Ek hi pooja hai ek hi azan hai...

by brokenbyluv on March 04, 2010, 01:26:40 PM
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Dosto ye kavita main apne naye ajnabi k liye likh rahi hu jiska zikr kaafi arse se aap merri rachanayo mein padh rahe hai..vo ek muslim hai aur main ek punjabi hu..hum ek honge ya nhi ye tou mujhe nhi pata per uske aane se merre dil mein jo bhi muslim com k baare mein galat bhwana thi vo sab ache mein tabdil ho gayi hai aaj main jaan gayi hu sab khuda k banaye bande hai chahe hindu ho ya musalman,achayi burayi tou har jagah hoti hai..main uski shukra guzar umar bhar rahungi ki usne merre dil mein iss dharam aur mazhab k faasle ko khtam kar diya hai..aur ek hi dua karti hu ki merra ajnabi jahan rahe khush rahe......


Kaun hindu hai kaun musalmaan hai,
merri nazar mein ek hi khuda hai ek hi bagwan hai,

main karti hu mhbt k zariya apne khuda ko yad,
merre liye wahi pooja hai aur wahi azan hai,

jisne karwaya hai mujhe iss khubsurat sach se rubaru,
merri iss haqiqat se vo ab tak anjaan hai,

merra yaar karta hai ibadat apne allah ki,
merre liye uska allah bhi merra imaan hai,

masjid jao ya mandir kya farq padta hai,
dono hi khuda ko bakshne ka ehtesham hai,

pehle nhi janti thi kisi bhi majzab ki gehrayi ko..
per ab jaan gyi hu har dharam ka ek hi ihan hai......

ehtesham-respect,izzat...
ihan-singing sweetly,madhur sur......
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«Reply #1 on: March 04, 2010, 03:25:49 PM »
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Bahut bahut bahut khoob bbl ji.....sach mein...bahut hi nek baatein kahi hai aapne.....hamari bhi yahi dua hai aap dono hamesha khush rahe aur sath rahe..... Thumbs UP Usual Smile
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 04, 2010, 06:26:47 PM »
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Aapki poem bahut achhi lagi BBL ji. Beatiful thoughts. Meri dua hai Rabb aapki jayaz tamannaon ko pura kare. Ye ek haqeeqat hai ke is saari kayenaat, insaan, hawa, paani, drakht, zameen, aasmaan banaane wala sirf aur sirf ek hai. Wo hargiz do nahi ho sakte. Isliye hum sab ka MALIK ek hai aur hum sub usi Ek MALIK ke bande hain.
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«Reply #3 on: March 04, 2010, 07:15:11 PM »
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bahut bahut bahut shukriya nikhar ji aur riyaz ji...
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«Reply #4 on: March 04, 2010, 08:09:04 PM »
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Samjhne k liye shukriya shihab ji..aur maafi ki koi zarurat nhi hai ji...
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«Reply #5 on: March 04, 2010, 08:17:12 PM »
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Bahaut khoob Geet jee...Tariff uss ajnabi ki aur dua ke aap dono saath rahe ager ap dono ki isme bhalayi ho...Ameen!
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«Reply #6 on: March 04, 2010, 08:18:10 PM »
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 :icon_salut:Bahut bahut khoob Geet ji,bahut achi soch aur gaheri baat likhi aapne.too good. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: March 04, 2010, 08:20:58 PM »
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Tahe dil se shukriya rahiim ji n madhu ji...
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«Reply #8 on: March 05, 2010, 05:27:48 AM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Khoob BBL.. Very Nice Thought .. Keep Writing ... and Keep Rocking !
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«Reply #9 on: March 05, 2010, 09:40:15 AM »
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bohut khoobsurat rachna hai aapki bbl ji
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«Reply #10 on: March 05, 2010, 10:59:58 AM »
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shukriya sophi ji n bhawna ji...
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«Reply #11 on: March 05, 2010, 11:12:00 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooob!!!!

Iss Nazm Mein bahut Si Baaton ko Dil Ne Chuaa..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: March 05, 2010, 11:19:04 AM »
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shukriya khwaish ji...
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«Reply #13 on: March 05, 2010, 11:26:00 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI   BROKENBYLUV JI....


EK HI POOJA HAI EK HI ARZAN HAI
EK HI KHUDA EK HI BAGWAAN HAI
EK HI MALIK HAI ISILIYE TOH
HAR MAZHAB KA EK HI JAISE INSAAN HAI..
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«Reply #14 on: March 05, 2010, 11:39:37 AM »
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thnx alot cara ji..aur bahut khoob likha hai ji...

Khuda ne banaya har ek ko ek saa,
dharam ko hisso mein bat'ta tou insaan hai,
maine tou har nazar se dekh liya..
dikhta ek sa hi hai mujhe ye sara jahan hai......
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