Khak-e-madeena kismat me likhdo.....(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on March 01, 2009, 01:00:33 PM
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Kya likhu shaan me, main apne nabi* ki
Lafzo ke meri aukaat kya hain
Woh to hain suraj mai diya bhi nahi hu
Main kaise bata du ke woh zaat kya hain

Chamakta hain jiske dam se madeena
Tadapta hain jane ko dil yeh madeena
Kis muh se kahu main, bula lo sarvar-e-aala
Jaha maut aaye woh shehar ho madeena

Pakad kar jaliyo ko hum aasoo bahaye
Gunaho ki apni maghfirat hum paye
Muntazir hain kabse sun dua yeh khudara
Mere aaka muje bhi madina bulaye

Bohat thak gaya hu aaka muje assra dedo
Kadmo me apni thodi jagah mujhko dedo
Koi nahi hain mera ek aapka hain sahara
Khaak-e-madeena kismat me GHAYEL ki  likhdo

-Sajid Ghayel-

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«Reply #1 on: March 01, 2009, 02:39:20 PM »
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brilliant great work mr sajid jab nabi [saws] ke naam aapne naat likhi hai to neech ya oopar sall allaahu alayhi wasallam likhte to achcha hota
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«Reply #2 on: March 01, 2009, 04:02:57 PM »
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Quote from: Zaarah4U on March 01, 2009, 02:39:20 PM
brilliant great work mr sajid jab nabi [saws] ke naam aapne naat likhi hai to neech ya oopar sall allaahu alayhi wasallam likhte to achcha hota

Izzat dene ke liye bohat shukriyaan Zaarah aur maine aapki kahi baat man li aur mafi chahta hu aainda aisi galti nahi hogi.
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«Reply #3 on: March 01, 2009, 04:09:19 PM »
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Subhan Allah, Subhan Allah,.
Allah Hum Sab Ko, Inke Sadqe Tufail Se Najaat De,.

Great Job Mere Bhai, Jitna Bhi Kahoon Kam hai,.

Kyun Ki Sarkaar {SWAS} Pe Kuch Likhna, Har Ek Ki Bas Ki Baat Nahi,.
Aapne Mashallah, Bohat Pyaara Likha Hai Mere Bhai, Main Likhoon, Ye Meri Aukhaat Nahi..

Great Job,.
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«Reply #4 on: March 01, 2009, 04:13:18 PM »
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Kuch comment karne ke kabil nahi mai.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Khuda apko slamat rakhe or hume or padne ka mauka de!
Ameen!
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«Reply #5 on: March 01, 2009, 04:25:16 PM »
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Assalam walaikkum Sajid ji,

Masha Allah..
Apka bohot_bohot shukriya, Jo apne hum sab ke dil ko sukoon ata karne wali nazm se ru_ba_ru karwaya, apse request karti hun, ke aage bhi aap ,NAAT PAAK,HAMD, etc ko post kare.

AAYA HAI RAHE RAST DIKHANAIN KE WASITAY
BANDON KO UN KE RAB SE MILANAIN KE WASITAY
BUNIYAD BUT KADON KI GIRANAIN KE WASITAY
RASMON RIWAJ KUFR MITANAIN KE WASITAY
INSAN KO BANDAGI KA SALEEQA SIKHAY GA
YEH NOOR ZULMATON KO UJALAY BANAY GA

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«Reply #6 on: March 02, 2009, 04:20:49 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on March 01, 2009, 04:09:19 PM
Subhan Allah, Subhan Allah,.
Allah Hum Sab Ko, Inke Sadqe Tufail Se Najaat De,.

Great Job Mere Bhai, Jitna Bhi Kahoon Kam hai,.

Kyun Ki Sarkaar {SWAS} Pe Kuch Likhna, Har Ek Ki Bas Ki Baat Nahi,.
Aapne Mashallah, Bohat Pyaara Likha Hai Mere Bhai, Main Likhoon, Ye Meri Aukhaat Nahi..

Great Job,.

Bohat bohat shukriyaan chote......Khuda hame madeena shehar me jald se jald pohcha de

Quote from: salma786 on March 01, 2009, 04:13:18 PM
Kuch comment karne ke kabil nahi mai.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Khuda apko slamat rakhe or hume or padne ka mauka de!
Ameen!

Bohat shukriyaa salma.......

Quote from: Roja on March 01, 2009, 04:25:16 PM
Assalam walaikkum Sajid ji,

Masha Allah..
Apka bohot_bohot shukriya, Jo apne hum sab ke dil ko sukoon ata karne wali nazm se ru_ba_ru karwaya, apse request karti hun, ke aage bhi aap ,NAAT PAAK,HAMD, etc ko post kare.

AAYA HAI RAHE RAST DIKHANAIN KE WASITAY
BANDON KO UN KE RAB SE MILANAIN KE WASITAY
BUNIYAD BUT KADON KI GIRANAIN KE WASITAY
RASMON RIWAJ KUFR MITANAIN KE WASITAY
INSAN KO BANDAGI KA SALEEQA SIKHAY GA
YEH NOOR ZULMATON KO UJALAY BANAY GA

(NM)




Itni khoobsurat dad ke liye bohat bohat shukriyaan roja....aur main zaroor koshih karuga ke aage bhi naat aur hamd likha karu
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«Reply #7 on: March 02, 2009, 04:51:34 AM »
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Chaloo madina chalen , chaloo madina chalen !!

Mere aaqa ki shaan baadi niraali hai !!
Gumbad-a- qidra bhi kitni  pyari hai !!
Unke dar pe  hazroo sawali hai !!
Eak wohi to zaath sab se aali hai !!

Mere aaqa ki shaan badi niraali hai !!
Gumbad-a-qidra bhi kitni pyaari hai !!

Chaloo madina chalen , chalo madina chalen !!

Ab karde meri ye hasrath bhi proi !!
Bharde rahematon se ab meri bhi jholi !!
Dekha de mujhe ab manzar madine ka !!
Aankh meri bhi muddath se pyaasi hai !!

Mera aaqa ki shaan badi niraali hai !!
Gumbad-a- qidra bhi kitni pyaari hai !!

Chaloo madina chalen , chaloo madina chalen !!

Meri duvaun ka khuch to sila de de !!
Unke pairoon me mujhe bhi jaga de de !!
Dekha de mujhe bhi wo gaar-a- hira !!
Wo jannath-ul baaqi wo safa-marwa !!
Wo taif ki pahadi ab mujhe bhi dekha de !!
aabe zam-zam se ab mujhe bhi nahela de !!

tere  gunhahon ki Kahani  Qadeer Unhe hi sunani hai !!

chaloo madina chalen , chalo madina chalen !!


mere aaqa ki shaan badi niraali hai !!
gumbad-a-qidra bhi kitni pyaari hai !!

chaloo madina chalen , chalo madina chalen !!


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«Reply #8 on: March 11, 2009, 07:21:21 AM »
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Subhan_allah chote kitni pyari naat share ki hain. Jisne bhi yeh naat likhi hain Khuda us shaks ko achchi sehat aur bohat lambi umar de. AAMEEN
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«Reply #9 on: March 11, 2009, 10:28:50 AM »
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Sab ko Eid-milad-un-Nabi ki bohot bohot mubarakbad !!

Bohot Khoob Sajid Ji Bohot hi khoobsurat likha hai aapne...!!

Beautiful Na'at...Nice sharing Azeem.
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«Reply #10 on: March 12, 2009, 10:26:04 AM »
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Shukriya Talat Sis,.
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«Reply #11 on: March 12, 2009, 02:50:02 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on March 11, 2009, 10:28:50 AM
Sab ko Eid-milad-un-Nabi ki bohot bohot mubarakbad !!

Bohot Khoob Sajid Ji Bohot hi khoobsurat likha hai aapne...!!

Beautiful Na'at...Nice sharing Azeem.


Thank u Talat but i really wish u could have something too in this thread.
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