that God, remove all the unnecessary things from my life, so that I may concentrate on my actual goal, my purpose of life for which you have sent me here. There is a wonderful quotation which I am forgetting now but loosely means that God give me the wisdom to know which is mine and which is not (not restricted to persons). If I am able to recollect or find that I will share it with you

Thanks again, Pooja Ma'm. These lines are going to stay for long with me. No wonder if becomes a part of my daily prayer.

Regards
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«Reply #21 on: July 22, 2009, 04:03:41 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on July 21, 2009, 07:29:14 PM
Bahaut khoob Pooja jee...Wakein bahaut acha likha hai..Applause


Smardia jee apne do lines main behad ghera jawab diya...Applause Bahaut khoob

Thanks Rahim ji!!
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«Reply #22 on: July 22, 2009, 04:06:49 PM »
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Quote from: justmusafir on July 22, 2009, 09:19:52 AM
mujhe per bas itna sa karm kar de
Jo nahi hai Mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…

Well done. Came back to the forum after very very long time. Perhaps these lines worked at the sub-concious level in this cosmic system which brought me here today. I am really very very glad to read it. My personal interpretation, strictly for me, is that God, remove all the unnecessary things from my life, so that I may concentrate on my actual goal, my purpose of life for which you have sent me here. There is a wonderful quotation which I am forgetting now but loosely means that God give me the wisdom to know which is mine and which is not (not restricted to persons). If I am able to recollect or find that I will share it with you

Thanks again, Pooja Ma'm. These lines are going to stay for long with me. No wonder if becomes a part of my daily prayer.

Regards

justmusafir ji,

Apne itna kuch kah diya hai ki samjh nahi aa raha hai kin shabdo se shukaria ada karu main. Meri likhi koi line agar kisi ke bhi kaam aa jaaye to is se bad kar mere liye kuch nahi ho sakta...Bhagwaan ji sabhi ko sahi rasta dikhaye aor extra bhar jo hum insaan bin kisi baat ke sath liye chalte hai unse hume juda kar.. unse milane wale dukho se bachaye....

tahe dil se apki shukarguzar hu ki apne mere likhe ko samjha aor saraha!!!
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«Reply #23 on: July 22, 2009, 05:17:18 PM »
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behad sashkt kavita likhi hai pooja ji.......kahin na kahin is kavita ne sabhi ko bheetar tak chooa hai......bahoot khoob....smardia ji ki do line bhi asardaar thin..aur prateek ji ki bhi...
justmusafir ji ke jawab ko padhne ke baad fir se is kavita ko padha aur man-na pada mujhe ki sachmuch ye kavita adbhut hai.....kya hi khoob samjhaya hai JM ne is kavita ke marm ko......JM ji ko meri taraf se bhi bahoot shukriya
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«Reply #24 on: July 23, 2009, 04:15:10 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on July 22, 2009, 05:17:18 PM
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behad sashkt kavita likhi hai pooja ji.......kahin na kahin is kavita ne sabhi ko bheetar tak chooa hai......bahoot khoob....smardia ji ki do line bhi asardaar thin..aur prateek ji ki bhi...
justmusafir ji ke jawab ko padhne ke baad fir se is kavita ko padha aur man-na pada mujhe ki sachmuch ye kavita adbhut hai.....kya hi khoob samjhaya hai JM ne is kavita ke marm ko......JM ji ko meri taraf se bhi bahoot shukriya

 Thankyou ! Hats off to you!  Bekarar ji!!
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«Reply #25 on: July 23, 2009, 07:13:58 AM »
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The quotations is here:

God grant me the serenity
To accept the things I cannot change;
Courage to change the things I can;
And wisdom to know the difference -Reinhold Niebuhr.

Regards
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«Reply #26 on: July 23, 2009, 08:02:18 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 19, 2009, 06:21:09 AM
Dil se hai vinati, meri is vinati per dhayan kar de
Jo nahi hai mera, usko mujhse Juda kar de

Banaya hai is tarah mujhko, khud main alag kar nahi sakti
Per ab dard hua had se bahar, jise ab main aor seh nahi sakti
mujhe per bas itna sa karm kar de
Jo nahi hai Mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…

Pal pal sinchu bagia, her pal chahu sahi rasta
Mujh se mere yah zajbaat, rooh ke yeh armaan
Sab kahi door kar de
Jo nahi hai mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…

Nahi mujhe koi Sukh, leti hu bin baat ke dukh
Mujh se meri yah adat, meri nasamjhi
Sab kahi door kar de
Jo nahi hai Mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…

Waqat apna diye jaatii hu, sahi raste se bhatak jaati hu
zindagi ke asal kaam sare  bhool jaati hu
Mujhko meri khayali dunia chorne per majboor kar de
Jo nahi hai Mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…

Her kisi ko manu apna, per yakinan koi nahi hai apna
Mujh se, mere yah apnepan ke, zajbaat, khatam kar de
Jo nahi hai Mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…

Apnepan ki adat mai, thokar her baar khati hu
Ho jaati hu tanha, tadap ke tere agge atti hu
Ek baar to mujhko, is tadapne se Mukat kar de
Dil se Mangu dua ajj, Mujhko sab se Juda kar de
Jo nahi hai Mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…
Jo nahi hai Mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…
Jo nahi hai Mera, usko mujh se Juda kar de…

bahut bahut khub pooja di....bahut behtrin likha hai aapne...suna hai k Insaan ko kabhi kabhi insaan ko khud bhi nahi pta hota k use Bhagwan se kya mangna hai...Bhagwan sabko sab khuch dete hai jitna insaan k liye jaruri hota hai...bahut behatrin likha hai aapne... dil ko chu gayi ye dua...
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«Reply #27 on: July 23, 2009, 08:13:59 AM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on July 21, 2009, 04:27:09 AM

bahut khhob rachna hai aapki pooja ji. Applause Applause


Jasbaaton ko dil se dhuaa kar de
armaanon ko mun se swahaa kar de
raahein sahi aur such ki chunti raho
anjaam khud-b-khud fir khuda kar de!
bahugehri baat kahi hai aapne Parteek ji
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«Reply #28 on: July 23, 2009, 03:42:53 PM »
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Quote from: justmusafir on July 23, 2009, 07:13:58 AM
The quotations is here:

God grant me the serenity
To accept the things I cannot change;
Courage to change the things I can;
And wisdom to know the difference -Reinhold Niebuhr.

Regards

Thanks for sharing this with us JustMusafir ji!!
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«Reply #29 on: July 23, 2009, 03:43:31 PM »
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Quote from: poppoetry on July 23, 2009, 08:02:18 AM
bahut bahut khub pooja di....bahut behtrin likha hai aapne...suna hai k Insaan ko kabhi kabhi insaan ko khud bhi nahi pta hota k use Bhagwan se kya mangna hai...Bhagwan sabko sab khuch dete hai jitna insaan k liye jaruri hota hai...bahut behatrin likha hai aapne... dil ko chu gayi ye dua...
           Applause Applause Applause Applause


Thanks Poppoetry ji!!
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