Falak Se Toot Ke Girta Hua Sitara Ho.............

by Syed Mohd Mahzar on May 02, 2016, 05:32:59 PM
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KAASH .......AWAAZ HI SAHIL SE UBHARTI KOI
DOOBNE WALE KO...... TINKE KA HI SAHARA HO

 
GOONJTI HAIN MERE KANO'N ME SADAYEIN AKSAR
KISSI NE DOOR SE.... JAYSE MUJHE PUKARA HO

 
SABZ PATTO'N PE...... AA JYE ZARA AUR SHABAAB
AUR SHABNAM NE. GULO'N KO BHI KUCH NIKHARA HO

 
ANDHERI RAAT HO..... CHARO'N TARAF HO SANNATA
FALAK SE......... TOOT KE GIRTA HUA SITARA HO


ISI KO KAHTE HAIN.... HAI KHEL YE MUQADDAR KA
DOOBTI KISHTI HO .......AUR PAAS HI KINARA HO

MILE'N WO GHAIR SE.....ISKA MUJHE MALAAL NAHI
SHART ITNI SI HAI...... K WO FAQAT HAMARA HO

MAIN AASMAAN SE........ TAARE BHI TOR LAUNGA
SAFAR SUHANA HO.... AUR SAATH BHI TUMHARA HO

         ...........Syed Mohd Mahzar
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«Reply #1 on: May 02, 2016, 09:34:32 PM »
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Kyaa baat hai waah waah, dheron daad w/Rau.
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«Reply #2 on: May 03, 2016, 02:54:05 AM »
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Quote from: Syed Mohd Mahzar on May 02, 2016, 05:32:59 PM
KAASH AWAAZ HI SAHIL SE UBHARTI KOI
DOOBNE WALE KO TINKE KA HI SAHARA HO

 
GOONJTI HAIN MERE KANO'N ME SADAYEIN AKSAR
KISSI NE DOOR SE JAYSE MUJHE PUKARA HO

 
SABZ PATTO'N PE AA JYE ZARA AUR SHABAAB
AUR SHABNAM NE GULO'N KO BHI KUCH NIKHARA HO

 
ANDHERI RAAT HO CHARO'N TARAF HO SANNATA
FALAK SE TOOT KE GIRTA HUA SITARA HO


ISI KO KAHTE HAIN HAI KHEL YE MUQADDAR KA
DOOBTI KISHTI HO AUR PAAS HI KINARA HO

MILE WO GHAIR SE ISKA MUJHE MALAAL NAHI
SHART ITNI SI HAI KI WO FAQAT HAMARA HO

MAIN AASMAAN SE TAARE BHI TOR LAUNGA
SAFAR SUHANA HO AUR SAATH BHI TUMHARA HO

         ...........Syed Mohd Mahzar

lajawaab poetry bhai
tareef krne ko shbd nahi mere pass.

ek rau ke saath
dili daad ar mubarakbad qubul ho

aate rahen
muakurate rahen
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«Reply #3 on: May 03, 2016, 05:21:36 AM »
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Quote from: Syed Mohd Mahzar on May 02, 2016, 05:32:59 PM
KAASH AWAAZ HI SAHIL SE UBHARTI KOI
DOOBNE WALE KO TINKE KA HI SAHARA HO

 
GOONJTI HAIN MERE KANO'N ME SADAYEIN AKSAR
KISSI NE DOOR SE JAYSE MUJHE PUKARA HO

 
SABZ PATTO'N PE AA JYE ZARA AUR SHABAAB
AUR SHABNAM NE GULO'N KO BHI KUCH NIKHARA HO

 
ANDHERI RAAT HO CHARO'N TARAF HO SANNATA
FALAK SE TOOT KE GIRTA HUA SITARA HO


ISI KO KAHTE HAIN HAI KHEL YE MUQADDAR KA
DOOBTI KISHTI HO AUR PAAS HI KINARA HO

MILE WO GHAIR SE ISKA MUJHE MALAAL NAHI
SHART ITNI SI HAI KI WO FAQAT HAMARA HO

MAIN AASMAAN SE TAARE BHI TOR LAUNGA
SAFAR SUHANA HO AUR SAATH BHI TUMHARA HO

         ...........Syed Mohd Mahzar

Very very nice....I loved it.
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«Reply #4 on: May 03, 2016, 06:29:28 AM »
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Waah Waah Waah , Baht khubsurat kalaam se nawaza hai Mahzar saheb . Bahut bahut mubarakbaad
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«Reply #5 on: May 03, 2016, 06:44:46 AM »
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Bahot khooob  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: May 03, 2016, 10:54:09 AM »
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KYA BAT HAI BAHOT HI KHOOB.....PEHLI BAR PADH RAHE HAI AAPKO SIR ACCHA LGA PADHKER...
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«Reply #7 on: May 03, 2016, 06:44:24 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: May 04, 2016, 08:20:24 AM »
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Quote from: poojachakarvarti@gmail.co on May 03, 2016, 10:54:09 AM
KYA BAT HAI BAHOT HI KHOOB.....PEHLI BAR PADH RAHE HAI AAPKO SIR ACCHA LGA PADHKER...

Mohtarma Pooja Chakravarty ji,

          Shukrguzar hoon ki aapko meri ghazal pasand aayi, kaafi
dino baad ye ghazal post ki thi, aapko mera kalaam mera naam likh ker
search karne se mil jayega, is group per meri pahli post NAZM "Main
sunaunga zamane ko kahani uski" jo maine apne jawan bhateyje ki maut
per likhi thi parhne ki zahmat kejiyega, isi nazm se meri shayri ki
shruaat hui thi.............

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«Reply #9 on: May 04, 2016, 11:48:22 AM »
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Quote from: Syed Mohd Mahzar on May 02, 2016, 05:32:59 PM

 aansoo sab ke sab meethe koi to kharaa ho...,
 baant  le ge hum koi to ghum kaa maraa ho...,

KAASH .......AWAAZ HI SAHIL SE UBHARTI KOI
DOOBNE WALE KO...... TINKE KA HI SAHARA HO

 
GOONJTI HAIN MERE KANO'N ME SADAYEIN AKSAR
KISSI NE DOOR SE.... JAYSE MUJHE PUKARA HO

 
SABZ PATTO'N PE...... AA JYE ZARA AUR SHABAAB
AUR SHABNAM NE. GULO'N KO BHI KUCH NIKHARA HO

 
ANDHERI RAAT HO..... CHARO'N TARAF HO SANNATA
FALAK SE......... TOOT KE GIRTA HUA SITARA HO


ISI KO KAHTE HAIN.... HAI KHEL YE MUQADDAR KA
DOOBTI KISHTI HO .......AUR PAAS HI KINARA HO

MILE'N WO GHAIR SE.....ISKA MUJHE MALAAL NAHI
SHART ITNI SI HAI...... K WO FAQAT HAMARA HO

MAIN AASMAAN SE........ TAARE BHI TOR LAUNGA
SAFAR SUHANA HO.... AUR SAATH BHI TUMHARA HO

         ...........Syed Mohd Mahzar



waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaah Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: May 06, 2016, 12:54:31 AM »
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Quote from: Syed Mohd Mahzar on May 02, 2016, 05:32:59 PM
KAASH .......AWAAZ HI SAHIL SE UBHARTI KOI
DOOBNE WALE KO...... TINKE KA HI SAHARA HO

waah waah icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
GOONJTI HAIN MERE KANO'N ME SADAYEIN AKSAR
KISSI NE DOOR SE.... JAYSE MUJHE PUKARA HO

main pukaaraa hai kyaa aawaaz bhi nahin pahchaan sake allah raham kare tumhaari haalat pe icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

 
SABZ PATTO'N PE...... AA JYE ZARA AUR SHABAAB
AUR SHABNAM NE. GULO'N KO BHI KUCH NIKHARA HO

yaani ki ishq kaa bhoot her shaye pe hai Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard!

 
ANDHERI RAAT HO..... CHARO'N TARAF HO SANNATA
FALAK SE......... TOOT KE GIRTA HUA SITARA HO

per meri doa hai qismat ka sitaraa naa toote hamesha chamaktaa rahe icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!


ISI KO KAHTE HAIN.... HAI KHEL YE MUQADDAR KA
DOOBTI KISHTI HO .......AUR PAAS HI KINARA HO

waah bahut acha example pesh kiya hai icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

MILE'N WO GHAIR SE.....ISKA MUJHE MALAAL NAHI
SHART ITNI SI HAI...... K WO FAQAT HAMARA HO

patent karwa lo phir kisi ki majaal nahin haq jataane ki Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard!

MAIN AASMAAN SE........ TAARE BHI TOR LAUNGA
SAFAR SUHANA HO.... AUR SAATH BHI TUMHARA HO

achi baat hai ye bhi kar ke dekh leti hoon janaab kitne taare tor kar laate hain Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard!

         ...........Syed Mohd Mahzar


mahzar sahab ache ash'aar apnaa hi andaaz liye hue icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #11 on: May 06, 2016, 08:27:05 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on May 06, 2016, 12:54:31 AM

mahzar sahab ache ash'aar apnaa hi andaaz liye hue icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

Sheeba ji,
              aapka tareef ka ye anokha andaaz hi to mujhe bahut pasand hai isi liye khaas ker aapke comment ki intezar rahta hai, behad shukrguzaar hoon aapkaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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